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HI my dear readers. First thing first am really sorry for making you all wait but i was little upset that am not getting proper response for this ff. So i thought of stopping it rather than troubling you all with my scribbling.

But when i see few peoples regular comments i thought am doing injustice to them... so am back and about update. Yeah its done but little bit of editing work is there so wait few hours.. tomorrow morning i will update.

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PART 15:
BANNER BY LOVELYUMANG

BANNER BY MAANEETFAVO



NOTE:
italian words are self talk or thoughts of the characters.
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Varun: dont worry bhai she will be fine... she is more powerful than you, me and even dadaji... but her powers get triggered only when she meet her mate i mean soulmate

Arjun: ohh... ok lets get some sleep. But before that varun help me in openning these fake bandages.

Varun: sure bhai...


MUMBAI FOREST BANGLOW:

After cleansing up the mess both sat near the couch.

Maan: adi what are you doing here at this night.

Adi: Not feeling sleepy with this lot of energy flow so just thought of having a drink. . . What are you doing here you went to bed half an hour ago.

Maan: Same here not feeling sleepy and thanks for you dropping that glass.

Adi: hmmm... so what about a drink.

Maan: yeah sure. Saying so both move towards the mini bar.

Maan: Adi are you following up that person from south india.

Adi: haan, everything is going good. Day after tomorrow afternoon we have a meeting with them.. we may get some clues.

Maan: only clues we are getting we are not getting the exact details. We have only few months adi. Already 3month has gone with no improvement

Adi: i know maan but dont lose hope, we have 8 more months. We are working on it.

Maan: hmm. I hope the person has some desired details we are expecting.

After few rounds of drink both move towards their respective rooms to take rest.

MAAN'S POV:

Before i have only two responsibility dadi and annie and even if i cannot find solutions i planned something for them but now i have someone for whom i have to find the solution whatever may come.

Geet, the girl who steal my heart at very first meet for whom i waited 2years and everything is gone by a single incident.

Only i know how much it pained me to act like i dont know her and she is nothing to me when in reality howmuch important she is in my life.

To save her and my family from my own self i kept her away not anymore. I can't bare this... atleast i deserve this much to keep her around me until i can.

I sat on bed worried about my future and this puzzle that holds the key to my freedom from this secretive life and return to my old happy life .

I turned and on the table is the reason and energy that drive me to not give up.

My misty's photo, the picture i have taken when i saw her for first time 2years back., with happy smile her pleated hair that green punjabi suit that compliments her fair skin. seeing her smile a smile spread on my face, i hugged her picture close to my heart.😊 😊I still remember how i meet my love very first time.

FLASHBACK:

After completing the call i turned when a pink colour duppatta fall on my face suddenly and i tried to remove it thinking it be one of my girl fans work to charm me . But when i was about to remove it i saw a girl in a pink salwar kamiz coming my way...

For a second i felt the world stop, she came and stood before me i was immersed in her deep hazel eyes decorated with kajal, her pointed eyebrows raised like a mountain peak looking at me. Her pink petal like lips were moving may be she is talking. I lost myself when i saw her lips are decorated with a smile. . My trace broke when i heard her snapping her fingers before me.

geet: Hello Mr. Where are you lost, My duppatta she bring her hand towards me asking for the fabric covering my face still.

Seeing no action from me she herself pulled the fabric when i also tried to pull it to see her face clearly my fingers accidentally touched hers and i felt my heartbeat raising for first time ever. 😛😉
Usually i make girls heartbeat raise and so i got my name dhak dhak from girls. But this girl made my heart go dhak dhak. I put my hand over my heart so as to stop its fast drumming music afraid if she could hear it. Now i know she is the one i have been waiting for.

Even before i realise anything i saw her turning away pulling the duppatta and running away from me... why? Did she think i wantedly touched her.. did she think am a roadside romeo.😕

I tried to follow her when i got pulled back to see adi standing there with a questioning look. I ignored him and turned only to see her no where around.

Adi: Maan, what happened man.


Maan: wohh.. i turned around showing him the direction she went then i again placed my hand on my heart feeling it turning normal again..

Adi: what happened maan, why you are checking your heartbeat.. do you want to go to doctor. He hold my shoulders and turned me to face him.

Maan: No doctor can cure me now. Am totally lost and hopeless😳. I said smiling at him.

Adi: Maan what are you talking about? Maan please lets go to doctor. . . I will call him first. He started to enter the doctors number when i pulled his phone.

Maan: i said na i don't need doctor. Adi listen.. he looked at me expecting as if am gonna reveal some secret.

I MEET HER.

Adi: who?

Maan: the one i have been waiting for... i meet her.

Adi looked at me confused then at my hand placed on my heart..😆 as things drop in him he looked at me shocked and came his standard laugh hehehe

Adi: you mean woh... you met her? How when where who is she... how you know its her???

