MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 9

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Part 16

perfect update! splendidly written!

liked the past moments!

Maan was shocked yet happy seeing Geet there!

can understand Geet's thoughts!

she is amazed that Maan accompanied them when they went shopping!

Maan admires Geet

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Lovely past

Maan thought she again ran from hr house and Geet thought he have bad view about hr

Geet like city boz seeing how Maan and arjun is

Maan genuinely helping Annie to choose best dress and happily company hr in shopping

Maan unknowingly start thinking about Geet

geet feela bad seeing this low thinking for her from maan but admire his love n cae for his sister annie

both are attracted towards each other

Part - 17

Present days.... Mumbai.... At the mall....

After getting the lehanga for Pari Maan is all set to go.... He doesn't want to stay there any longer... He can't stop himself from staring Geet and he is also reminded of Annie's wedding shopping when everything seemed so perfect when Geet slowly started liking him for the first time...

Maan: so Pari, let's go, I have some important work

Pari: what's the hurry Maan? we have just started, come Geet, let's go

The girls lead while Maan follows... He could do nothing but only curse his fate for this torture of being so close to Geet yet not having the right over her and her love, she is now happy with her own family... This guilt of being obsessed with someone who is now happily married kills him inside.... But he can't stop loving Geet... It's his right... No one can stop him from loving her... He has not stopped loving her since the time they started liking each other... His love that has been kept under hibernation all these years has now been activated by Geet's presence...

It's some magic that Geet has.... The fact that Geet could ignite his feelings even now just like those days is something out of Maan's control.... Poor Maan is trapped here with no escape...

Now he just wants to go hide leaving her alone.... But he can't escape from the punishment for his mistakes of the past... Maybe nature has its own way of teaching us our lessons....

Geet takes Pari to her favourite boutique... She tells her that Pari would also love the collections...

The girls start trying some beautiful outfits and seeing Geet's radiant beauty is not helping Maan at all...

When Pari asks him to choose he just looks at her and also Geet...

Both of them look stunning...

Maan couldn't control this time...

Maan: you two look good in this

Pari is happy that finally Maan is opening up... Geet knows what's going on with Maan and she feels awkward.... Geet asks them to pack both the dresses and offers to pay for both... But Maan has already paid... Geet doesn't know how to reject in front of Pari and keeps silent.... Actually this is the first gift from Maan...

After that they leave.... Pari asks Geet to come with them but Geet says that they should relieve Maan now and they can continue their other shopping with her driver...

Maan thanks Geet in his mind.....

The girls now talk about their life...

Geet: so Pari, how do you know Maan?

Pari: I just met him, it's just because my babhi kept pestering me to meet her brother, but I think he is OK, maybe he is still struggling to forget his lover

Geet feels embarrassed... She too knows that Pari is not wrong...

Pari continues....

Pari: I know how hard it is to lose your lover, I lost my Karan in an accident

Pari couldn't control her tears....

Geet is surprised to see Pari getting all emotional....

Geet: I'm sorry to hear that, what happened?

Pari is still struggling to pull herself together....

Geet: I asked just like that, it's ok, it's something personal

Pari: no no Geet, I'm glad you asked, I've been waiting to pour my heart to a friend like you, I'm lucky to have met you, I should thank Maan for this

Geet gives her a warm hug....

Pari: ours was not a love affair, we got engaged and we started to fall in love, Karan is such a noble soul, he won't harm even his worst enemy, he is out of this world and that's why God took him to his kingdom so soon

Geet: God always tests the good people, don't worry Pari, I know you would find love again and this time it would be even better

Pari: but Pari feels that you can never forget your first love and nothing can beat it

Geet : that's true

Geet couldn't agree more... She knows that for sure...

Geet: I know it's hard to forget your first love, but think about this, it should be the same for Maan too, who would understand you better than him?

Pari: I also thought the same when I heard about Maan, hope this works

Pari winks....

Geet: we'll make it work... Geet winks back....

Pari: so what's the plan?

Geet: I think you should talk to him

Pari: I'm trying

Geet: I know that no one can resist my lovely Pari, Maan is no exception

Pari: tell me about yourself

Geet: you come and see for yourself tomorrow, I told you about the party at the office

Pari: I can't wait, Geet I am so happy and feel much better now, thanks for everything,

Pari now hugs Geet..

