MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 74

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Posted: 4 years ago

Am I dreaming or did geet really try to seduce maan and want to get together with him?? Wow wow. So glad she decided to take steps. Loved all the crazy things she tried. But what self control maan has especially in the tshirt and shower

felt so much for Maan when he became emotional when geet told Aditi about maan being papa. Poor guy. Really wanted that geet gives him a chance and now she is

how are they going yo tell dev now

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part - 105

At Mumbai….

The next day morning…..

Pari goes down and finds Gayathri sitting and enjoying her morning tea…

Pari: good morning aunty

Gay: morning beta, kal raat teek se soye haina?

Pari: ji aunty, I feel like I’m at home

Gay: aap Geet ki friend ho toh ye aap ke ghar hi hai

Pari: that’s so sweet of you aunty

Gay: ye lo beta, chai piyo

Pari takes a cup….

Gay: patha nahi Geet kab aayenge aur ye sab teek kab hoga

Pari: aap chinta mat karo, ye toh jaldh hi katam ho jayega

Gay: aap hi Geet ko samjao, hum toh unko samjha samjha ke tak chuke hai

Pari doesn’t have any clue about what Gayathri is saying….

Pari: woh aunty, mein kuch samjhi nahi

Gay: ye aapki friend Geet patha nahi kab sadhi karke humme retirement denge

Pari: shadhi?

Pari is pretty doubtful if Gayathri knows anything at all about Geet and Dev.... Poor her…

Gay: hare bagwan, aajkal ke bache shadhi ke batein mein sochte hi nahi

Pari: par abhi kya jaldhi hai?

Gay: bahut intezaar kiya humne bhi, ab aur nahi, ab toh pata nahi hummare paas aur kitne din baki hai

Pari: aap toh abhi bhi bahut young ho auntyji

Gay: hummare jawaani ko chodna, unke jawaani aaise hi intezaar mein kaat na jaaye

Pari: par abhi lockdown haina

Gay: humme toh kuch samajh mein nahi aatha, aur aap shadhi kab kar rahe hai?

Pari is taken aback... even her parents haven’t asked her about it….

Pari: woh, mein

Gay: Aajkal ke bache shadhi se itna kyun darthe hai?

Pari goes speechless….

Gay: lagtha hai aap ko koi achcha ladkha nahi mila abhi tak

Pari: woh, milla tha, par abhi nahi hai

Gay: woh bhi aapko chodke chala gaya hai kya?

Pari: nahi, iss duniya se chala gaya

Gay goes and hugs Pari….

Gay: bagwan aapko hamesha kush rakhe

Pari feels the warmth in her hug and is overwhelmed with emotion…

Pari: Geet sahi kehthi thi, aap bahut achche ho

Gay: aap kabhi apne aapko akhele mat samajhna, hum sab hai aap ke saath, aap dekhna, babaji jaldh hi aapko ek achcha saathi se milayenge

Just then Dev comes…

Gay: aap bhi hummari Geet ki tarah hi hai, aap ko kuch bhi chahiye toh humme bathana

Pari: thanks auntyji

Gayathri leaves for her pooja….

Dev: good morning

Pari: good morning Dev

Dev: subhe subhe maa ne tumme bore toh nahi kiya?

Pari: not at all, in fact I feel very relieved after talking with her

Dev: that’s good

Pari: she is such a sweet lady

Dev smiles…: that she is

Dev is surprised that Pari got along well with Gayathri….

Dev looks at Pari not able to believe how she is not bothered by Gayathri’s winning…

Dev: it’s pretty tough to understand women’s psychology

Pari: don’t even try, b’coz you people are far far behind when it comes to emotional quotient

Dev smiles….

Dev: I give up ladies

Dev bows down….

Pari laughs at his actions…

Pari keeps staring him….

Pari: thanks Dev

Dev: for what?

Pari: for everything

Dev: I don’t think I did anything extraordinary

Pari: you and aunty are too good, I felt like home here

Dev: that’s what family is for, haina?

