Knock, Knock! Who's there? Pt 21/22 pg 80, 82 23/04

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Chapter 2

Superb Part

Geet took this decision to get pregnant by a sperm donor

which means that she would have known that the donor would not

be involved in her or her baby's life but now

she asking Maan to be the legal father but why

has she really thought about this and why would she have thought that he has no

partner in his life

there is no commitment between Geet and Maan unless she needs his help because she is in some kind of trouble

but what about Maan's life surely this would effect him in some way

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#132

Chapter 3

Shocking and Awesome at the same time

the problem when going into a relationship , when one partner is blinded

by charms and the fascination of love that finding out about the partner becomes

a forgotten tale

and this leads to complications in a relationship

here it was Dev deceiving both Geet and Meera and someone like that goes on to live

his life happily when the person he deceives is dumped in raw pain and destroyed

Geet wanting Maan's help I now can understand because of her delicate situation and Dev may even claim custody on her baby so to avoid that she would need Maan's help

but he has a girlfriend and he surely would not like to deceive his girlfriend

yet he says Yes to Geet without talking to his girlfriend .

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Taahir

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Chapter 4

Fabulous Part

I do admire Maan's politeness though he does not know Geet

and was shocked with her news of been the father he is very caring

towards her

oh hell Sameera is Geet's friend and it seems like she will now throw herself on Maan

the little conversation between Maan and his friend was lively and yeah when one's team win

what greater joy then showing the others down

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Taahir

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#134

Chapter 5

Amazing Chapter

Geet and Sameera are best friends but at times it is Sameera that frustrates

Geet to no end

it also seems like Geet has thought Maan would not agree and didn't want to get involved

in her mess so she was shockingly surprised by his visit and she also tells him no matter his answer

she is glad to see him again as she had thought she would never see him again

Sameera is one crazy girl and sure she is throwing herself on Maan

and calling him hot baby daddy Gosh this girl is too much

did Maan and his girlfriend break off because of Geet's situation or was it just something went wrong between Maan and his girl

Maan agrees and Geet calls Rana with all the legal documentation

waiting now to see what will happen next

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#135

Once again truly sorry for been this late to respond

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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#136

Awesome n lovely update

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Prabh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#137

Nice update.countinue soon

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Rashmi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#138

Nice update

So Geet was gradually healing from the heartbreak and betrayal ..Sam is really true friend of her helping her to deal with the life

Maan hadn't returned to her till a week though he promised her to be with her.. but then he came

OMG

I love the name Hot baby Daddy 😳 given by sam to Maan

wasie sam ko kaise pata ki baby is nephew it can be a niece as well😆

Aww Maan is nervous when it comes to deal with stranger and top of that sam is making him more shy by calling him hot baby daddy😆

haha Sam is lively as well as irritating for get sometimes so she asked sam to let them talk in private

lol like Geet Maan too is scanning her house😆

So Mana is agree to be a legal father and geet's civil partner

but what is this

where as Geet was shocked but sam who was eavesdropping.. waise wo itni khush apni friend ke liye hai ya khud line maarne ka irada hai?😉

Maan broke up with his GF? or it's his GF who has broken up with him?

well that's interesting to see why they broke up

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 6 years ago

#139

Congrats for the new story Sophie !! I know I am late..but reading it now..:)

Part 1

that was much shocking revelation..and intriguing to open the story with this

it wass like 440 volts electric shock when Maan was enjoying his time and life on his favorite sports.

In fact it took a moment for him to realize what she is saying..

I liked Geet though..a straight entry into his house and blasting the bomb there 😆

of course I understand, she wanted to relax first and sit comfortably considering her current state.

but how did she come to know about him..Isn't such info kept as secret?

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Part 2

Geet toh bomb pe bomb blast kiye jaa rahi hai..😆

I liked the tension in the ambience created.

him pacing out to and fro, her nervousness yet determined mind but backing off seeing him committed to someone else

loving the turn of event, they are fast paced and intriguing.

what led Geet to pave her way towards Maan's house, knock on his door and ask for some help.

but looks like she is doing it as the only option left..had there been any other motive, she would have contacted him earlier.

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