Geet: let's rock the party

Pari: ohh yes, Maan would be there na?

Geet: why the doubt? You kidnap and bring him

Pari: ok done , don't forget to wear this new dress

Geet: see you at the party

Geet tells Dev about Pari and Dev is excited to meet her.... Maan's love affair... Dev thinks that this must be interesting....

That evening.....

Dev calls Maan.....

Dev: congrats Maan

Maan thinks it's for the launch... The date has been finalized... It's coming in fifteen days....

Maan: thanks Dev, not possible without your help

Dev: I can't take false credit, to tell you the truth, I didn't know you had a romantic side

Maan is shocked..... Did Geet tell everything about them to Dev...

Maan: what?

Dev: don't try to hide Maan, Geet told me everything

Maan: everything?

Dev: I can't wait to meet that lucky girl, when are you going to introduce her?

Maan: what girl?

Dev: what Maan? you just introduced her to Geet and why do you hesitate now? I won't be competing with you

Maan: I don't understand what you are talking about

Dev: I don't know anything, I want to meet her, I just called you to invite you and your girl friend for the party tomorrow

Maan: party?

Dev: it's an annual event that our United Builders conduct for our clients and well wishers, I thought Geet must have told you

Maan: don't worry, I'll be there

Dev: don't forget to bring your date

Maan: ok

Maan is only happy to have a company while he happens to be with Geet.... That way he won't feel bad to see her with Dev... Haina?

Moreover Pari has been pestering him to take her out... This would be easier for Maan for it would be a party and he need not bother much about giving company to Pari alone...

Lately Maan is finding it pretty difficult to be alone with Geet and is not being able to control his feelings...

Maan can't stop thinking about Geet... About the days that she stayed at KM...

Next part.... Back to the past....

Part 17

wonderful update!

Maan still loves Geet. he is happy just being near her!

so Geet wants Maan and Pari together!

great that Pari mentioned that Maan cannot forget his lover.

Geet knows this as well!

what happened between Maan and Geet?

Maan agreed to attend the party so that he can see Geet and also take Pari out!

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Part - 18

Past days..... Delhi...

Geet is busy with Annie going to the parlour and shopping.... Though she has very little interest in all this she tries to get involved for she doesn't want to disappoint Annie who is so excited about the wedding....

When they come back Maan is there chatting with Dadi....

Dadi tells him about the Handa family's worries about Geet's marriage and her hartal against them.... Dadi wants to get Maan's attention towards Geet.... Her job is done.... Maan who is already curious about Geet is now obsessed with her mysterious acts... He wants to know what's in her mind....

As soon as Geet sees him she goes to the garden to escape.... But Maan has seen her and he is so curious to know what bothers her.... She looks worried always thinking about something... Maan has to clear his doubts soon or he will turn mad....

He always has this suspicion that Geet has a secret love affair... She is afraid to tell about that to her family or they are against that....

Maan wants to know what is so special about Amritsar?... Why does she always runs to Amritsar?

Maybe Maan doesn't like the idea of Geet with someone else.... Or he is concerned that she'll make the wrong decision owing to her age and innocence....

Maan follows her to the garden...

Geet is admiring the colourful bloom in the garden and is so happy looking at them....

Maan is here admiring her... Geet looks more beautiful when she is happy smiling and enjoying herself in her own company... She doesn't know that she has got company na?

As soon as she sees Maan she gets nervous and tries to run away....

But Maan catches hold of her hand and stops her... He came to ask her a lot of questions but he goes speechless looking at her... He keeps gazing her scared eyes and is actually enjoying this little hide and seek going on between them...

The more Geet moves away from him the more he is interested in her...

Geet tries hard to get off his hold... But he is too strong for her... All the workouts that Maan does to de-stress himself has come handy now...

Maan pulls her closer still looking into her eyes to find out what they want but it's always a puzzle for him... Sometimes they look innocent while sometimes they look dangerously seductive... Maybe it's nothing wrong about her eyes but it all depends on his own feelings....

Geet thinks that it's time to get some help....

Geet shouts: Annieee dadiiiii

Maan instantly stops her by closing her mouth with his hands....

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Geet looks into his eyes and is scared by that look.... This is all new for her and she doesn't even know why she feels so uncomfortable when Maan is around....

