MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 72

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update n thnxx for pm me

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Part- 102


Maan goes and checks on Aditi....

Aditi is sleeping happily, Maan goes and lies down beside her and he too falls asleep hugging his little princess....

Geet lies there feeling numb and all shocked by Maan's words....

Maan has very smartly brought Geet into the playing field and he has sneakily put the flags on her hands.... Now Geet has to start the game while Maan is playing the underdog role....

Geet can't accept defeat for she is up for the challenge but she is not used to initiating the game..... She'll not be pleading for it, she is Geet Handa...

She is already feeling guilty that she has acted too desperate this time.....

Geet knows that she has come to the point where there is no way to return, as if she wants to return?

But she would like Maan to take her along and help her cross the finish line, but this Maan is taking revenge for no mistake of hers, this is not fair, galthi toh Maan karega aur saza Geet ko dega?

This is not less than a punishment, haina?

Geet gathers the courage to go and look for Maan....

Geet toh isse aaj hi, abhi hi katam karna chahthi hai....

She thinks she can talk to Maan and convey her feelings easily....

She just goes to tell Maan that she is looking forward to everything...

Geet feels that it's not the right choice of words....

She should just open up more... Let's first start talking.... Everything will all fall to their respective places on their own... Haina?

Geet strolls and finally reaches her room....

Geet gets in and starts looking for Maan....

She finds him sleeping with Aditi.... Geet goes and sleeps on the other side....

Whatever it may be Geet is genuinely happy after so many years...

Next morning Geet over sleeps while Maan has taken care of Aditi letting Geet enjoy her regained happiness....

Geet wakes up and finds that Maan and Aditi are up already and she is the late Latif today....

But Geet doesn't feel guilty or worried for it's just the three of them and Geet knows Maan is there to take care of Aditi for that matter Maan is there for Geet too....

It feels so good to sleep peacefully knowing that there is someone behind your back to hold you when need be and you can be yourself without worrying about anything...

Geet thinks about last night and is smiling like a fool.... But the moment she realises how Maan has fooled her into that stupid challenge Geet starts thinking about her next move...

Hare babaji, subhe subhe mein kya soch rahi hoon?

Iss Maan ne toh mujhe pagal banake rakha hai aur kudh aaram se maza le rahe hai....

Pehle mein jaake iss baat ko abhi katam karthi hoon.....

Geet just heads out and finds Maan waiting for her all ready to jog...

He has even got Aditi ready....

Maan: good morning Geet, come on jaldhi change karke aao, u shouldn't miss your jogging, dekho Aditi bhi tummare liye wait kar rahi hai

Geet can't believe that Maan is acting as if nothing happened last night.....

Geet gets back to her room, hurriedly brushes and gets ready for her jog....

Geet jog karthe karthe Maan se baat kar legi....haina?

The happy family starts their morning jogging together.....

Maan looks so happy that he has finally become a family man....

Geet is thinking deeply searching for the right words to win the challenge against Maan....

Maan: Geet, itna kyun soch rahi ho? roz aaise hi thoda thoda mehnat karoge toh you will get back to your old shape soon

Maan pauses letting Geet move ahead of him so that he can take a good look of her....

Geet is puzzled like what he is up to next.....

Maan holds her waist from behind suddenly....

Geet is startled....

Maan: waise tum itna bhi moti nahi hui hai, but I am missing that patli kamar, you know what I mean, Maan slightly tightens his hold and whispers in her ears..."Janam samjha Karo"......

Maan just wants Geet to take care of her fitness, she has been neglecting it since 5 years and it has taken a toll on her body....

Maan wants her to start loving herself again....

Maan knows very well that Geet would rather want Maan to love her.....

Geet pareshaan ho jaathi ki ye kya nayi musibat hai.... Iss Maan ko Geet kaise sambalthi?....

Geet: Aditi, rukh jao

Geet pretends not to be affected and runs after Aditi pushing Maan away.....

Maan can feel her blushing even though he can't see her directly....

Maan just wants Geet to be happy.... Nothing else matters to him more...

