Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

#541

Awesome update..

Thank you for PM..

Continue soon..

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#542

what a fight..😲 world war 3 hua to uska scene kuch aisa hi hoga 😆
being same age, i also don't use those words.. kutta, kamina etc kaam chal jata hai apna..😉
but maan ki language dekh kar lagta hai, i am laging in that department😒
iss ladke ne galiyo mein phd. ki hui hai.. Raghav & Geet were literally terrified of him..
Geet is also too stubborn.. instead of trying understanding him.. she is complicating things even more.. she accepted Raghav's proposal😲
maan ne itne saare instructions diye raghav ko & apne aur geet k personal moments k baare mein bhi bol diya.. but phir bhi Raghav did not back out.. must say bande mein guts hai to stand against MSK
geet k upar na gussa aa raha hai.. sach mein.. i mean who believes a random guy over her bff since kg..🤔
Maan trying to solve the misunderstanding.. All the best buddy👍🏼

Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 8 years ago

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
what a fight..😲 world war 3 hua to uska scene kuch aisa hi hoga 😆
being same age, i also don't use those words.. kutta, kamina etc kaam chal jata hai apna..😉
but maan ki language dekh kar lagta hai, i am laging in that department😒
iss ladke ne galiyo mein phd. ki hui hai.. Raghav & Geet were literally terrified of him..
Geet is also too stubborn.. instead of trying understanding him.. she is complicating things even more.. she accepted Raghav's proposal😲
maan ne itne saare instructions diye raghav ko & apne aur geet k personal moments k baare mein bhi bol diya.. but phir bhi Raghav did not back out.. must say bande mein guts hai to stand against MSK
geet k upar na gussa aa raha hai.. sach mein.. i mean who believes a random guy over her bff since kg..🤔
Maan trying to solve the misunderstanding.. All the best buddy👍🏼

Where did he abuse except the eff and b word? Well I have to strongly disagree with you here sweetie...
Let alone 16 years old there are 10 years old who have phD in that department!😆😉

Maan was in new york for two years btw... Kuch asar toh hoga hi..😆

Geet - You will understand her side very soon! But yes she is hopeless!😆 Also Rahul is not some random guy that shall be disclosed in the upcoming chapters as well!😛

Thanks for your feedback!😳

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#544

by the way i loved the title of the chapter...
but i din't understand that dialogue which he said to raghav

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
by the way i loved the title of the chapter...
but i din't understand that dialogue which he said to raghav

Which one?

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happydays30

@happydays30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#546

Awesome part
Maan is so possessive towards Geet n she wants to show this to Raghav
Maan shocked them with his choice of words n his statements
Geet is not less she put fight against him , finally Raghav left place

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: Iptida

Which one?

bff with extra f???
bff means best friends forever right??

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

bff with extra f???
bff means best friends forever right??

Yeah! He also meant the forever thing only in a sarcastic way as f stands for something else also..
in simple sense he meant boyfriend se jayada haq hain usey just like that extra f!

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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Tris

@astrisa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#549

Got the
will read & comment soon

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#550

This is another story of yours that I love reading , this Maan I totally enjoy

The Chapter was just Perfectly Awesome

Oh how cool Maan answers his Misty that he has a heart its pumping blood and he is all perfect and fine standing in front of her and her so called BF , now annoying her further he tells her she is Miss Topper but so sacastically reminds her she is Ex Miss Topper because he is there and has taken her place .

okay and I so loved how he said "Now stop F... with me and tell me where is it " , he is there mainly for a mission to recover that recording Rahul made and at the same time to give Raghav a dose of what BFF is about . the possessiveness I just can't get enough of this shade of his .

poor Raghav wanting to leave and Maan telling him to stay quiet while Geet sizes the moment in defense of Raghav , she riled Maan up and shattered him with her words but he is strong enough not to show his emotions and the fact that Raghav is there just makes it worst so what better way to then to turn the tables around and let Raghav know about their unique friendship but before that I could actually visualize Maan saying to Geet Don't give me any F... Attitude , now isn't that so cool he knows just how to simmer her down too and yes it also felt that Maan could easily lose himself in her closeness .

his demands his statements that held so much anger , possessiveness and as if he only as all the rights on her well he did already make that clear with Raghav that everything should pass by him oh I forgot Maan telling Geet that from now she will behave like she used to do before wow that was just so awesome I felt at that statement he was wanting his old friend back but didn't show it as his attitude was raw and wild

I'm so into this Maan's character

Geet having tears in her eyes and that has to be Maan's weakness

ouch ! the way Maan calls Raghav as sweetheart had me in stitches then he says my heartfelt condolences oops sorry I meant congratulations now Maan was at his sacastic best

telling Raghav that his Cutie , his Baby is angry with him because he left for two years and I think he wants Raghav to understand just how special Geet is to him that he won't stay away from her even if she wants that , Maan says so Raghav Baby again been sacastic before he rectifies himself calling him dude

Thank you for this Mind Blowing Chapter I totally enjoyed it