Pari: thank you once again for all the love, you don’t know how much it all means to me

Dev: I’m happy that I could be of some kind of help for you

Pari: I have learnt a lot from you, you made me realize something huge, I now understand that Karan is not there however I wish otherwise

Dev: it’s really tough for you, but it’s great that you have started accepting the reality

Pari: can I tell you something

Dev: sure

Pari: at least I know for sure that Karan is not there, but it’s a lot more complicated for you I believe

Dev: maybe

Dev smiles….

Pari: Geet is there yet not there for you, I mean you know that already, haina?

Dev: hmmm

There is a moment of silence when both of them think about their personal experiences…

It seems to be a lot similar…

Basically they are at the same point in their lives though they had taken different roads… all alone yearning for love…

Pari: can I ask you something personal?

Dev: what?

Pari: how did you meet Geet?

Dev gets excited to share his mind with someone at last…

Dev goes back to the past …

Dev tells Pari about his first ever crush and how his love started taking new forms summer after summer…

Pari is overwhelmed to hear his love story and realizes Dev’s plight immediately…

Pari: I know it will be impossible to get over your first love, haina?

Dev: that is always special and those lovely memories are there to stay with you forever no matter what happens with you later

Dev pauses and looks a bit disappointed…..

Pari: what happened Dev?

Dev must have got a lot of patience to have been waiting for such a long time…

But why does he sound hopeless and heart broken all of a sudden?

Pari is curious to know what happened in between after they had happily announced their wedding….

Dev goes into deep thinking….

He doesn’t look to be happy or sad…

He seems to have mastered the art of taking everything neutral….

Dev: destiny happened

Dev looks at her and smiles sarcastically….

Pari: I don’t understand

Dev: I mean, life had other plans for Geet, I had to step back even before taking the first step

Pari: Geet married someone else?

Dev: no exactly, I don’t know much about it, I heard he left her and Aditi

Pari: that’s too bad, Geet is so lucky that you are there for her always

Dev: but that’s not everything

Pari: matlab?

Dev: I have realised that my love could never replace Geet’s past love, never ever

Pari: why did you decide to marry Geet?

Dev is stunned… he stares at Pari for a while…..

Dev: why would you ask something like that?

Pari: you only said that Geet is yet to forget her past

Dev: hmm

Pari: you didn’t answer me?

Dev: I don’t know, this time it was Geet’s decision

Pari: do you think she has taken a fair decision?

Though Pari doesn’t know about Geet’s hidden feelings for her first love, she knows the very obvious fact that she has no romantic interest in Dev for sure….

Pari has seen that Geet was totally transformed when she came to Delhi…

She was always restless and looked emotionally very vulnerable and weak, which is not what Geet used to be at Mumbai… the mentally strong and resilient Geet that Pari had known went missing…

She looked pretty worried and remained mostly in a confused state not able to enjoy with the others at the wedding….

She seemed to be scared of the wedding party which is totally strange for someone who just decided to get married to her long time beau…

Dev is silent… he knows the answer though….

Pari: I know it’s hard, but sometimes it’s better to let go, haina?

Dev looks at Pari in disbelief…

Pari: I think it’s time for us to let go of what is not ours

Dev is astonished to see Pari giving him life lessons… but they are true and have just given him a reality check…

It’s time to wear his thinking hat…

Gayathri comes with the Aarthi….

Gay: babaji, inn donon ki shadi jaldhi karwado, warna ye log aaise hi reh jayenge

Dev: mom, kam se kam mehmaan ko toh chod do na

Gay: aaise kaise? Ye bhi hummari apni hai, koi parayi nahi, haina?

Pari: ji aunty

Dev let’s the two ladies continue their chitchat and leaves….

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Posted: 4 years ago

So glad pari talked to Gayatri. Now she has also made dev realize geet is not his and can never be. Just like he made her realize she needs to let go of the past

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 105

splendid update.... greatly written

liked that Pari and Gayatri are bonding

it will make things easier

glad that Pari confronted Dev

loved her advice to Dev

hope he heeds it

Pari and Dev are good for each other

update soon


thanks for the pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Pari feel home in presence of gayatri and she told dev what he made pari to understand that let go what is not ours and cleared his mind about geet that she will never b his

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Posted: 4 years ago

105

dev is surprise to see pari n gayatri are comfortable with each other.

after knowing about dev n geet's past pari ask him to let go the past

as both are in same situation

pari remember how different geet is in Delhi from mumbai

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Posted: 4 years ago

So Pari is comfortable with Dev mother.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update n thnxx for pm me

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part – 106

At Hoshiarpur….

