Knock, Knock! Who's there? Pt 21/22 pg 80, 82 23/04

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Posted: 6 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: 8427977480
Lovely part.waiting for next.precpe is intersting.waiting for read geet past.let see maan help her or not.

u'll find out soon enough

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Posted: 6 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: preetidhawan
Interesting Update
Geet wanted Maan fathered her child but knowing Maan has a girlfriend she was guilty and asked Maan to listen her side of story and Maan agreed. Maan himself was amazed realizing his behaviour towards Geet , eagerly waiting to know Geet,s past

thank you Preeti

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Posted: 6 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: IMA9167
soph baby u r NOT VERY WELL NOT PLANNING to involve RANA MY RANA here
IS IT CLEAR BABY
i believe she had a ugly past and was cheated by her hubby/bf
but in no way u r making it rana
i hope it clear baby
by the way sabi left fb,if,twitter what ever she was active
she needs peace

Dreamer wants peace, did Silsila get to her. I suppose its a good decision, i myself CBA with it

I wasn't even thinking of Rana, but for you now i have included him in the story but as Geet's lawyer friend and more of him will be shown in the future.

Don't worry he isn't Geet's cheater BF lol, btw congrat you are spot on😃

kya dimag hai sweets👏

N listed no Sam and Pari as Maan GF, have you got any thought who it should be or i am i free to do whatever. Sam will be in here but not as Maan's GF😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: IMA9167
i dont want to hate your every maan
this maan is a bit different
he had a gf but his heart skipped a beat seeing geet
what is he!!???
will b waiting soph

Geet forsure gave a dismal surprise to Maan lol with the baby

NO NO i like this Maan, i know my track record of Maan's haven't been good but hopefully this one will be the best

He's attracted sweets thats all, other than a fleeting heart beat nothing more, atleast for now😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Ggorgeousqueen
Why are you afraid of the law?😆
it's a fiction and everything is acceptable in fiction
But yes the information of donner is kept hidden not only in UK but all over the world.. if identity is opne then everyone may ask for the sperm of best man😆😆
No No
ye main kahin padha nahin hai bas main aiwai bol rahi hoon apni extra knowledge dikhaane ke liye😆

Of course i shall be scared, i am a law abiding citizen😉 but jokes to a side, i tried to make it close to reality considering how far stretched it is lol. Writers liberty defo has been used lol

Tumara general knowledge toh awesome hai😆

Thank you for the wonderful comment and please be prepared for dissappointment

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Posted: 6 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Ggorgeousqueen
maine kya kiya?

Rest assured i don't get so easily scared Jeevana 😊

(OK Sanj stay away hun😉)

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Posted: 6 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Interesting story absolutely loved it Sophie didn't send me pm anyways maan is a sperm donor and geet was pregnant with his baby she has some past coz of which she wanted maan to be legal father of her child seems her husband might have left her or during to financial situation she wanted maan help though maan was angry at first but he could see geet genuinity and decide to hear her out let's see what geet has to say Sophie I want a pm

I'm so sorry Nakh, i haven't sent out PMs' however i will do for this part aur tumhe milega for defo😉

Thank you for the comment

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Posted: 6 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
I am here.. 😆

that was the first reaction after reading the title...back to forum after the hibernation mode since my computer has regained new life after a crash.

*off to reading - will comment later*

Well i'm glad either i knocked or you knocked lol

lets decide whose knocking first lol

Ouch - i hate that, i feel my laptop is also breathing its last but ignore that i do not want to CURSE it or myself lol

See you around Flame

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Posted: 6 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: IMA9167

Soph u knew me well
Na sabi se mera love hate relationship hai
But Rana is dreamy
I lobbb rana second u last sabi (as u made Rana I gave u second place)
Maan sabse last hai
Now a days kunal occupied remaining place
Wow cursed too
Can't wait maan going to die isn't it
Geet and rana 😆
I miss sabi yaar

Sabi se love vs hate, oh well love toh hai😉

From where did Rana come and steal ur heart😉

atcha i don't mind the order, Maan sabse last? Is that only for my Maan because i know my Maan's stink lol but Falling for you Maan is a dream, agar shadi kar na hai toh i want someone like him - caring, loving, handsome and rich lol

Kunal occupied what, i hate him sorry - esa pati ya phir lover kisse ka no ho

But Nandini aur meri chakkar different hai ❤️

For the last time Maan isn't dying and Geet isn't uniting with Rana😆 at least not for Cursed

If i ever write A Crowded Marriage then ur Rana will be the hero in that, aur Geet ka lover be 😉😆