I like the title, theres this longing that goes with it. Maybe i think of family and ties hence the feelings. Anyway good luck with this adventure, i suppose this is my first story of yours. Thank you once again for the PM.
Part 1
Set in 1950's hmmm, two questions arises: is the story set in that period or is it the story of Maan/Geet's parents. I see you havent named the young boy making it even more impossible to guess lol, that dont help my job.
The miscarriage was a hard blow to the parents, so its understandle but iddeially they should have pulled together for teh sake of tehir son, hence teh title namesake. He was just there, the heir but there was no emotional or physical ties there. He himself saw him as a extension of ther servants. I do feel for him, Madhav in a way was already embedding himself in his grwoing inductry, food catering i presumed from what i read. WHile the wife, shunned away fearing a heartbreak but in the end she's the mother, she should have been there, sorry they should have been there for tehir only child.
He has grown to be a man by himslef, i like that, but lets see the differing views and emotions. i hope they are not namesake parents like he is a namesake child, nor are the feelings withering away namelessly
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