Maan just wants to know more about Geet... Nothing more... He directly comes to the point....

Maan: why do you want to go to Amritsar always?

Geet blinks.... She is scared that Maan might know more... Would he tell her family? She is not afraid now... She knows what she wants and she won't stop until she gets it...

Maan: is there something special? Or is there someone special?

Geet is shocked.... What does that mean?

Maan: Geet, I just want to know why you went to Amritsar? I am feeling guilty of having done something wrong by helping you that day, dadi tells me that you are having some problems with your marriage, your foolish strike, if all this is about that day then I'm afraid I too am responsible for that

So Maan has been worried that he did something wrong....

Maan just goes on and on non stop... He couldn't control himself.. he can't see Geet getting into trouble... He believes she is too immature.... he doesn't want to be the one pushing her into trouble knowingly or unknowingly....

Maan pauses and Geet doesn't know what's wrong with him.... Where the hell did he get all those ideas?

She gets the answer soon... Maan looks at her beautiful face and those playful eyes.... He moves closer without his knowledge...

Maan: your beauty is your biggest enemy Geet

Geet starts to tremble... She can feel the adrinaline rush which is new to her....

Maan: it can turn anyone crazy, and that's why it's also dangerous

Geet doesn't know what to do.... And she is confused with what Maan is trying to tell her... Is he trying to warn her? Why does her looks bother him so much? It's not her fault to look good.... Is he trying to say the same thing as his family? She should stay confined to the four walls until some idiot comes and takes her away with the ownership given by the so called wedding....

Maan: please tell me you were not planning to elope with your lover that day, if you have any such ideas forget about them immediately

Geet is shocked to hear that.... What a pathetic thought?.... How could he think so low about her?

She thought so high about him... How wrong she was to think that he is a broad minded gentleman who would know better?

He has proved after all he is also an ordinary narrow minded male....

Geet gets angry and couldn't tolerate more of that nonsense...

Geet: aap aur aapki soch

She forces herself out of his hold and in the process she pushes him when he crashes into the nearby statue and is hurt..... Geet doesn't turn back and leaves.... Maan wonders where she got that strength... She is also a Punjaban.... She will roar like a tigress when offended....

From that day Geet looks at Maan like a villain and Maan couldn't tolerate that....

He also didn't know why he asked her those stupid questions and that he should apologize for that...

He waits for the opportunity but Geet is acting as if Maan is some criminal....

Maan can't sleep in peace until he clears her misunderstanding...

He goes to see her in her room itself knowing that Annie is not there and she is alone....

He doesn't knock as he knows Geet would only lock the unlocked door seeing him...

He enters and locks the door behind for he doesn't want her to make a scene shouting... She is capable of doing anything... She is the Geet Handa...

Geet is shocked seeing him lock the door.... She is scared and she picks whatever comes to her hand and throws at him.... She starts shouting for help....

Maan rushes towards her and he catches her dupatta and ties her arms behind....

Geet is terrified.... She thinks that he has come to take revenge.... She tries to scream....

Maan closes her mouth with his hand....

Maan: darne ki koi baat nahi Geet, I just came to apologize for that day, I'm sorry Geet, I don't know what happens to me when you are with me, I start making mistakes, I was worried that I may have made a huge mistake by helping you that day, when dadi told me that you are having some issues with marriage and have a fight with your family I started imagining things and i' m sorry that I thought like that about you, what to do Geet? I don't know what's wrong with me Geet, whenever I'm with you I keep making these silly mistakes

So he is blaming Geet for all this, then why apologize?

Maan: I am turning crazy thinking about you Geet, I just want to help you, I don't want to make another mistake

So saying he unties her hands... Geet is relieved and now she understands that Maan is only concerned about her and that's why he is worried....

Maan keeps looking at her.... Does she accept his apology?

He won't leave without knowing that he has cleared her doubts about him...

Maan stands there staring Geet.... Geet thinks it's better to accept his apology and send him back as soon as possible.....

Geet: it's ok I understand

Maan is so happy to hear that.... He feels this urge to give her a big hug but he controls himself knowing very well that anything he does goes against him only....

Maan leaves while Geet keeps staring him until he vanishes from her sight....

She is confused as what to expect from him next... Maan is full of surprises...

