Till death do us apart - SS - Chapter 5 pg 1 (28/05/2020)

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Awesome update

Payal at last agreed to call maan her papa

It so difficult for her to accept maan as her

Papa she has her own reasons but geet

Convinced her

Maan and geet got married and he wants

Geet and payal to stay as a family to

Make his dadima believe them

Geet wants to secure her daughter's future

Geet she is unconscious

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friend_lee2006

@friend_lee2006

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Awesome update

Hopefully maan will find out geet illness

Will help her

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patikaddi1976

@patikaddi1976

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

read both part 1 and 2 now and liked the story. u r amazing writer, though the concept is contract marriage but story is proceeding different and liked this. payal is too cute. hope now maan find out geet's illness and treats her. update soon waiting

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#84

thanks 4 da pm! read and commented already! update soon

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jasika

@jasika08

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+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Lovely update

Waiting for next update. ...

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Very emotional update.

Payal refused to accept him as her papa.

Poor kid she has her reasons to not accept him as she fears he may also leave her n go.

But Geet feed her lies n made her to accept n she finally called him papa.

Meera n raj trust tried to know reason behind marriage but they were also ok after listening to Geet.

Maaneet got married n to get close to Payal he got ready to spend time with her.

Geet n Payal shifted to his house n Payal is so happy to see d house n to get a papa for herself.

Scary precap.She fell unconscious. Really hope maan came to know about her condition now n get her treated immediately.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for d pm:)

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sanum23

@sanum23

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

grt pt

maan married geet and geet convinced payal to call him papa

maan want his daadi believe that he is settled

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Just read both parts...and it looks awesome!!! I loved it!! So maan needed a fake wife to convince dadima and geet needed this marriage to secure her daughters future. ..poor payal will get a shock after a month when her maan papa will go away...hope maan finds out about geets illness...waiting for more!!!

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DreamyMadhu

@Dreamy30

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

nice update
Payal refused to accept maan as her papa
she think like dev maan also leave her
Maaneet got married
Geet n Payal shifted to his house
wating fr nxt prt