Predestined~Repost~UPDATED Ch19@Pg40[CH18@Pg33]4th June 2019

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Chapter 10

Impressive update! greatly written!

at least Maan comforts Geet! glad that Geet wants to do things for Maan! nice that Maan left breakfast for her!

finally Geet speaks to her mom! nice that she did not complain to her mom!

wow Geet making lunch! its a start! oh no Geet used corn flour but then realised! got to admire her efforts!

sad that she burnt her fingers and cut her fingers! everything is a mess and there is no water! she is having a terrible day!

Geet's tension is reasonable! Hate Maan taunting Geet! glad that Geet is not meek!

and they argue yet again!

Maan has met his match!

why can't Maan be nice?

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#112

Chapter 11

wonderful update! terrifically written!

can understand Maan's feelings! of cos he is affected by her!

glad she confronts him!

why does he have to hurt her? hated that he taunts her!

but he is trying to cover up his growing feelings!

her question was apt!

Geet's thoughts well portrayed!

how can Maan say that to Geet? he was really mean! sad that Maan thinks she is acting!

his dilemma is reasonable!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#113

Chapter 12

remarkable update! awesomely written!

oh no Geet well! at least Maan is concerned! but Geet does not want his sympathy!

glad that he is taking care of her! Geet's response was apt! glad that he feels guilty!

Indeed Geet had a tough day and Maan's accusations hurt her so much!

nice that Maan decided to make soup for Geet!

his anger is justified seeing the mess! but she was unable to clean it as she hurt herself

liked Maan admiring Geet!

Maan's feelings beautifully summed up!

but then his anger and ego get the better!

do not like Maan's attitude!

Geet cannot dress herself properly! Maan mesmerized seeing her!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#114

'chapter 13

stupendous update! excellently written!

intense moments!

can understand Maan's fight with himself! he is so affected by closeness!

she tests his control!

sad that he gets angry with her! she is helpless!

Maan was reaching breaking point! he berates himself!

who is Ahlam?

hmm Geet was angry and jealous!

Feeling for Geet!

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#115

Thank you for updating

will read and comment hopefully tomorrow or before the

weekend ends

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#116

Chapter 9

Geet now enters her new home and she wonders what made her parents

agree to get her married to Maan someone that is a stranger and he may also

be on a lower income bracket , though she is not someone that chases money

but seeing her new home she realizes that there will be lots of challenges she'll

have to face

while Maan seems to be avoiding her and when she tells him she is hungry he simply orders her to prepare Italian food and Geet has no idea about cooking and when Maan learns this he taunts her

Geet's dream felt so real seems like she is already getting attracted to her husband and perhaps falling for him too

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#117

Chapter 10

Geet waking up after 11:00am and yeah Maan has already left

I liked that though Geet has no idea about cooking she made an attempt

and for me that shows that at least she tried not just sitting back and waiting

for her husband to come home and cook for her .

she is getting effected by Maan's closeness

while he takes every chance he gets to taunt and insult her just showing her

his rough side but its good to see Geet to is fierce and I'm sure Maan would secretly admire

this trait of hers

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#118

Chapter 11

Maan could not get rid of Geet thoughts and because of that fact

he decides to insult her but pointing at her character

as he feels she betrayed her family she lied to all of them and went to Dev

late at night , he thinks she wanted to elope with Dev and because the family found out about the money she made him the scape goat

by marrying him

Maan feels pain when she cries yet at the same time he convinces himself that she is same like other girls

while all his words hurt Geet deeply and now she knows her husband dislike her

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#119

Will read the Chapters 12 & 13

over the weekend

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Chapter 12

Maan felt guilty when he realized that Geet had cut her finger and also burned

them he now realized her tears were not fake but because of the pain she was experiencing

while Geet now retaliates and tells him she does not need his sympathy

Maan was indeed angry seeing the state of kitchen and now he feels he should

let his plan work bully Geet so that Daadima loses her challenge

though the next morning Maan waited for Geet so he can order her to prepare breakfast

but due to her injured fingers she could barely dress herself and Maan had to help her

but this incident made both their desires come alive for each other

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