Maan: Adi i will tell everything but later. Now i want to follow her and know about her. I can't miss her.

Adi: i understand but am also coming to see my bhabi..

We went inside a near by shop where i found her entering last. Its a girls outfit shop we pretended to look for something and was moving around when i again heard her voice from a corner i moved there only to see chubby girl and one slim Muslim girl fully covered in black colour burqa standing and no one else i was ready to move away when i heard her voice again.

I WAS ASKING FOR THAT DUPPATTA AND HE WAS STARING AT ME WITHOUT BLINKING... I ASKED AGAIN BUT NO MOVEMENT HE STOOD LIKE THAT, FOR A SECOND I THOUGHT HE IS SOME MODEL DOLL THAT IS USED TO DISPLAY DRESS. . .

Wait is she talking about me. Yeah whoelse i was the one who stood still seeing her.😲 I saw adi raising his eyebrows asking is it me? I nod yes. Then i was waiting what she will say further about our first meet. When i saw the chubby girl telling her something.

Then...KYA HUA?

kuch nehi hua, i pulled my duppatta and came here.

Kaise hai woh? IS HE HANDSOME...

HOW DO I KNOW, HIS FACE WAS COVERED WITH DUPPATTA NA.

Saying so she opened the trial room door and came out in a green punjabi suit. Oh my god how she manage to look beautiful in every dress she wear❤️. Adi nudged me asking is it her. I nodded yes quickly.

Maan: how is your bhabi.😉

Adi: she is very beautiful maan. Am so happy for you. Before he continued i shut him to listen what she thinks about me when chubby girl asked her something.

SO YOU DID NOT SEE HIM.

YEAH I DIDN'T SEE HIM CLEARLY I MEAN HIS FACE BUT HE WAS TALL MAY BE AROUND 6 FEET AND HAS A FIT BODY. Hmmm...MAY BE HAVE A SIX PACK TOO.

Atlast my daily exercises and gyming habit had got to do something for me👏👏. I smirked at the way she said putting her index finger on her chin tapping it like thinking about me having six-pack or not and smiled thinking Dont worry my dear you will get to see it one day😳.

When that chubby girl asked her something..

NO ONE CAN BE MORE HANDSOME THAN MY DHAK DHAK, MSK SHE SAID DREAMILY.

What that girl is also my fan😲... adi adjusted my collar teasing me.. i saw her pulling the chubby girls cheeks and said

HAAN BABA NO ONE CAN BE HANDSOME THAN MSK. OK MY DEAR MSK FAN.

she said and go near the Muslim girls ear and told something and giggled. Oh everything about her is beautifull but her giggling sound its gem on crown. Its musical i immediately took my phone and recored it...

Then the three girls went towards the cash counter and paying for the dress and moved down. I followed them where ever she went like a puppy and clicked few pictures of her. I followed her crossing the road when i saw her helping a old lady to cross road when i was about to cross a bus passed me in which i missed her...

Me and adi searched her at last reached college picked up annie and reached home. After presenting the gifts to annie and dadi and spending whole day with them me and adi went to our room to pack our bags to leave for Australia by nextday early morning flight.. not before appointing enough bodyguards for dadi and annie safety and also hired few people to know about the girl we meet in mall.


AIRPORT:

We came out of airport when MR. JAMES WILSON come to pick up and took us through thick forest area somewhere outskirt of Queensland to our 2bhk flat where we are going to stay for next 2 year as our site is near from here.,

After showing us around mr.wilson left and as we were tired so we called it a day and went to bed early as we have to meet officials tomorrow setting up alarm clock...

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PRESENT (FOREST MANSION):

I wokeup hearing a loud alarm clock and looked around to locate the clock but there is no alarm clock😕 then i remember our new super hearing powers. I got down from bed and went to next room to see adi stopping the alarm clock.

After having our breakfast dose of drink i sat in my study room to continue work as we have to leave to delhi early morning tomorrow. When adi came with the news of the people started from south india and will reach delhi today evening.

When i remember i switch off my phone and dadi would have called and got worried. So i went to get it from my table and on it when i saw few missed calls from dadi and a unknown number.

I dialled dadi and informed her about my arrival tomorrow morning and after few minutes i cut the call as the network is breaking. Then i remember call from unknown number i thought to ignore but i dialled to know who?

I called after few rings when i was about to cut the call the line got connected...

GEETS POV

ARJUN'S FLAT:

I dont know what is troubling me whenever am going near that sadu dhust dhanav Mr.Khurana, i feel like my mind and heart is fighting against each other but for what? That day also when i fall on his arms i felt like its the right place for me in this world where i deserve to stay forever but suddenly why i felt like someone or something forceing me to get away from him.

And today in his cabin again i felt like i shouldnt be here so i thought to take my purse and mobile and run off but how he pulled me on his lap and kissed me on forehead i felt like i won the world but as i heard his words misty i dont know what broke inside of me but it hurts. And i slowly left from there without a word.

