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Posted: 6 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Reading, will come back with comments.
Sophie has written about it on the humorous stories collection :)

Read at your own risk 😃⭐️

Copied from KDrama 😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: babelicious
I think this is clearly one of your best works! Some stories like this we never get tired reading and re-reading ... I happened to again read it and enjoyed it so much

That's sweet to say

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Keepdreaming

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Posted: 6 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel
Wonderful...
Well Maan is a jerk , no second thoughts about it..

But u r the one who made him so , u have to bare the brunt not him..

But I loved the update...

Maan actually said her what all I wanted...

I definitely wanted geet to do that...

Thanks for making Maan ask geet to give to all of them back in their own style...

Loved his confession n hers as well...

😆yes he is still Geet loves him

He is her jerk

Thnx for reading dear

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Posted: 6 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: aparna3011
finally maan confess his love to geet surprising n making her happy
maan also ask sorry for realizing it late n hurting her for all these years

Thnx for reading

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Posted: 6 years ago

#365

Thank you guys for liking this story .. it means a lot

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 6 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Read at your own risk 😃⭐️
Copied from KDrama 😉

Have not watched this KDrama, after your reply watched a few episodes, will watch the whole drama later, but loved your writing Sabina, the emotions, feelings, dialogues beautifully expressed.

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 6 years ago

#367

Part 1

the letter 😆 I also had a smile, but then the whole situation was made adorable by Geet.

The way Maan pointed out the mistakes that too in such serious manner, kind of rejecting her feelings, it would have been embarrassing, insulting to anyone else there, but not for Geet. What mattered to her was, he noticed her, for the first time, he knows her by her name..isn't that the first step in her dream world, in all the fairy tales..and the trust she showed in her love, and said with innocence that ek din toh usse mujhse pyaar ho hi jayega..the deewani title suits her.

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 6 years ago

#368

Part 2

oho Maan all-rounder types hai, padhai, music, sports..no wonder saara college I mean saari ladkiya uske aage peechhe ghoom rahi hai, and Geet toh totally fida on him.

the heart and getting into nerves so aptly used. Persistence in Perusal until You Get It is the mantra for Geet, aur dekho, nature ne bhi saath diya. Earthquakes are disastrous, but turned out to be blessings for Geet, ab toh follow karne ki bhi jaroorat nahi.

oh god..Geet fainted..😆

I can totally imagine the 440 volts ka shock written on Maan's face, he would have thought ki ye ladki toh peechha karte karte ghar tak aa pahunchi. Sath mein daddy (uncle ji) ko bhi sath leke aayi hai, kya rishte ki baat karke hi chhodegi 😕

and 1000 volts ka sweet surprise for Geet, it came so unexpected, that her subconscious mind immediately fled to a dreamland 😳

Maan's mother is sweet, ghar mein sab serious nature people, uss mein chulbuli si Geet, whom she could easily connect with.

Amidst all this Maan is noticing her, noticing that she possesses a good heart, nature and a never-give up attitude. Unaware to him, love is slowly entering in his life.

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Posted: 6 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Have not watched this KDrama, after your reply watched a few episodes, will watch the whole drama later, but loved your writing Sabina, the emotions, feelings, dialogues beautifully expressed.

It really good Drama ... I'm sure you will love oh ha ni😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

#370

Part 3

Maan ne, aur kuchh nahi toh at least Riya ko chup hone ke liye toh kehana chahiye tha.

And so this update goes to the heart broken state of Geet, for the hurt she felt by his words, moreover, for the first time she started thinking about the reality while coming out of the fairy land.

the trust she held that one day he will reciprocate her feelings, started to shake a little, this touch of reality that wavered her mind, but did not shake the intensity of her feelings, and impulsively she challenged Ria for the badminton match without thinking of the results.