At breakfast.....

Geet tries to talk to Maan....

Geet: aap kaun ho?

Maan: ye kaise sawaal hai Geet? Iss ka jawab toh tumme patha haina?

Geet: aap mujhe distract mat karo, warna mein bhool jaoongi ke mujhe kya kehna hai

Maan: tum kya kehna chahthi ho Geet? Tum toh mujhe confuse kar rahi ho

Geet: pehle mere sawal ka jawab do, aap kaun ho?

Maan: Mein?

Geet: nahi mein

Maan: tum Geet ho

Geet: Maaaaaaaan?

Maan: achcha mein Maan Singh Khurana hoon

Geet: isski koi kami nahi hai, jab dekho MSK MSK, koi apne hi naam ko aaise japtha hai kya?

Maan: achcha tum hi bathao ki mein kaun hoon phir?

Geet: aap Maan ho

Maan: ab Maan hoon, lagtha hai jaldh hi Maan se Mahaan ho jaoonga

Geet: abhi bhi aap samjhte hai ki aap Mahaan devtha ho

Maan: maantha hoon ki mein koi Bhishma pithama nahi ban saktha, lekhin Geet 5 saal ka brahmacharya bhi mahaan kaam hotha hai

Geet: aap aaise hi vishwamitra banke goomoge toh Bhishma bhi banjaoge

Maan: dekhte hai koi Mohini milthi bhi ya nahi?

Geet: achcha aapko Mohini chahiye?

Maan: chahne mein kya hai Geet?

Geet apne aap se baat karthi...."kya mein koi Mohini se kam hoon?"... She takes a look at herself....

Maan smiles looking at her so concerned.....

Maan says to himself.... "Waise tum bhi kissi Mohini se kam nahi lagti ho Geet"...

Geet: kya soch rahe ho?

Maan: mein apne Mohini ki barein mein soch raha tha

Geet thinks that Maan has someone in his mind.....

Geet: aane do uss Mohini ko, mein bhi dekhti hoon ki woh mujhse bachke aap se kaise milthi?

Maan: tum 24*7 mere saath nahi hogi Geet

Geet: toh kya?

Maan: toh kuch nahi Geet

Geet begins to think..... Iska kya matlab?

Geet: mere hothe hue aap ko koi Mohini nahi milne wali, samjhe aap?

Geet tries to warn Maan....

Maan: Geet, tum kya kehna chahthi ho? Mujhe toh kuch samajh mein nahi aaya

Geet: koi nasamajh ne ki natak karein toh log kya samjaye usse

Maan: mein natak kartha hoon? I can't even imagine that I could ever act like you, you have become a pro in acting Geet, even I got confused in the beginning

Geet: aap aaise mujhe confuse mat karo, babaji ab mein inhhe kaise samjaoon?

Geet starts thinking of another plan....

Now what Geet is up to?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 4 years ago

102

very nice update

enjoy reading very much

due to maan's teasing geet not able to put her feeling in front of maan

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Maan enjoying and teasing geet by showing he not understanding geet talk

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Part 102

nice update....well written

at least Maan got Geet thinking....

she is ready to move ahead.....

glad Geet is happy and at peace

Maan loves to tease and annoy Geet

she wants to confess her feelings

nice seeing them enjoy as a family

update soon


thanks for the pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

kya geet maan ko ek aur mauka degi..............yahan toh ulta hogaya............geet ayi thi baat karne aur maan ne apne mein hi usse samah liye........


lovely update............


loved it..........

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bechari geet...........phans gayi maan k jaal mein..........abb toh gayi kaam se.............


lovely update..............


loved it................

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part - 103


At Mumbai…

Gayathri is recovering fast…

Pari comes back from Pune and stays at the hotel…

Dev calls Pari…

Pari: hai Dev?

Dev: when did you come back?

Pari: I just came last night, thanks for the pass

Dev: you could have informed me

Dev sounds a bit disappointed…

Pari: ohh I wanted to be alone

Pari is still thinking about the past….