But what is happening to me whenever i am near mr.Khurana, i fell both pulled away from him and pushed to him.. .. ..

what is this feeling am confused why this Khurana family is like this??? Mr.Khurana loves someone but when asked dadi tell he is not getting married. This annie loves someone but not even ready to reveal who it is me... her best friend we share everything between us. Then why she is hesitating to introduce balwant to us.

Suddenly i saw my landline ringing first i thought to ignore but went to pick up. Only one line crossed my head as i heard the voice and unfortunately i said it aloud.

MAAN: hello i got a call from this number. May i know who is this? (I heard balwant voice... i guessed it easily as this landline is my personal which i use when i stay here and the man's voice. I guess he may have called seeing my call yesterday.)
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geet: name the devil and the devil is here..

MAAN: what???😡 Who is this, how dare you call me devil. What you think of yourself you know who i am... dont forget you are talking to ma...

[COLOR=RED]geet: balwant singh, i know am speaking to balwant singh. Am aliya handa speaking...
he sounded tensed and worried. May be its a new number so he thought its someone and wow annie good choice just like your brother angry bird.

MAAN: hello aliya, am sorry i dint recognise its you.. i was in some tension. I could feel him talking relaxed now but why. Did my call make the change

geet: hmm.. balwant if you dont mind can i ask why you are tensed... i want to know him better to make sure annie is safe with him.

MAAN: its just some business tension.. something is not going the way i want so... but dont worry my dear girlfriend am fine.😉 ohh god again he started with his my gf thing

geet: am not your Girlfriend...😡 i hear him chuckle i know what will be his next answer so i stopped him.. geet: ok ok i know am a girl and your friend.😆

MAAN: i know my girlfriend is smart. i know that annie is smart and if u term girlfriend to me then also you r right orelse how would i got ur number.

geet: but see am not your Girlfriend seriously. What if your special someone listen to you calling me your girlfriend. i said as am worried about annie i dont want any misunderstanding between them, my only concern is to know he is good or not.

MAAN: haan leave about my special one she knows me well that i can never cheat on her so no trouble. And dont act as if u dont like me calling you my girlfriend. i was shocked to know that he know how much annie trust him and he is proud of it. ok so balwant one point. but again girlfriend

geet: Actually i dont. 😡

MAAN: you do ohh god how will i like it he my bestie's bf not mine.

geet: how you know that i like or not ?

MAAN: i know about girls. If they say no then its a yes. 😕what?? but i never get to know that he is saying he know girls may be annie is like that.

geet: what ? ohhh is it so? hmmm Then its a yes i guess

MAAN: yes. So you like me calling you girlfriend. Ohhh my dear i knew it. he cooed happly. but wait did he hear it i said yes so in his term girls yes is no and no is yes right.😕

geet: Aahh... stop it i said yes.

MAAN: haan i heard it dear. So he said causally which irritated me how did i not know grammar changes with gender and no one thought me in my school. may be i missed it.😭

[COLOR=RED]geet: so what you said if a girl say no its yes, then i said so its opposite right. i said as a matter of fact.

MAAN: you are not so smart i guess my girlfriend. Ok wait i will explain. Listen carefully ok. he said in so genuinely voice and i thought he is going to take my English high school grammer lessons again and paid attention.

[COLOR=RED]geet: hmmm.

MAAN: first if a girl said No its yes and if a girl said yes...

geet: hmm say it. i said as a curious student to learn something new.

MAAN: be patient dear. If a girl say yes then also its a yes. I hear his manly laugh. this mad is really something and me a idiot thought he is teaching me proper English how fool i am.

geet: you you you are such a...😡

MAAN:i will help you. Hmm maybe handsome smart stylist powerful...😉

geet: shut up. handsome smart my foot😆, u r such a flirt. trying to impress me

MAAN: that i am surely and no because you are already impressed. Dont say you dont like it.

geet: No i mean yes .. that is a no or yes or yes and no.. am confused after his knowledge on grammar.

I hear him laugh loud again

geet: get lost am going to hang up... you are confusing me a lot.

He again laughed uncontrollably but i guess i heard a bye dear before i cut the call.

PRECAP: ANNIE IS ANGRY AFTER FINDING TRUTH ? TRIO'S EXAM BEGINS GEET IN KHURANA MANSION. BALWANT AND ALIYA PHONE CALL.

PAST: MAAN AND ADI VISIT THE SITE AND MEET TRIBALS AND FEW STRANGE PEOPLE.
































































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Thanks for the update after a long time
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Maan wants to live his life like a normal person with his mishty but don,t know she is also blessed with powers and she is her soulmate, eagerly waiting when both will realize they are made for each other
I will read the previous parts again to get the good grip on story then I will give lamba wala comment
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Thank you so much for updating


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