Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec - Page 95

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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 5
Another chapter full of twist. Loved it
What a sad pathetic thing to do with your classmates! Geet's fellow classmates are horrible. I want to slap sasha and riyana hard.
How can they do this to someone like geet just because they are jealus of her? Pathetic girls. Maan would never like either of those creeps for sure.
Now I am a little confused. What did geet saw in the corridor maan an sasha?
If maan is with sasha then why would she feel insecure or its just that he was timepassing? But now seeing his attention at geet they plotted against her.
Loved how maan took care for geet. He is so caring towards her.
Ok so geet is angry because maan left her 2 years ago. He wrote a letter to her but that never reached her.
Now maan is dropping geet home.
Did he kissed her lips in the car? Oh my god!
His dialogues r super intense. What did geet mean by dont even think of doing it again ? Wow. Lovd maan's awesome reply to geet.
He is not going to leave her at any cost.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 6
Outstanding update
I had a little confusion but now everything is getting clearer. i love it how maan is so much possessive nd dominating for her.
They indeed shared a deep bond. Kissing her when he didn't even know the meaning. They were kids back then. But growing up made the situation a lot complicated. Maan wants geet the same way. Lekin geet ko pata hai ke ab pehle jaisa nahi ho sakta.
She is explaining everything to Raghav and is in flashback. Raghav is also adamant about his love.
I love the way you describe emotions. Excellent
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 7
I loved this update to the core. It's a fiery one.
Hated how geet reacted to maan and tried to insult him. But maan is a quick thinker. His replies were sarcastic and awesome. I love this sarcastic maan. He is plainly superb. He called raghav as sweetheart honey and what mot??? Ha ha ha. That is too much funny.
But why is maan here right now?
This story is keep getting flawlessly awesome with each update. Loving it. A total treat to read.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 8
I just love the title. The extra f
So maan is that extra f in geet's life. Now it's becoming a lot more clear about his perspective but again when he said he doesn't consider geet as a girl. gender doesn't concern him. Those were a little confusing but come to think of it rather it's a lot more deep in meaning. Because he values geet beyond anything which can restrict their friendship. He seems to value their friendship very much.
I find maan quite mysterious and unpredictable. Like why is he here at Geet's house on this late hour?
Raghav is also being smashed between two childhood buddies.
Geet ka i can't say yet lekin maan is in love with geet. If this is not love then what is?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 9
Amazingly beautiful emotional chapter
Loved every bit of it.
I am in love with this story. Now i get the name. Maan's alone life and geet is the elixir of his life. He is teen ager that's why a lot of emotoons are a little incomprehensible for him. But his turmoil confusion geet's care everything is so well written. Must applaud you for writing such crisply. Maan is tryng so hard to make his kitty mooh understand but she is hurt. Aww their meeting. Her diary.
He named her so many things. Billi. Heart melting updating. Now it's on 3 months ago.. u write beautifully.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 10
Oh no. Ye kiya ho gaya??? :(((
Misunderstanding between maaneet. Geet is so hurt that maan left her. It's heart wrenching because they were best friends. But Maan is trying too for getting to know what's wrong. I want to kill this rahul. He is so disgusting and psychotic. He proposed geet and clearly trying to frame maan. Still it is a little bit confusing. And geet seems like she is in love with maan as well. Because a friend would not feel bad if her friend has some other girlfriend. But she is also possessive and jealous for her kitty pooh.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 11
That was an insightful chapter. Realistic and i do agree that it could be extremely traumatizing for a teenager like geet. She is very innocent and naive. Knowing about this details from internet must be terrifying for the poor soul. So she is so much upset. I wish she would clearly ask maan. But teenagers tend to do complicate things a lot. Specially the transition between adulthood and teenage. I guess that is what happening. The whole matter of virginity has made geet shell shocked. Feeling so sad for her. And it is indeed relatable. Anjali has fuel the situation more.
The update was awesome
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 12 & 13
Oh my god. What a twist. I didn't expect this at all. I was slightly confused with maaneet equation but now everything just falls into place. So they have kissed. That too a passionate one. Wow. Totally loved the kiss. You write with visual touch. Just beautiful and praiseworthy. Could feel the emotions. Geet getting possessive flowed with her emotions. Maan can't hear his kitty mooh hates him. Aww so cute. I wish they reconcile now. But after the kiss geet shocks maan more. She is irritated because she thinks maan has taken their passionate kiss in a casual manner. She reveals all her anger and tried to pounce on him quoting the root cause about virginity. Poor maan. He is all confused. At last he said sorry. I love his sarcastic side and his emotional side is adorable. He can melt down just because of his mooh. He loves her so much. Please make him realise soon.
Outstanding chapter. Enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Looking forward to reading the next chapter
some time in July 😆
hoping Geet will learn the truth that her Maan did not do the
things Rahul blames him off
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Looking forward to reading the next chapter
some time in July 😆
hoping Geet will learn the truth that her Maan did not do the
things Rahul blames him off


Hahahah!!! God knows when will I finish MP!! 😆

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