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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

Mere na comment block chal Raha
Read Kar liya thankfully remove honey say pehley
But ab comment Kiya write Karo
Geet journey to maan lover than wife than mother of his children hey love. This
I wish life asey hoti jasey kuch ff ki story hoti
Maan muje yeh maan na bilkil na bhi extra ordinary nahi laga
Simple man with small small guster too show his love
He not so passionate or possessive or obsessed husband or lover but normal which every woman special me want in my life
Dadi o m shocked
But life truth who ever came one day will go
Dadi tusli ki baa thodi hai Jo 4 5 generations dekh 😆
Ram Priya
I don't know whose parents they were
I never felt maan not their son
But son in law
They live like a family
Faces all good and bad times
Once o feel bad for Riya
Nobody deserves a lovesless life
I don't know why I feel bad
This is super duper fantastic story
After dulhan wahi than my second your favorite story it's not I don't like PV like it too
Frankly bolo toh mein bhot miss karney wali hoo
Di asey achi a hi story write Karo
Inspiration milti hai
Take care
Love you
From crazy fan

@BOLD
Ye achha bahana hai..
kabhi reader block hota hai?😆
hehe bach gayi tum jo pahle read kar liya warna har ek update par comment leti tumse😛
par chalo
ek comment to diya atleast
kaam chala loongi

Riya ke liye bad feel kyun?
Life is giving her another chance.. she can make it fruitful by loving her husband and his daughter.. she will get a family

Thanks fariya that this story is your favorite after dulhan wahi jo piya mann bhaaye
will try to start a new story soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Bahana nahi hai di
Mere sath asey hota hai
Jo kisi k sath nahi hota
Ek toh mere Dhakan dimag tortoise speed mein chalta hai
Duniya mein logo
Problem hoti
Mein problem ko jake hoti hoi
Ek jati hai dosri line Mei khadi hoti hai
Hum bhi hai rahoo mein khadey
Zara idhar bhi nazrey kijyee
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

Bahana nahi hai di
Mere sath asey hota hai
Jo kisi k sath nahi hota
Ek toh mere Dhakan dimag tortoise speed mein chalta hai
Duniya mein logo
Problem hoti
Mein problem ko jake hoti hoi
Ek jati hai dosri line Mei khadi hoti hai
Hum bhi hai rahoo mein khadey
Zara idhar bhi nazrey kijyee

Hehe
Pahli baar itne dramatic insaan see mil rahi hoon jisne dramrbazi me mujhe bhi peechhe chhod diya 🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey i was regular follower of ur story but had to leave india forum due to some reasons nd when i came back i cant read ur story furthur plzzz help me out how can i read ur story nd moreover its completed also plzzz help me out pretty plzzz
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi di!!!
First of all thanks for the password😊😊😊.Maan and Geet interaction with media was lovely.First Maan sternly told everyone that he will answer all the questions and then he told the media not to interfere in their personal life after this conference. Maan told them their love story and the truth about their marrige and really ,its appreciable that Maan doesn't reveal the Ria's name. When reporter ask the question that how much he love Geet ,maan answer contain very deep feeling. Geet was not able to answer the reporter for same question but Maan answer for her and really that moment was very emotional. those past 4 years were so emotional and you discribed their pain so well that even now i feel emotional hearing Maan answer and in last Maan share his happiness of Geet being pregnant with the whole world.😊😊😊
Then come Mohit's turn, Maan reveals that he have a GF and everyone pounce on him😆 and in last our sweet Geet save him. Mohit introduce everyone with Minal and the discription Mohit gave to her of Maaan was amazing but Minal reveal the actual thoughts oh mohit about Maan to him and everyone was proud to see love fo each other.
Shasha felt sorry for her mistake and apologized in front of everyone and Romeo and Maan interaction was best😃
Wow chart party in office hope I was the employ of KC😃😃😃 ,just kidding but reallly Maan can do any thing to make his Mithu happy and everyone come to know this in office.
No one can win when Dadi and Mithu make team and same thing haooened and Maan had to agree for aniversary party and same day Mukti came in world😊.such a great happy moment really and the fight begins that priya will be nani or dadi again😆😆😆 but priya gave a solution neithe nani nor dadi she will be called as baddi mumma as it not make her sound old too😆😆😆

Dadi's departure from the world was the sadest news and hard to beleive and I can't express my thoughts on it as without her this story seems incomplete.She was the perfect dadi in the world and its very difficult to think about her departure and she didn't saw Manas too. Your thoughts are right that everyone have to leave someday but sorry i don't want to think about this scene to make happy ending.

Wow the fight between Maan and Geet over their names😃😃😃 and in last maan melt Geet anger but shasha become victim in between😆

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khushbu_naimish

Hey i was regular follower of ur story but had to leave india forum due to some reasons nd when i came back i cant read ur story furthur plzzz help me out how can i read ur story nd moreover its completed also plzzz help me out pretty plzzz


You may be my regular reader but I did not saw you on my threads
recently i have started to repost the story
you may join me there
here is the link


read first part and comment . I will send pw of next chapter
and please share your thought about the update do do formality saying that it was an awesome update and you liked it😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: usss

Hi di!!!