Dev can understand her… she needs to be with friends right now…

Dev: ok bye

Pari is staying in the room itself…

She didn’t even feel like eating lunch…

She is just lying on the bed idle not sure of what to do…

She hears the doorbell ringing… Pari opens the door and is surprised to see Dev standing there….

Dev: good noon Pari

Pari: Dev? What are you doing here?

Dev: I have got you the Mumbai special vada pav

Pari: how do you know that I haven’t eaten?

Dev: shall I answer that inside the room?

Pari is blocking the way…

She steps aside and let’s Dev in…

Dev: I know how it feels when you lose your love

Pari: oh hey, did you call Geet? What’s she doing in Delhi?

Dev: hmm, she is in Hoshiarpur

Pari: what?

Dev: it’s her hometown

Pari: did she go back to her home?

Dev: no, she has gone with Maan, they had gone to visit her Nani, they are stuck there

Pari: oh, just like me

They have the lunch together….

Pari: thanks Dev for the yummy treat

Dev: so what’s your plans?

Pari: nothing, wait for a pass back to Delhi

Dev: it’ll take a couple of days

Pari: I know

Dev: are you going to stay here until then?

Pari: I’m afraid I have to

Dev: not necessary

Pari: I don’t understand

Dev: pack your bags, we’ll go home

Pari: but Dev, I’m fine here

Dev: it’s not safe to stay here, they can close anytime

Pari: Annie didi called, she asked me to stay at Maan’s apartment, I will go there

Dev: you need not stay alone, I mean, it’s not a good idea to stay alone given your mental condition

Pari: what do you mean? You think I’ve lost it?

Dev: no, not in that sense, you are feeling low now, you can come and stay with us

Dev looks at Pari for a while….

Dev: I think you won’t mind staying with us?

Pari: oh no, not a problem

Dev: ok then let’s go

Pari goes to the khanna house with Dev….

Gayathri is surprised to see her but she is happy as long as Dev is happy….

Pari: halo aunty, Pari

Dev: mom, ye Geet ki friend hai

Gayathri: oh, tum Geet se milne aaye ho?

Dev: haan mom, par iss pandemic mein ye yahan phass gayi aur Geet Delhi mein

Gayathri: patha nahi ye kya ho gaya hai, mein toh aaise pehle bar dekh rahi hoon

Pari: aap ki tabiyat ab kaise hai aunty?

Gayathri: babaji ki kripa se mujhe kuch nahi hua, ek sardhi ko lekar Dev toh kamakaam pareshaan ho gaya

Pari: aaj kal log sardhi se hi bahut darthe haina

Gayathri: zamaana kaise badal gaya hai

Pari: haina?

Dev: mom, Pari will stay here for a couple of days

Gayathri: bahut achche beta

Gayathri keeps looking at Pari….

Pari is little nervous for she doesn’t know how Gayathri would welcome her staying in her home….

Gayathri: Pari beta, aap Geet ke room mein reh sakte hai

Dev: haan Pari

Dev takes her to Geet’s room…

Pari looks at the pictures of Dev with Aditi….

Pari: you must be missing them

Dev: I miss Aditi a lot

Pari: what about Geet?

Dev thinks for a while….

Dev: do you still miss Karan?

Pari: very much

Pari has got her answers too…

Dev: ok then, you take rest

Dev leaves….

Pari can understand Dev’s plight…

She wonders how Dev has been such a big support for Geet without any expectations…

Dev is so understanding and has been patiently waiting for Geet to forget her past …

Geet is really struggling to come out of her past, though she seems to be upset with her former partner, unknowingly she is still somehow attached to him, how couldn’t she? Aditi is a live memory of her past, haina?

As they say, it’s impossible to forget your first love…

Edited by ghsp2fan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 102


Fabulous and Charming


Maan is happy that finally Geet is happy and she is thinking

about him

she so cutely wants to discuss with him as now she realized he challenged her

but again Maan teases and plays around

he is also somewhat serious about her weight , well its always great to take care

of one's self and I think once Geet has Maan in her life fully she will concerntrate

on herself too

she has been happy and relaxed too which is great

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