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MUST EEAD NOTE BELOW STORY
Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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here is res ...there I was thinking to ask for update ...
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MUST CHECK THE NOTE BELOW


Chapter 4




After savitri strict rply no one dare to say anything to geet .


Meera take geet upstairs as soon the ritual of muhdikhai is going to happen and geet need to get ready for it .

Meera help geet in getting ready .
Me- bhabhi u are looking beautiful veerji surely gone today
Geet blushed
Me- aap wait kijie .
i'll come soon to take u


..
Savitri guide meera to make sure no loophole left . after all it's the muhdikhai of badi dulhan
S- do everything soon meera. Anytime guest is going to be here
Me- ji dadi

..

Maan come to his room to take sone file when his eyes feel on his dulhan sitting on sofa .
He must admit she is looking beautiful .
He come toward her causing geet to get consious .
G- v voh h aa pp
She become more consious when she see him coming toward her

M- kyun?
I can't come in my room?
He teased

G- nhi nhi
Humara yeh mtlb nhi tha
Vo
M- voh?
Toh kya matlab tha aapka?

Causing her to get trapped in her words . she didn't get he is teasing her . for her he sound serious and lack of communication was surely creating an invisible wall in b/w them .
G- i didn't mean saachi!
She say
Causing him to chukled
Maan place a kiss on her cheek
M- u look beautiful u know

Causing her dil to go dhak dhak again.
She is surely gonna have a heart attack soon with closeness of her hubby and making her turn red in shyness.

And taking his file he left.
..


Savitri smiled as all praised her choice khurana's dulhan. And in relatives none dare to compare geet after morning incident bcoz all know savitri and moreever maan very well.
If savitri say something to maan then surely all of them are dommed in just few seconds MAAN SINGH KHURABA is known for hus bad temper.
All knew that very well . but he seems to be calm at home and hardly raise bis voiice and they just can't say about his current habbits as he is back just 2 days before from USA where he expended kc and setteled from past 3 yrs. And soon savitri going to annonce him the CEO OF Khurana construction.

..

Meera guide geet upstairs in her room asguest left to take some rest where maan was already present taking to his some client .

Maan while attending call turned as he hear some voice only to find geet standing there .
He frowned but was busy in call.

15 minutes passed when maan finally cut the call and turned to find geet still standing their on same place .
This is not done they can't move forward like that if hesitation & formality remain their .

He come toward her
Pulling herself toward him he asked
M- why are u standing here still?
G- voh aap
U were on call
M- toh?

Look geet make urself comfortable here. . this room is equally ur's as mine .i know it's akward as we don't know about each other .but i think we need time to know each other.
M- are u understanding?

Geet nodded in yes
M- make urself comfortanle no one gonna stop u here . no need to hesitate.
Saying so he kissed her and her breath stuck in her throat
Dhak dhakdhak dhak

Too close to her lips still not touching them

she put her hand on her heart that she think about to jump out of her body .

she look toward his figure going out of room .

then the things process in her mind
what just happen?


she is happy . so that was all just her assumption . she is not his unwanted dulhan

automatically her cheeks turn red in shyness
when meera come in her room

me- bhabhi ur bhai is here to take u back for pagphere
causing her heart to sank

she didn't want to go
that's strange
...

Hi all plz let me know ur view if u want this story to continue .
i'll stop updating the day u prefer to keep silant bcoz it take lot of time to write so i can expect few seconds from u .
thankyou


Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago

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