Geet wakes up to find out that Maan has woken up before her….

She smiles thinking about the last night encounter… she automatically blushes…

She then remembers that she has left Aditi to sleep alone in the next room…

Last night the two of them were talking for so long…

Geet rested her head on Maan’s arm and kept looking at the happiness in his face often, as he kept talking endlessly about Aditi...

Geet realized Maan would not have stayed away from Aditi for even a single day, had he known about her birth…

Maan wrapped his arms around her and kept her close to himself as if he would lose her again….

Geet doesn’t even know when she fell asleep…

Geet quickly runs to check on Aditi but she is not in the room…

Geet then understands that she is with her papa….

She goes out and find them chatting and laughing as they jog in the garden….

Geet sits relaxed in the veranda and happily watches the father-daughter jodi enjoying each other’s company….

Geet wishes that she gets to wake up to witness such a beautiful morning everyday…..

Maan notices Geet in a while and asks her to come and join them….

Geet asks Maan to continue their jog while she will get the morning tea ready…

Geet doesn’t want to ruin Maan’s lovely time with his daughter….

Maan has newly become Aditi’s rightful father and that is clearly reflecting in his face….

The happiness of proudly owning his daughter is written all over his face…

Later, Geet takes Aditi to give her a bath…

Maan who comes in search of Aditi finds her in the washroom with Geet…

Maan goes to help Geet…

Geet is sitting on the stool while Aditi is standing in front of her…

Geet is holding her hands and applying soap….

Maan goes and stands behind Aditi….

Maan gets the soap from Geet and asks her to hold Aditi strongly while he will do the soaping…

Maan asks Aditi to close her eyes while he would apply soap on her face…

Aditi closes her eyes….

Maan starts to apply soap on Geet’s hands instead…

Geet is embarrassed….

Geet: Maan, kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: mein tummara madat kar raha hoon Geet

Geet can’t pull her hands back for she is holding Aditi…

Geet: aap jao, aap ki madat ho koi zaroorat nahi

Maan: Aditi, Geet mujhe baga rahi hai, aap bathao, kya mein aapki madat karoon ya nahi?

Aditi: haan aap hi karo, Geet hamesha mere aankh mein soap dalthi hai, par app nahi dalthe

Geet is shocked for Maan has not applied soap on Aditi’s face na…

Maan has taught Aditi to call Geet by her name…

Geet: chalo pani fall, jaldhi

Maan pours water on Geet’s hand…

Geet: Maaaan

Maan is having a good time….

Geet snatches the mug from Maan and asks him to go and wait outside…

Maan leaves reluctantly…

Geet brings Aditi and she is drying her hair covering her head with the towel…

Aditi is crying and not letting Geet touch her head….

Geet: Maan, kya dekh rahe ho? ab issko sambhal lo na

Geet asks for trouble on her own…

Maan goes and hugs Geet from behind…

Geet freezes…

Maan: mein kartha hoon na Geet, Aditi toh bahut achchi bachi hai, tum pyaar se karo toh woh nahi royegi

He gets the towel from Geet and starts to dry Aditi’s hair…

Aditi slowly stops crying… Geet is astonished….

Geet doesn’t what is doing in the middle…

Geet turns around and tries to get out of Maan’s arms…

Maan wouldn’t let her go…

Maan moves forward to lessen the gap between them so that Geet is trapped ….

Geet hugs him tight and kisses his chest…

Maan forgets himself for a second when Geet cleverly escapes…

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 104


Beautiful Update


I loved Geet's efforts of making Maan

realize she is happy and wants them to be a family

the cutest part was in the shower but yes she wearing a towel

and screaming for Maan

oh he is so smart knowing what she is up to

when Geet speaks to Aditi indirectly speaking to Maan

it was the most beautiful

finally Geet and Maan are together and confessed their love

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