Maan is also confused with himself now... He doesn't know why this stupid girl from Hoshiarpur keeps disturbing him so much that he almost lost his sanity....

Awesome story

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Part 18

remarkable update!

Maan is falling for Geet!

dadi is so smart, she wants Maan ad Geet together!

so Maan confronts Geet... of cos she is shocked with his thoughts and questions!

great that he realised what he did! at least Maan apologised!

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Nice updates.. Geet is so cool with Pari, don’t know what to make out of that.. so many questions, had she really loved Maan in the past, what’s her scenario in the present, why didn’t she feel even a little bad knowing Pari could be the prospective bride of Maan? And Past, she’s hardly talking, its always Maan talking & her escaping from there.. they don’t seem to have one proper dialogue or conversation... waiting for the next

Part - 19

Present times... Dev's office party...

Everyone is here.... All the staff are excited... Dev has invited the new recruits for KC too... They would get to know their boss MSK....

Adi is also here.... Pari comes with Maan and Dev is happy for Maan...

But Maan mostly remains aloof.... His only conversations are with Adi that too official....

Geet tries to engage Pari to cover up Maan's indifference....

Dev is surprised to see Maan acting strange....

Dev: Maan, come on man, you have got a gorgeous girlfriend, actually I'm a little jealous you know

Maan looks at Pari and as Dev said she looks stunning in that dress... It's Maan's choice, haina?

Everytime for Maan it's only after Dev admires and appreciates his girlfriend that Maan realises their worth...

Maan gets a drink for Pari and starts a little conversation with her... Pari is so happy....

Then they start the music and the dance floor is set for the couples to dance....

Dev is the first one to get Geet to the dance floor.... They start dancing and pari keeps looking at Maan...

Maan on the other hand is staring Geet and Dev... Geet has improved her dancing skills and has got rid of her shyness... They look like the perfect couple...

Maan is hurt... Geet should be dancing with him if only he didn't mess up with her...

Pari is also reminded of Karan and she retires silently in a corner...

Dev doesn't feel good about it... It's his party and he wants everyone to be happy...

Dev goes and asks pari for a dance...

Dev: come on Miss beautiful, you are the show stealer today, why would want to hide like this?

Pari thinks she should respect the host and accepts to dance with Dev...

Maan is after Geet... Geet gets angry and when they are alone she talks with Maan.....

Geet: what's going on?

Maan is puzzled.... : What's wrong?

Geet: everything

Maan: so you think I'm responsible for all this?

Geet: I'm not here for the blame game

Maan: it's hard Geet, you won't understand my feelings

Geet very well knows... But it's all part of life... No don't keep dwelling in the past and keep regreting your mistakes..... Life moves on and so should we...

Geet: and never even make an effort to understand others feelings

Maan: again it's you who keep blaming me

Geet: from all these years I have learnt a lot about life

Maan: you should so philosophical, it's not the Geet I know

Geet: that's what you need to understand, I'm not the same Geet and definitely you are not the same MSK

Maan: but the love remains the same Geet

Geet goes speechless for a moment...

Geet: you know something, if you want your life to be happy then you should with someone who loves you and not with someone you love

Maan smirks... : So that's your "Mantra" Geet

Maan: I can see how happy you are, I know Dev loves you so much that it's easy for you to forget everything

Geet: I know, pari is just like Dev, full of hope even after all that loss

Maan: what loss?

Geet: you know nothing about Pari? Look at her trying hard to get back her life after she lost her lover in an accident, you should learn a lot from her, I know she can bring back happiness in your life

Maan looks at Pari having a laugh chatting with Dev....

Maan walks towards Pari.... He asks her for a dance and Dev cheers them....

He signals his the DJ to run a romantic no....

The music starts....

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de

Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa

Itna bata doon tujhko
Chaahat pe apni mujhko
Yun tto nahi ikhtiyaar
Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne
Poochhu tujhe ek baar

Aisi kabhi pehle hui naa thi khwaahishein
O.. kisi se bhi milne ki
Naa ki thi koshishein
Uljhan meri suljha de
Chaahun main ya naa
Aankhon aankhon mein jataa de
Chaahun main ya na...

Maan and Pari make a pretty pair... Geet and Dev stand at the sidelines admiring them....

It's just a beginning.... Maan has an Everest to scale....