MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 7

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part - 12

Present times.... Mumbai....

Maan is happy to work with Dev though he is not a fan of him...

Everyone knows the reason... His wife Geet is an active partner in his business.... Maan gets to meet her finally... It's not that he is desperate.. you know MSK' s big ego...

Maan couldn't stop himself from thinking about his past encounters with Geet.....

There is something about her that disturbs him a lot... He is pained to see her hurt... he just wants to put a smile on her face... He only wishes to see her happy free of any burdens just like any other girl her age....

What Geet likes the most is the way he takes his own rights in her life like he is not a stranger but someone very close to her... When her own family doesn't understand her feelings here is someone whom she can rely like family..

Maan gets ready to go meet this Dev Khanna in his office... He has promised to give them the office space for KC.... It's an official meeting, so nothing personal should hinder the launch of KC...

Maan is here for Vicky and not for anyone else... Haina?

Maan calls Vicky to give the news of the availability of an office space and that he is sure that it would be finalized...

Vicky: halo bro, how are you? It's such a pleasant surprise, you are back? I knew you can't stay away from us, and

Vicky pauses... He knows Maan hates to revisit the past... But Vicky always considered Geet as his babhi.. you know it's like they are destined to be together...

Vicky is with his new bride Tara at his in-laws enjoying their hospitality for their new Damad...

He doesn't have any knowledge about Maan's change of plans...

Maan: Vicky, I know you are enjoying your married life, I didn't want to disturb you, but it's your business, you should know everything about it, I'm here only for the launch and then it's up to you, I know you would smash it

Vicky quickly assumes that it should be one of dadi's plans and he has to play with it accordingly... so she successfully stopped Maan... She kept looking forward to this day for so long....

Dadi is the official match maker of the khurana pariwar... Be it Arjun or Tara, it's always dadi's choice and it never fails... She picked Yamuna for Mohan... Only this Madan's different and Maan is his blood.. he should be different too... haina?

Maan: Vicky, are you listening?

Vicky: haan bro, I know my bro, you are the best, I think I can enjoy my vacation, haina?

Maan too thinks that Vicky should be kept out of this... He is lucky and he should enjoy his newly married life...

Maan: ok Vicky, you carry on, bye

Vicky: thanks bro, bye

Maan calls Adi but Adi is struck with M.bhai.... Maan can't wait and he goes to the United builders office....

Dev is happy to see them... He wants Geet to meet them... He calls Geet who is busy with the document works... Dev is always a step ahead..

Dev: Maan, I want to meet someone special, she is the real force behind our business, I'm just the namesake boss, be it business or family women are better bosses, I think you would agree

How would Maan agree, he is always his own boss, business or family it's always been his call... That's what has made all the difference... Geet is with Dev for a reason....

Maan: let's go see the spot

Dev smiles...: Ok then, if you insist

Dev makes a call and someone comes...

Maan is not surprised as he knew he would definitely meet her but Geet is shocked to see Maan instead of Vicky....

Dev: Geet, meet Maan, from KC

Geet: welcome to United builders Mr. Maan

Maan: Maan Singh Khurana

Dev is puzzled looking at their formal greetings.... Maan is like that only... He is always the no nonsense guy just focusing on his business... But Dev is the opposite... He likes to make friends with everyone... Be it the mailman or the watchman... He is always approachable and friendly... That's his business mantra.. whoever meets him once would always want to continue their bonding with him.. this has given him a lot of loyal clients...

Dev: Geet, Maan is our friend, your can call him Maan, haina Maan?

Maan: I don't have any preferences

Geet: that's your problem

Dev: come on guys, this is not happening, I have a meeting with the event manager, Geet he's all yours now

Geet is stunned.... So history repeats... Geet and the MSK... This time she is not that clueless abala nari that Maan could take for granted.... Now he would meet the real Geet....

Dev leaves and it's just the two of them now....

Maan: I don't have a problem, I think you might have a problem like always

Geet knows what he is referring to...

Geet: we'll find out who has a problem soon

Geet goes to find the driver but Dev has gone with the driver... He hates driving in the peak hours of Mumbai...

She has to go with Maan.... Dev keeps calling Geet often to discuss about the birthday party...

Maan is not happy to see her chatting with Dev every couple of minutes... She used to kill him with her silence but now she is so happy talking to this Dev non stop.... It's not about Geet, it's Dev, he can't stop talking.... That's his character...

Maan: I don't think you are interested in coming, you should have gone with Dev

Maan can't keep quiet....

Geet: it's not about my interest, it's about Dev, I'm here only for him

Maan thinks..... I know Geet... it's about Dev and Dev only, I'm also not here for you....

Geet now prefers talking to Dev... She knows that it's not getting any better talking with the MSK....

