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Posted: 7 years ago
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welcome back and will wait for update
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I really love maanmeet most intense story
and laws of love
I still read those when I get time
looking forward to it
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Wow ... Omg i cant believe this .. You are back !! 😃
Actually my first ff that i read on maaneet is laws of love ... Infact i feel that its because of you i got interest in maaaneet fanfictions and now you are back and i am soo happyyy ... Plzz do continue 😳
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Congrats on new story dear
Nice concept.
Looking forward to the story.
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Congrats for new story, waiting for update dear
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Prologue

Maan singh khaurana was laying on the beach, his bare back facing the sky. His eyes closed he was enjoying his well deserved break. He sang a happy tune as he listened to the music blaring from his mobile. No family or employee to disturb him for one whole week. suddenly, his mobile starting ringing cutting salman khan's swag ka sawagat in middle. Irritated he glared at the phone for a moment having the urge to just let it ring but at the end he picked it up.

Maan,''MSK speaking.''

His grandmother spoke from other side, she sounded so worried that alarmed that got up as he listened to her. His temper rose as he listened to the latest blunder in which his brother had landed himself.

Maan,'' daadi I will take care of it.''

His one sentence was enough to calm down the old lady, she put the phone down and turned to her daughter, Aasha,'' It's alright Maann will handle it.''

Aasha took a deep breath in relief.

...

Geet haunda stood in the patio of her haveli. she moved slightly back as she took aim with her slingshot, the stone struck true and an unripe mango fell down on the ground. Her 7 year old nephew shouted with happiness. He ran to get his afternoon treat. Geet watched him happily and turned to go back inside when her eyes fell on her elder sister, Naintara. she was kneading dough in kitchen, which nothing unusual, except they had a dough kneading machine now. curious geet glided into the kitchen, the scent of freshly made rice pallao hit her nose. Ignoring her crying sister, she moved her evil clutches toward the rice and filled her plate with rice. she ate the rice enjoying the taste. food was her first love, other things could wait. only when she was finished then her now happy mind reminded her about her sister's crying. she looked around but naintara was already gone. she skipped outside looking for her. she found her at roof, putting away washed clothes. she looked at one of the suit, wasn't this washed yesterday? did naintara washed it again?

she tapped her sister on shoulder,'' di.''

Naintara turned to look at her,'' what?''

Geet,'' Are you alright?''

Naintara seemed to be waiting to share her sorrows with anyone. she started crying immediately, geet let her cry to her heart as she watched the kites flying in sky. she will need to text brij bhaiya to bring kites for her.

Naintara sobbed,'' he said he loves me but now he is not picking his phone. What I am going to do? I will die Geet.''

Geet stared sheepishly at her sister, she hadn't listened to whole of her sister's story. Thinking it was best to not let her sister know about her mind wandering, she sympathetically patted her on hand,'' So, he is not picking up phone? how did you get his number?''

Naintara blinked,'' dev gave it to me. he used to call me daily when he went back to delhi.''

Geet looked at her sister surprised,'' that city boy, Dev singh khaurana, who came here to buy land for his new factory?''

Naintara nodded,'' I love him geet. he said that he will marry me.'' There was a buzz buzz sound, geet saw her sister open the big knot in her dupatta and she removed a small mobile. Geet watched her jealous. she always wanted a mobile but darji hadn't allowed it.

Naintara listened to call and then, she looked at Geet happily,'' It was dev's mom, she has asked me to come to Delhi to meet her.''
geet her eyes still at mobile phone asked,'' why isn't she coming here?''

Nainatara frowned,'' You are right, why didn't I think to ask her that?''

...
Three days later

Geet Haunda got off the bus from Hoshiyarpur. she went to look for a taxi which could take her to the khauran constructions.

Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Congratulations for the new story 👏

Nice concept 😊
Can't wait for this to start
Continue soon



Thank you dear. Hope you are happy now. I am fervently wishing that it will be up to your expectations.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you😳. It feels good to write about about two of my most beloved characters again.
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Originally posted by: sagorika93

Welcome back to geet forum dear writer ..

I m super excited for ur new story ...
I read ur previous stories ..But that tym I was a silent member so could not comment ...But will surely do this tym..
Concept is interesting ..
Looking forward to it ..


Thank you so much for your warm welcome😳. I hope you will like this story too. The geet is slightly different from the geet from previous two stories but I hope it will be acceptable by everyone.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Congratulations for the new story 👏

Nice concept 😊
Can't wait for this to start
Continue soon


Thank you dear! Thank you, I hope you like the story too.

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