||MG SS - Namesake||Part 4||Page 33|06-02-19 - Page 15

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Part 1

Very wrong on the parents' part to have completely neglected their child in the grief of an unborn baby...felt bad for the small boy who was forced to learn the adversities of life on his own...how can they turn so ignorant towards their own baby whom they did cherish in the past...not fair for the child...

really different plot
looking forward to reading it more


Well mistakes happen...

wait for more ... you might be surprised...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Part 2

Devika has changed a lot over the period of time as suggested by their neighbor
really typical advice given by MOhan...why spoil your kid's life by getting him married just so as to get a kid to play with...ridiculous thought but I guess the thought about your own child is never on their mind as they are so deep in their own pain

he heard a voice in the train and that makes him happy...that is nice...at least he is able to find solace in someone...

loved the way how you depicted him and his wife...that scene was beautiful
did he not recognize her voice?
loved how he understood her wife's silent wish to visit the temple
hoping they both would get happiness in each other


PS: loved the title...really trying to relate it to the context of the story



They forgot to search the solution

well he did...

may be yes...but how was he to voice that...

yep you may be the end of the story...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Nice Update

The boy got married at such a young age to fulfill his parents wishes but he got such a wonderful wife a true soulmate and still wondering what type of parents the boy have that they never consider their son,s wishes , they are lost in their own miseries
when we will get the names of the son and his wife



Thank you...

sure you will get it soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Lovely Chapter

The young man was mesmerized with the lady's voice in the train
but now it seems he is mesmerized with his wife's sounds
is she the same woman
there does not seem to be much communication though his gestures will soon be
understood by her
so getting the son married Madhav hopes that when a heir arrives his wife will be back to her own self and that is a great possibility because the child would be her son's child
but will this couple develop understanding and love for each other or are they just doing their duties as of what is expected of them


Thank you...

May be the same girl...

lets see what's in the store...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Twenty1st

Thank you Jeevana for the PM, the banner looks great

Will read and comment soon


Sure will be waiting 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice but how they move forward
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Tanvi4

Nice but how they move forward


Thanks you will know soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi di!!!
Story seems intresting. Madhav and Devika blessed by a boy child and every thing was going more then fine but Devika faced a miscarriage and close herself in a hard shell. Mohan too engrossed himself in work. Their son got alone and starts spending time with servants and also get guidense from them. Madhav and Devika's pain was big but they shouldn't ignore the previous blessing from god ,their son. Their son was obedient and shy (happy to see not become bad due to lack of love and ignorance from hi parents) and in 20 age also starts helping his father in buissnes.

Marriage without telling anything to their son😲😲😲. I think its not right they sould have ask him about what he want to do in life or what kind of girl he expect. Marriage takes place and girl is same like him shy and obedient but i like it very much how he understand his wife feelings without her telling😊😊😊. Waiting eagerly to see how their bonding will blossom. Di please add the characters name too.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: usss

Hi di!!!

Story seems intresting. Madhav and Devika blessed by a boy child and every thing was going more then fine but Devika faced a miscarriage and close herself in a hard shell. Mohan too engrossed himself in work. Their son got alone and starts spending time with servants and also get guidense from them. Madhav and Devika's pain was big but they shouldn't ignore the previous blessing from god ,their son. Their son was obedient and shy (happy to see not become bad due to lack of love and ignorance from hi parents) and in 20 age also starts helping his father in buissnes.

Marriage without telling anything to their son 😲😲😲. I think its not right they sould have ask him about what he want to do in life or what kind of girl he expect. Marriage takes place and girl is same like him shy and obedient but i like it very much how he understand his wife feelings without her telling😊😊😊. Waiting eagerly to see how their bonding will blossom. Di please add the characters name too.



Thank you dear...

Sure wait for more

Names...will give them a bit later...
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Posted: 6 years ago
I like the title, theres this longing that goes with it. Maybe i think of family and ties hence the feelings. Anyway good luck with this adventure, i suppose this is my first story of yours. Thank you once again for the PM.

Part 1

Set in 1950's hmmm, two questions arises: is the story set in that period or is it the story of Maan/Geet's parents. I see you havent named the young boy making it even more impossible to guess lol, that dont help my job.

The miscarriage was a hard blow to the parents, so its understandle but iddeially they should have pulled together for teh sake of tehir son, hence teh title namesake. He was just there, the heir but there was no emotional or physical ties there. He himself saw him as a extension of ther servants. I do feel for him, Madhav in a way was already embedding himself in his grwoing inductry, food catering i presumed from what i read. WHile the wife, shunned away fearing a heartbreak but in the end she's the mother, she should have been there, sorry they should have been there for tehir only child.

He has grown to be a man by himslef, i like that, but lets see the differing views and emotions. i hope they are not namesake parents like he is a namesake child, nor are the feelings withering away namelessly

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