MG FF Myth: a timeless journey~Thread 2~ PART 39 pg 137 31st May 2018 - Page 18

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

I'm with you in this 😡

aaja behan,🤗
ab hum hi hai ek doosre ka sahara😭

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

Hayee!! me too di, me too😳

we are in one team ...

Fabulous update

Awesome update maaneet married and both taking part in rituals even maan found geet with his eyes closed the oldies so shameless they wanted to hear maaneet Sr so funny maaneet jump on bed to get rid of them desire and tension in that air maan sharing his secrests with Gert who was calming him but then felt guilty as masn was telling her everything about him and his friend Jai but here geet was betraying Jim not telling him about herself let's see how Gert tells him about herself if maan believes her or not

Maan shared things which he never shared with anyone...

With this beautiful fairytale update we could see how deeply Maan is falling in love with jis Lady. Now that she is his wife his attraction is becoming more visible - be it finding his Lady blindfold amonst 9 others or the last scene where he is giving in to the temptation once she showed a hint of interest. Despite all that he is a true Gentleman and will not go against her wish. That is the best part in a relationship and seeing that being true in that era is surprising when Kings and Lords had multiple wives and forced pretty girls to marry and bed them. Women were less respected back in time and had no rights either. In this case Maan is giving Geet the full honor and respect despite his own attraction and condition. This, i'm sure will leave Geet more impressed and hungry.

I fear when she opens her eyes , she will regret the closeness and Maan will back out again. How fair is that... not fair specially as Geet is definitely attracted to him too.

The jumping on the bed was such a cute part. Who thought the khadoos and uptight Maan Sing Khurana can do such a childish act? So he knows about the ladies standing outside newly weds rooms and what goes inside? Lol I thought he would be conpletely inexperienced and cluless on what goes on behind closed doors.

Now comes my question and your previous intent for Maan to gift her the ring. I'm looking fwd to that moment when he will gift her the precious stone and her expression and what he says to her while gifting... i'm sure the cosmic connection will instantly happens after that and none will be able to control any boundaries after that. Oh man, am I falling in love with this couple and want them to be together for eternity? Wishful thinking?

Geet is suddenly getting bold and losing her senses too... now that she reminded herself of her reality, i wonder if truth will be releaved to Maan at this time... will he be even able to believe anything? It boggles my mind thibking what will he think and make out of her truth.

Please please send us another update soon... you surely don't want to tease us too much now.

The pictures were classic btw!! Too appropriate and perfectly placed. I wonder if you wrote some lines as per the pic or wrote and then found the pic... don't worry about pasting too many pics... we love the story either way.

Geet teasing Maan then distracting him with her questions and Maan opening up to her and telling her his deepest secrets was indeed a nice moment and i'm surprised the guarded Maan is not thinking anything beyond his duty towards his wife... he did indicate he knows nothing about her but did not keep that as a condition. He went with the flow of openj f his heart up not wanting anything in return. Will he confess about her attraction too?

Focus Madhu, focus! We are desperately waiting

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet

With this beautiful fairytale update we could see how deeply Maan is falling in love with jis Lady. Now that she is his wife his attraction is becoming more visible - be it finding his Lady blindfold amonst 9 others or the last scene where he is giving in to the temptation once she showed a hint of interest. Despite all that he is a true Gentleman and will not go against her wish. That is the best part in a relationship and seeing that being true in that era is surprising when Kings and Lords had multiple wives and forced pretty girls to marry and bed them. Women were less respected back in time and had no rights either. In this case Maan is giving Geet the full honor and respect despite his own attraction and condition. This, i'm sure will leave Geet more impressed and hungry.

I fear when she opens her eyes , she will regret the closeness and Maan will back out again. How fair is that... not fair specially as Geet is definitely attracted to him too.

The jumping on the bed was such a cute part. Who thought the khadoos and uptight Maan Sing Khurana can do such a childish act? So he knows about the ladies standing outside newly weds rooms and what goes inside? Lol I thought he would be conpletely inexperienced and cluless on what goes on behind closed doors.

Now comes my question and your previous intent for Maan to gift her the ring. I'm looking fwd to that moment when he will gift her the precious stone and her expression and what he says to her while gifting... i'm sure the cosmic connection will instantly happens after that and none will be able to control any boundaries after that. Oh man, am I falling in love with this couple and want them to be together for eternity? Wishful thinking?

Geet is suddenly getting bold and losing her senses too... now that she reminded herself of her reality, i wonder if truth will be releaved to Maan at this time... will he be even able to believe anything? It boggles my mind thibking what will he think and make out of her truth.

Please please send us another update soon... you surely don't want to tease us too much now.

The pictures were classic btw!! Too appropriate and perfectly placed. I wonder if you wrote some lines as per the pic or wrote and then found the pic... don't worry about pasting too many pics... we love the story either way.

Maan is a one woman man by choice!! Doesn't mean he is clueless. In his teens he must have had his share of action 😲 🤣

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

wow.. finally she is his ardhangini..
Superb rituals, especially the "baahon ke darmiyaan" one.. she in his arms😳
Oh Boy!! these buddhi ladies are so shameless.. In this age also they want to hear such things when they are actually supposed take sanyas..😲
These two are so naughty.. fooled the oldy ladies so easily.. itr was so hilarious.
jumping on the bed🤣
Something something is happening to both of them.. shadi ke side effects😉
He is helping her remove her ornaments but not doing anything..
First time I am hating his overly gentleman nature😡😆
What a woman, at her wedding night she is speaking about her wannabe sautan
Jai fell for Princess😲😲 meera was so lucky to be a princess in previous life..
Rana Handa was such a kamina😡
emotional & heart wrenching love story..
For the first time I got something to point out in your story
I felt when telling about his past & Jai maan was supposed to be very emotional & the story was also supposed to be intense.. but this part did not reached the desired effect.. I felt you could do better here & bring out those intense & painful emotions in a better way..
Well that was the only part lacking..😛
Geet is being the seductress here yet not letting him touch her..
Are you by any chance taking revenge for suggesting that song??😡
Coz she is here touching him yet not letting him touch her..😳
Even now when he wants to kiss her & do naughty things to her she is thinking of stopping him..
Passion wise, it was beautifully written, their desire for each other could be felt very clearly.. Even the starting fun brought out the desired fun element.. Only thing was the past one which I pointed out.. Hope you improve there too..😃
Overall a lovely update..
eagerly waiting for next update & SR

Fantastic update but geet is from 20th century will they consummate their marriage life if she did , will that affect there future but I want to start their life now and live happily