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Flame_of_Forest

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Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#371

Part 4

Pinky and Titli like true friends all the time supporting Geet, good that she has such friends who are there with her, who can even take revenge on Maan for hurting Geet and so is Maan's mother who cared for her like her own mother.

Things going worse between Maaneet. One by one the incidents are making Maan more furious after finding Geet as the reason behind the disasters. He is losing the temper and passing hurtful words at her..and there comes the final straw..him saying her to get out of his life.

I loved Maan and his mother's conversation, a concise and simple conversation, but showed a lot of things, the anger and frustration from his side, his mother tried to show him the mirror in the form his behavior around Geet, not the one that is apparent to everyone, not the one that he shows to Geet..but the one that is hidden, where he cares for her.

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Keepdreaming

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Posted: 6 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Part 3

Maan ne, aur kuchh nahi toh at least Riya ko chup hone ke liye toh kehana chahiye tha.

And so this update goes to the heart broken state of Geet, for the hurt she felt by his words, moreover, for the first time she started thinking about the reality while coming out of the fairy land.

the trust she held that one day he will reciprocate her feelings, started to shake a little, this touch of reality that wavered her mind, but did not shake the intensity of her feelings, and impulsively she challenged Ria for the badminton match without thinking of the results.

Jerk will be jerk 😲 Maan is the one⭐️

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#373

Part 5

Ye part padhke mujhe GHSP ka woh episode yaad aaya..when Geet tries to leave the outhouse, and then Maan stops her.

and see the coincidence, there it was Teri Deewani song played before that scene.

an unexpected twist in the fairy tale for Geet..Maan coming there, following her, when it was her doing it all the time..still he maintained that controlling aura by telling her that she will never like anyone else because she loves him and Geet initially taking everything wrong but with happy and surprised with his way of confession.

her emotions and his emotions of jeolosy and determined way to get her back behind his composed outlook, loved it.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#374

Part 6

such a heartfelt confession and they cleared the misunderstandings too, by putting their own views about the past incidents.

I agree with Maan on one point, never let people take advantage of your soft attitude and let them hurt you, specially for some people as that is the only language they understand..for rest like Geet said, ignorance is the best policy, plus it does not matter to her as they are no one to her.

lovely Epilogue Sabina..just the way I would have imagined for this Maaneet, it left a playful, pleasant and contented imprint.

and Thank You for this one, Enjoyed it very much !!

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Part 6

such a heartfelt confession and they cleared the misunderstandings too, by putting their own views about the past incidents.

I agree with Maan on one point, never let people take advantage of your soft attitude and let them hurt you, specially for some people as that is the only language they understand..for rest like Geet said, ignorance is the best policy, plus it does not matter to her as they are no one to her.

lovely Epilogue Sabina..just the way I would have imagined for this Maaneet, it left a playful, pleasant and contented imprint.

and Thank You for this one, Enjoyed it very much !!

Thnx for your comments ... love reading those 😊