MG FF Myth: a timeless journey~Thread 2~ PART 39 pg 137 31st May 2018

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

why you here ?????

zyada jalo mat.. aapke thread pe bhi comment maara hai..

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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Posted: 7 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

zyada jalo mat.. aapke thread pe bhi comment maara hai..

jaale meri dushmann 😆
again why you here ... hoping for more lovey dovey scene on maaneet 😉

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Madhubala

@madhubala123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#963

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
Main Aa Gayi!!

So good to have you back Umang!!! 😃

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Madhubala

@madhubala123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#964

Thank you all my dear readers for being with me and showing the patience!!

I can't express in words how much I appreciate that. I keep re-reading all those comments and there is nothing more rewarding than that.

If you wish to follow through this story further copy-paste this link :

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

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Posted: 7 years ago

#965

I'm back and trying to catch up.

The story and divine couple in this unusual setting between times and in historical setting is always on my mind. Just attended a wedding few days ago and the rituals and cultural things done reminded me of thisnstory all the time. I was wondering how pompous these rituals would have been back in time... now ita more of a thing that needs to be done than a feeling of doing everything. Thanks for visualizing so many things for us! It made me enjoy our culture more than what I have done over years of mindlessly doing a few things and cribbing about it :) lol

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Madhubala

@madhubala123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#966

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet
I'm back and trying to catch up.

The story and divine couple in this unusual setting between times and in historical setting is always on my mind. Just attended a wedding few days ago and the rituals and cultural things done reminded me of thisnstory all the time. I was wondering how pompous these rituals would have been back in time... now ita more of a thing that needs to be done than a feeling of doing everything. Thanks for visualizing so many things for us! It made me enjoy our culture more than what I have done over years of mindlessly doing a few things and cribbing about it :) lol

Hey thank you for saying that!! 😳

I have been wondering where you are although I was myself not very active these days!! 😆

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#967

Part 35:

"Have enough courage to trust love one more time and always one more time. "

Beautiful quote.. Suits the scene well..

What does Yash has against Geet that he is not ready to listen to his mother also??

Is it because she took Sameera's place or because she is a Handa??

He was too cruel here.. Even during the trial he was unfair & biased.. Even he had personal grudges against Geet, he should have at least given a fair trial considering the dignity of the position he held..

OMG!! Nandini is also from future.. But did she not try to go back like Geet?? Coz she seems to know so much about everything, she might a well know how to get back to her world.. Then why she was here for so long??

Unlike Geet she was free & not held hostage right??

Loved how Maan came to rescue again.. And I am glad that he not only rescued Geet but also Nandini.. He once again proved he was the best Lord, the land could get..
Finally, it time for showdown..

Maan actually went searching for her village just to give her surprise?? That was really sweet..

But poor guy got shock instead..

Geet's Outburst was written beautifully.. Finally she said it, relieving her from the burden & guilt she felt while hiding things from him..

Lets see if Maan believes her or not..

From whatever I have come to know of his character, I am sure he will believe her.. It may take some time to sink in, but he will surely trust her & stand by her side..

Great update.. Maaneet confrontation was very intense & emotional..

But I think Geet -Nandini confrontation could be little more improvised with some extra effects..

The shock & realization on geet's part was little pheeka pheeka I felt I believe you could write it much better than this, given your superb narrating skills..