Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#931

its been one month you have updated this.. 😡

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maaneetcraze

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Originally posted by: Roopa_1
its been one month you have updated this..😡

And the target is also completed

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Posted: 7 years ago

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please try and update next

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Solacesings

And the target is also completed

😭 You guys are scolding me how mean, you guys know it very well I was busy!! 😭

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Outstanding prologue.

I hope to read and give comments.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#936

Another beautiful name. Lover it.

Prologue is very intriguing. Teenage maan an geet. Geet is shocked that maan knows her name.

Reading next chapters.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Chapter 1

Wow i dun know what to say. Spendous start. Fab writing.

Geet goes in some room to search for duster and witness maan with sasha.

Sasha? Lol. I am still processing it.

Geet is not fond of maan. She is thinking he is some playboy or popular boy from her class.

It seems maan and geet doesnt know each other at all but r classmates

But then comes the twist.

Geet bangs on maan nd he says time up. Wow. What a lovely twist. Maaneet knows each other very well. Whole school is shocked that maan knows geet's name.

Geet is simple and i loved that she wears extra size clothes.

Aw maaneet r childhood friends. So cute nd loved it.

Hated riyana. Why is she rude with geet? Loved Maan's awesome reply to riyana.

Maan seems affected by geet.

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Chapter 2

Superb part. I am loving maan. He is a little mysterious and unpredictable but loving his wits.

Why geet gets so nervous around maan? He came to cafeteria to have his lunch but geet was worried with his presence. Really liked pinky.

Hated radhika for kissing maan and slapping.

Great reply from maan. So funny that maan is bothered about her kiss and not the slap.

Maan scolded geet to finish her food.

Maan's mother is dead? Really sad. Cant even think of a world without mother.

I really liking your writing style. Awesome

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Chapter 3

Loved the chapter name. Burn burn burn.

And it is burn for maan.

Raghav is geet's friend. He seems like a very decent guy. He is a singer and wow geet is a writer. She writes songs for him?

Maan is in full stalker mode and stalking geet. Lol

Geet and raghav decides to meet in the park and burns maan more.

Another twist. Twist pe twist. Shit raghav proposed geet and maan is listening to all of that by hiding under some tree.

Idhar raghav is proposing and geet is talking about maan?

Who is rahul? Why is geet linking rahul with maan?

Very interesting chapter. loved it. Awesome

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Chapter 4

Oh no. Geet has caught maan totally red handed.

Raghav and maan both claiming that maan has not sent raghav to propose geet but geet is so much angry nd not listening to their words.

She is so much angry on maan. Did he do something to trigger this much anger? I feel there is some misunderstanding taking place. Have to agree that i like raghav. He is quite well spoken.

Maan is shocked with geets outrage nd his reactions shock raghav.

I guess like the whole class raghav too didnt know how close maaneet were.

Outstandingly written fab chapter. Enjoyed the fire in maaneet.

Geet left in anger. Loved the entire conversation which took place in between raghav and maan.

Maan is so much possessive of geet. It seems he is in love with geet but didn't realize that. A little bit confusing too.