Geet: Dev can you share the location details?

Geet could easily be the navigator but she doesn't like the driver much...

Dev: Geet you know the route

Geet: Dev, your friend is new to Mumbai, you better send him the location details

Dev sends Maan the details... Now Maan understands that Geet is not comfortable talking to him... It hurts, there was a time when she enjoyed listening to him.....

They reach the site and Geet gets off quickly and goes in not waiting for Maan... She pretends to be busy talking on the phone while their manager comes and takes Maan to the office space that Dev wants KC to take...

Maan also likes the place... It's in prime location and it would be impossible for them to get a better place...

Maan tells the manager that he is ready to take it and asks him to proceed with the formalities...

The manager then takes Maan to the reception where Geet is waiting with the documents...

She signs the agreement for United builders while Maan signs for KC...

She didn't even think for a second or talk with Dev before signing... It's the kind of faith that Dev has in Geet... That faith that the MSK lacks...

Maan is surprised by her invincible command over the proceedings... This is not the Geet he knows... She is not that Geet easily influenced by others... Specially Maan, haina?

Thanks to the great MSK, She has learnt a lot from her experiences....

Geet prefers to stay back while Maan leaves.... Geet takes a taxi to go back.....

Maan is shocked to see the new version of Geet.... But still he couldn't stop admiring her... That's what she is capable of... Geet has the power to keep him captivated by her sheer presence.... There is something intoxicating about her eyes...

Though she tries to shield her feelings with that attitude her eyes always keep Maan entertained with their expressions... he could see the same sparks in them everytime their eyes meet... She doesn't hate him totally, a part of the Geet Handa who fell head over heels for the MSK is still there lingering...

Maan knows that his Geet is not lost completely but is only struggling to beat this new Geet.... This is not the Geet that Maan likes... He wants his Geet back who was ready to fight for her happiness... He just hates this Geet who is fake and she is the one Geet has deliberately created over the years to hide her real self... But Maan is here to unmask her reality... Haina?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 12


Maan finally meets Geet

but she is not his Geet the one that had fallen

deeply and head over heels in love with him

this Geet is stronger and is capable to handle any situation

yet Maan notices her eyes that tells him his old Geet

is hidden somewhere

what had actually happened that Geet feels Maan is not responsible

and the fact that he took her for granted

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Posted: 5 years ago
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geet shock to see maan

maan wants to see real geet not this fake

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Posted: 5 years ago
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thanks for the pm!

Part 12

excellent update! awesomely written!

so they finally meet! of cos Geet is not the same Geet.... she is not stronger!

not surprised that they were so formal!

will Maan be able to bring the real Geet back?

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Maan at last met Geet she was shocked but not regret Maan fsce new Geet she's faking to b happy and dev trust Geet blindly and that trust make her to take decision
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wonderful update superb

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part - 13

Present times.... Mumbai....

Maan is happy to work with Dev though he is not a fan of him...

Everyone knows the reason... His wife Geet is an active partner in his business.... Maan gets to meet her finally... It's not that he is desperate.. you know MSK' s big ego...

Next day.... Dev calls Maan....

Dev: halo Maan, where are you? You should be here right now

Maan: where?

Dev: office aur Kahan?

Maan: office? It's yet to get launched, I'm working on that only, I am talking with one M.bhai

Dev: what? No, no, don't rely on such persons, come to our office, it's all yours now, I already talked with Mohan uncle and told him that we'll take care of everything

Maan: ok, I'm on my way

Dev: that's the spirit

When Maan reaches their office he doesn't find Dev.... Dev is busy in some meetings.....

Maan calls Dev..... : Dev, what's this? No one is here

Dev: relax Maan, Geet is there only, she is the expert in all this, she knows all the people, interiors to hiring the securities, she has been doing this for all our branches, she will also get it done on time and at the best prices....

Maan: what? We have our team, Adi is here

Dev: Maan, believe me, this is Mumbai and let me do this for Mohan uncle

Maan: ok fine, I'm waiting

Geet comes as Dev called her too...

Geet: let's go, I've called the interior designers

Geet goes to the lift and Maan follows.... Maan moves slowly for he doesn't want to get into the lift with Geet....

Geet stops it for Maan... Maan is surprised.... She is like I'm not affected by anyone.... Not anymore...

But it is not the same for Maan... She looks like a puzzle as always... Maan can't say that he knows his Geet... For she has changed....

As they drive to the new office space Geet is busy with her tab while Maan couldn't stop himself from gazing her every now and then.... He has a hundred questions to ask her but he can't for he is not in a position to question her....

At the new office, the interior designers are waiting for them... They know Geet and start discussing with her straight away... Geet introduces Maan to them...

They ask his suggestions and he had to join the conversation... This time around he is reduced to a mere listener for Geet does all the talking...

