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seema saini

@HateMee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Nyc start...Maan is nyc person.. Enjoying life but knows his limits..that person is Geets dad i guess

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

first of all liking him
may be not playboy type
young carefree but still responsible liked it
and geet poor girl
will they meet ?

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Nice update

Maan is a nice guy with anger issue typical msk tyoe

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Congratulations on your story

Character Sketch is very Interesting

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

thanks for the pm! terrific update! well written! feeling 4 Geet! Maaneet are totally opposite! Geet is chubby while Maan is a fitness freak! Maan was rude to the old man that appeared in front of his car! but glad he calmed down and offered to drop the man home! update soon

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Fantastic Start

Maan enjoys his gym and thereafter clubbing having fun with his friends

but it also seems like he is a very short tempered person

holding an elderly man's collar not nice but at least he offered him a lift too

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@Endgame

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

lovely start
poor geet people are so mean
liked maan good guy

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Interesting start dear

Liked it!!

Geet was mocked upon apropos to her weight gain and was judged by her weight. People are so mean and spiteful towards her. Felt sorry for Geet. Beauty holds in the eyes of the beholder !!

On the other hand Maan seems to be fitness freak and health conscious person with certain morals and discipline. Maan was angry on the stranger who came Infront of his car due to lack of attentiveness. Maan mellowed down his anger and offered to drop the stranger at his place.

Looking forward to the next update!

:))

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Awesome update ..

People are bullying geet as she is over weight ... This is our society we live in who only give importance to looks and money... Felt very bad for geet... On the other side maan is a fitness freak.. Liked the way he behaved with the stranger... 😳

Thanks for pm.. Waiting for next update 😃