First of all thanks for the password😊😊😊.Maan and Geet interaction with media was lovely.First Maan sternly told everyone that he will answer all the questions and then he told the media not to interfere in their personal life after this conference. Maan told them their love story and the truth about their marrige and really ,its appreciable that Maan doesn't reveal the Ria's name. When reporter ask the question that how much he love Geet ,maan answer contain very deep feeling. Geet was not able to answer the reporter for same question but Maan answer for her and really that moment was very emotional. those past 4 years were so emotional and you discribed their pain so well that even now i feel emotional hearing Maan answer and in last Maan share his happiness of Geet being pregnant with the whole world.😊😊😊
Then come Mohit's turn, Maan reveals that he have a GF and everyone pounce on him😆 and in last our sweet Geet save him. Mohit introduce everyone with Minal and the discription Mohit gave to her of Maaan was amazing but Minal reveal the actual thoughts oh mohit about Maan to him and everyone was proud to see love fo each other.
Shasha felt sorry for her mistake and apologized in front of everyone and Romeo and Maan interaction was best😃
Wow chart party in office hope I was the employ of KC😃😃😃 ,just kidding but reallly Maan can do any thing to make his Mithu happy and everyone come to know this in office.
No one can win when Dadi and Mithu make team and same thing haooened and Maan had to agree for aniversary party and same day Mukti came in world😊.such a great happy moment really and the fight begins that priya will be nani or dadi again😆😆😆 but priya gave a solution neithe nani nor dadi she will be called as baddi mumma as it not make her sound old too😆😆😆

Dadi's departure from the world was the sadest news and hard to beleive and I can't express my thoughts on it as without her this story seems incomplete.She was the perfect dadi in the world and its very difficult to think about her departure and she didn't saw Manas too. Your thoughts are right that everyone have to leave someday but sorry i don't want to think about this scene to make happy ending.

Wow the fight between Maan and Geet over their names😃😃😃 and in last maan melt Geet anger but shasha become victim in between😆


Thanks priya for the lovely comment
@ Bold. I know that epilogues are for happy things only but that's how I make myself stand apart from others😆😆

That was just a natural life cycle of every living objects and I used dadi's demise to keep the epilogues natural..She could not stay with them ever one day she had to.. so i thought to include that in epilogue too
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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 97 - Maan was really brilliant and already guessed what will happen if he go on their planned day. It was good move that he left with all a day before their planned travel.

That part was emotional where their house in London where they stayed in the same room. Though they had bad memories for it still it brought them together. Geet was more emotional and told everything how she coped her stay in London with his memories.

Tow happy news for sujata's family from maan & geet. Geet really forgot her worry of being chased by media in this family time.

Maan was shocked to hear that geet still was same like old small mitthu who blindly trust her angel.

Pinki ko bhi saath late to adi ke liye company ho jati. Bechara jaise akela pad gaya. Though geet is his friend but poor soul always scared of maan.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 98 - Yes, I agree with geet that he has changed a lot. He became a complete romeo and all the time taking chances when she was around.

Priya was jealous of geet for being loved more by their husband. Lol. Agree with dadi that god already fixed them for each other before their birth. Their love story was unique.

Maan really cares for geet. He arranged a doctor to accompany with geet so that she will be there if geet again fall ill.

Ufff...these reporters were more interested knowing maan's wife than his achievement. Geet again started to worry about her face off. Wow. What a reason dadi gave that businessmen flaunt their wives at such events to get more attention.

Oh...update ended and was still waiting that geet ab aayegi, kab aayegi.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 98 - Omg... not in India but whole world was waiting to see who was mrs.msk. I liked how you narrated that in India all were waiting and sat eagerly in front of their TV sets to see mrs.msk. it was like some crazy watching india-pakistan match. The excitement was the same. Lol.

Geet again got scared of seeing the people in conference on live TV. I too wanted to know how geet or maan will answer their questions. It will be interesting to see how maan smartly will answer them. Geet needed boosting from maan. She was scared now but will definitely will do better in front of so much people.

Mujhe to lagta hai ginana padega pure FF me maan ne kitne forehead kiss diye hai...

Ufff.. I liked how he joked around to ease up the tension.

Ufff...kitana drama create kiya tumne...over entry of maan & geet. I liked that. It was like watching it in some serial.

Wah...kya scene create kiya tumne. All were must be shockingly surprise to see this side of maan, holding so protectively his wife and calming her down.

So like in serials, geet looked up very slowly to make all them stunned at their position, cameras stopped, they forgot to blink, all were motionless.

Their 5 years wait was over. Finally all saw who is Mrs. Msk. Oops...sasha ka reaction...seems she was already scared of the future consequences knowing geet being maan's wife. She already scared for her job and her status in company. Lol.

Poor romeo. He was shocked and now could understand each & every scene where maan always glared at him. Now he will definitely be away from geet. I just hope that geet will not lose him as he is her friend.

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