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Posted: 6 years ago

Thank you for commenting
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: MomiArti

Superb update.arjun did blunder maan get angry.maan past is hard.waiting for sbhool reunion and maaneet meeting


Thanks for the comment.


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Posted: 6 years ago
Can I say I enjoyed Maan's frustration
Yeh ishq nehi asan bas inta samajh li jiye... aag ka dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai... Lol ( K3G mood )
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Posted: 6 years ago
ENJOYED READING
MAAN IS ANGRY ON ARJUN FOR WHAT HE SAID TO PREETI
ARJUN SAID THAT MAAN CAN ARRANGE REUNION IN THE SCHOOL AS A BIG ALIMINI

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Posted: 6 years ago
Teaser

Maan, chal na ek player Kam hai hamari team mein, chal.. poked Arjun, as she saw Maan sitting near on the stairs of the first floor of the school. His mood was different, his eyes had lost the charm and he was for a change wasn't responding.

I don't play cricket, Arjun .. Maan's gloomy voice made Arjun's stance a little more fixed to make Maan play with them.

Toh usme kya hai, ab Khel Lena aur waise bhi tu toh aise bol Raha hai jaise tujhe kehna nahi aata ho.. bhai Sunday match hai India ka aur, mein pehle hi bol Raha hun, is Baar time se aajaiyo.. ranted Arjun as he this time held Maan's held making Maan look at his best friend. Maan nodded in a No, but Arjun didn't listened and he dragged Maan Khurana to play with the class team.

Dekh teri wajah se 11th haar jayegi.. waise hi ye science section me saare padhaku bhare pade hai.. aadhon Ko toh khelna bhi nai aata.. badi mushkil se class team Bani hai bus ek player Kam hai.. spoke Arjun as he dragged Maan towards the cricket pitch of the school where the players or say the class fellows were already waiting for Arjun..

Are ye kon hai.. asked one boy who approached Arjun seeing his friend with a new guy wearing the school uniform but he wasn't the person Karan had seen...

Karan ye Maan hai.. aaj hi admission hua hai.. aur dekh hamari team complete ho gayi ... Maan khelega cricket hamare saath.. said Arjun all the while making Maan now retort at his claim..

Par mein cricket nai kehta Arjun, said maan with a little frustrated voice and this time Arjun looked at his cousin cum friend and taunted him..

Bachpan se Sachin Tendulkar Ko dekh rahe hai.. khelna seekha nai aata samjha tu.. Sachin ke shots lagane hai bas.. aur ab jyada bhaav mat kha.. Arjun's words couldn't be neglected by Maan and Karan's piercing eyes were already concluding that something was wrong with the new guy. First he was the new admission in the middle of session and second he was letting Arjun boss him was something not everyone does.

Maan, please aajao , hamari team mein ek player Kam hai.. tum 11th player ban Jana.. Karan's voice made Maan agree knowing that he didn't have a choice..

On the other side...

Geet was studying with Nidhi and Preeti, it was more of a tutoring session in the library and Preeti's concentration was everywhere except her books..

Geet caught Preeti looking at a fellow student who was sitting on the adjacent table to theirs and when she was chided by geet for her lost attention she made a very interesting mark..

Geet, wo Rohit dekh tujhe kabse ghoor Raha hai..

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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice teaser
But sad Maan... how badly his childhood effected because of his parents
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Posted: 6 years ago
My updates sometimes as long as your teaser lol see im so lazy
Good girl suhana
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

My updates sometimes as long as your teaser lol see im so lazy

Good girl suhana


I really want to complete this before I go again for hibernation..😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
amazing teaser! feeling for Maan!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Nice teaser

But sad Maan... how badly his childhood effected because of his parents


Thanks
There is more to Maan's past in next update
Maybe tomorrow I'll post of m not so busy...😉

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