Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#691

Hi.. I vl not be coming online from now until new year ae we are taking a family trip to Italy, every year in December we go for trips

So vl comment on all your upcoming updates after new year

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@astrisa

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#692

Omg this is another diverse update
Fantastic chapter n flawless writing loving this story so much
What is happening here
Now i find geets behavior totally justified
So this is the reason why she wants to be close 2 maan bt tries 2 stop herself too
I am sure this rahul has done something
Bloody mann kar raha hai ff me ghus k maru is rahul ko kamina kahika mere maaneet k bich ladai karwa di
Isko akhir kia dushmani hai maan se
Uff
The update is awesome btw
Its filled with twists n turns i loved the revealtions
So maan was forced against his will 2 leave india
Geet ka gussa hona bilkul sahi hai i dn blame her
Now m sure she loves him 2 bt she is just tryinh 2 supress it since both r quite immature
N they probably dont understnd the relations that well
I dn blame maan as well bcz its clear that rahul has planned everything n he said they were in same school
So rahul knew both maan n geet from way before that is very interesting.
The recoding n those pictures r the reason why geet is aloof with maan bt from maans pov i find him innocent so i feel geet should gv maan chance
Also ask rahul more try 2 gather more info
Now m waiting eagerly for the next ud
Plz ud soon ipti. Lv u 4 updating this 1 so soon

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Tris

@astrisa

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#693

Thnx 4 the pm baby
Plz ud the precap 😛

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@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#694

Mujhe abhi bhi mann kar raha hai k me rahul ko mar dalu
Kaisa ghatia banda hai yar wo uff

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#695

Originally posted by: solaceMG
Thnx 4 the pm baby
Plz ud the precap 😛

My pleasure baby!😳
Precap - sudhar ja beta! 😉😆

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#696

very nice update...so finally it is revealed why geet is so hurt and angry on maan...this Rahul is such a chepo he convinced her that Maan said all that about her and he told her to propose her so that he can use that to his advantage with all those proofs which I'm sure are fake as Maan can't do any thing like this to his geet who is his life...he can never lust his kiity mooh and that Rahul said maan wants her for his bodily pleasure and showed her maan's pics in which he is kissing girls which she was not able to believe and thought it must be photoshopped which I'm sure they are but they all looked real to geet...this Rahul is so cheap and I want Maan to teach him a lesson soon for hurting his doll and breaking their divine friendship with such a dirty trick...thnx for the pm hope u'll update the next one soon...

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i rok

@i rok

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#697

nice update...
geets pov...
what happened in the last two years...
what rahul did...
how maan left...
geet being angry on maan...
he didnt speak wth geet before leaving...

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@astrisa

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: Iptida

<font color="#009999">My pleasure baby!😳
Precap - sudhar ja beta!😉😆</font>

Nai sudhar sakti 😛
Precap
Precap
Precap

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#699

Intense update dear

Liked it !! Well written.

Lovely insight about Geet's thoughts and her present conduct towards Maan.

Geet was happy to see Maan back at the same time she was acting stubborn to know reason behind his sudden departure. Maan started to share his reason to her but alas was interrupted by Raj's presence and the convo was held mid air. So, Maan's biological mother is alive. Guess she wanted to claim Maan's custody or something. Did she threaten Maan's father with Maan's life !? Geet wanted him to confide her but alas when he tried to pursue her, Geet in her anger and frustration mocked him up. She was hurt with the fact that in these years of his departure he didn't try to contact her whilst he visited Delhi and also that he didn't confide her that Riddima is his cousin. Their lack of communication and their little misunderstanding led Rahul to take advantage of the situation. In absence of Maan he tricked Geet and made her believe him with his words and proofs. Geet still didn't trust Rahul's words but he used his trump cards.He used her love for Maan against her and manipulated her. Guess seeing Maan with Sasha added fuel to Geet's anger and to trust Rahul's words too. What enemity does Rahul as on Maan !? So, Geet endures Maan but is guarding her heart from falling for him inorder to prevent thyself from getting hurt and from enduring pain. Her confused behavior towards Maan is now understandable and justified too.

Thanks for the pm !

:))

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hi sweets, 🤗How are you?
Again You made my day with your beautiful comments!!

Glad that you called it a dynamic chapter!!

Coming to your comment- Yes it is the past where Maaneet is going to have that fight for which they were right now not in a cordial term!

Maan's mother - Sonali who died early when he was little is not his mother. Where is his biological mother? That is a part of the plot, can't reveal that!😆

As I have said why he left india the reasons are going to be revealed partially hence here that is!

Underline- lime- I am quoting from the chapter itself >> "Ohh...Really?? Do I know you Maan?? Should I know you??" The mockery and that blazing glare did its job in provoking an angry Maan! He is the one known for his short tempers after all. Even after trying so many instances what this girl is yielding him? Bunch of nasty attitudes! What is wrong with her!<< So yes indeed maan has tried to pursue Geet. But you have to grasp we are talking about the second day at school here- means not a lot of time was there to pursue her and this is where he drags her in the storeroom just not to create any scene in front of the whole school!
Maaneet share a very intimate and strong friendship for which fighting is a very natural thing to take place hence Maan who was just too much happy for coming back to india, he took Geet's reactions casually thinking that she might come around. The severity of Geet's turmoils were not groped by him well at that stage. He was just oblivious and happy to be back.

Orange - Well, that is for you to know and me to narrate!😉 isn't the present track is all about that right now? Maan is already in the mission! And now I guess it's clear as why Geet behaves so confusingly around Maan!

Thanks a lot for your extraordinary comment chetna!! Really appreciate your love and support baby!❤️