Dev calls Geet.....

Geet: haan Dev, we are almost finished, I'll be back

Dev: Geet, I forget to invite Maan for the party, you please invite him personally

Geet: ok Dev, I'll

Dev: let me speak with Maan

Geet: he is busy, I'll take care of it, bye Dev

Geet quickly cuts the call... Dev wants to invite Maan? Why? He is just a business ally... They know him just a week ago... It's not necessary.... Haina?

Next day Geet is busy with Aditi.... It's her birthday.... It's her fourth birthday and she is entering her 5 th year.....

Dev re-checks the guest list and is reminded of Maan... He calls Maan...

Dev: halo Maan

Maan: halo Dev, what's the plan today?

Dev: no no no Maan, no plans today, you should be here on time

Maan: where?

Dev: didn't Geet tell you?

Maan manages...: haan, I forgot, just wanted to confirm

Dev: you must be here at the Khanna house at 5 pm sharp

Maan: ok Dev, I'll be there, bye

The party is on and the guests start arriving.... Geet gets Aditi ready and brings her down...

Aditi looks like an angel and Geet is also not far behind.... She too looks stunning in her saree....

Everyone wishes Aditi... She has invited her school friends and is very happy to see her barbie cake... She can't wait to cut the cake and taste it... She runs towards the cake followed by Geet....

Geet: Aditi wait, wait a minute beta

Aditi: nahi, I want the cake now

Geet: Dev, ye Dev Kahan hai?

Dev comes.... : Halo my darling, you want the cake? You can have it, come on guys, let's cut the cake

Dev takes Aditi along with Geet and they both hold her little hand to cut the cake... Everyone sings and claps while they cut the cake....

Maan just enters and is surprised to see their happy family time together... He is shocked to know that they have such a big daughter....

Geet is so happy with Dev and Aditi... Dev has seen Maan.... He calls Maan..... Maan hesitates to intrude...

Geet is shocked to see Maan there... How would he know? So Dev invited Maan.....

Dev: welcome Maan, Aditi, uncle Ko cake khilayiye

Geet helps Aditi.... He couldn't get his eyes off Geet as well.... He is seeing her in a saree for the first time....

Maan bends down to reach those little fingers... He takes the cake from her and gives it back to her...

Maan: happy birthday sweetie

Aditi takes a bite and is very happy... She signal's Maan to bend down and when Maan reaches her she kisses him... That's what she always does with Dev too... Whenever she gets her cake, ice cream or chocolate she thanks with a kiss....

Maan is so happy... He takes her in his arms and kisses her back ...

Geet is astonished to see all this.... She stands there seeing them and Dev is very happy to see Aditi easily getting attached to Maan....

Dev: I think Aditi likes you

Maan: hmm, she is so adorable

Then they have some games for the children.... Then they play the music and the children are asked to dance... Everyone is enjoying the party while Maan leaves quickly for he doesn't want to make it difficult for Geet...

Maan feels dejected but is only happy for Geet.... She has got a lovely family and Maan doesn't want to disturb that.... She has got want she deserves....

Maan is now happy(?) to go back knowing that Geet has settled down happily.... He has been foolish to wait for such a long time...

But Geet didn't wait? Why should she wait? He is the one who ran away....

If he loved her so much why did he leave her when a problem came... If his love is true he would have stayed back and fought for his love.... He wouldn't have given up so easily...

His ego is always so big that it keeps him blind of the reality.... Now all his ego is shattered and the reality has struck back so strong that he is shattered to pieces....

Maan blames his fate for making him a part of all this while he was happy on his own in his life in Canada.... Why should destiny bring him back, bring Geet back?

Maybe it's just what he needed to know.... Now he won't have any hesitation in moving forward in his own life.... His past can never become a part of his life and it'll always remain his past, and no one can snatch it away from him....

The image of Geet with Dev and Aditi makes him feel a little jealous... If only there were no hurdles in his love story then this could be his story instead of Dev's.....

Maan should realise that everyone has a problem at some point in their lives and you have to work on a solution together and not leave your partner alone to face the problem...

Maybe Dev did what Maan failed to do.... Dev should have come as a solution for Geet and it's only Maan who has pushed her into this and he should not regret now....

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maan is sad for himself but happy for geet

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Part 13

great that Geet is trying to show Maan that he doesn't affect her!

Maan is shocked that Dev and Geet have a daughter!

he is happy for Geet....

yes... it should have been him and Geet....


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Geet again have to meet Maan he thinks she not get effected with him but least he knows she not comfortable so she not inviting him after dev said hr

Dev invited him and he cover-up Geet and came and surprise to see happy family and inside he get shattered bz he his ego get hurt that Geet didn't waited fr him he feel guilty too fr living hr in problem

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