Till death do us apart - SS - Chapter 5 pg 1 (28/05/2020)

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Nice start...
Main pehli baar aapki story padh rahi hoon!!
Jab yeh padh a shuru kiya toh sab simple lag raha tha
Maan ko kc chahiye...
Dadi ko bahu chahiye...
Geet ko Payal ke liye paise chahiye...
Par jab Payal ne Maan ko dekhar jaise react kiya...I was shocked
Story bahut interesting hogi...no doubt about it!!!
Waiting for unfold the story...
Please send me pm and pw

Thank you dear. Welcome to my story world. I can understand little bit of Hindi. So please gv me comments in English if you can. So I can understand. I understood that the story is interesting for you. That really made me happy.😃

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: SAI92
u have start the story with sad part with Geet had tumor interesting start of the story

Originally posted by: nishamna
Nice concept. Geet is widow and she has a daughter. Recently she comes to know about her illness. Now geet is worried for her daughter. She heard adi and maan's conversation and she decided to act as maan's wife for a month. She accepted maan's every wish and in return she asked money for her daughter. Waiting for next dear

This is the first story of yours which I am reading...Congo on your new FF my dear. You are a "Marvelous" writer.👏

OMG, such a lovey story my dear...Poor Geet...but I am sure her babaji is showing her a way to start her new life.

Look forward to future updates😳

Thank you all😳

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: swapna.p
Congrats for new story..
Emotional update..
Waiting for next update..

Originally posted by: Gudiyeet
Maan only target his property but after marriage he got so he lied yo dadi he married a girl geet was suffered tumor she want her daughter safe she decide married man and accept his condition both talking about their life both atd shocked payel reaction nice update

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Very different n interesting concept.
Awesome start.
It's very emotional.
Geet is having a tumour.
N she agreed to be his contract wife to secure her daughter future.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: GeetMeet
Nice update dear mann is looking for a girl who will act as a wife for one month contract as he don't want to marry but he will get the property after marriage only Geet is ready to do it as she need to secure her daughter Payal life after her death also as she is suffering from tumour

Originally posted by: sanum23
nice story
maan will really fall fr hr in upcoming parts
geet is doing just fr hr daughter's future
payal soon accept him and maan too with heart i m busy till month with in laws but after i m free to read

Thanks all😃

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hottyangel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Chapter 1

Geet is suffering from tumor and her days are less... she heard maan talking about contract marriage and she agreed to marry him for her daughters future... payal rejected to call maan as papa

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iifr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

wow just read your story

Its very interesting

i m feeling bad for geet first dev leave her then payal and her illness

maan and geet getting married for month

payal and maan bonding is so cute

lets see what maan reaction after knowing geet illness

plz add me for pm

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hottyangel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

part 2

very emotional update... geet took the decision of marrying maan for payal and she made payal accept maan as her papa by telling lies... maaneet got married and payal is happy for getting a new papa.. geet and payal went to maans house as dadima is coming. what happened to geet... hope maan doesn't misunderstand her intentions...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

thanks 4 da updating! emotional update! well written! feeling 4 Geet! she has 2 lie 2 Payal! Payal happy 2 have a dad! Geet tells Meera n Raj abt her marriage! they r shocked! Payal n Maan bond! Maan likes Payal! Geet feels guilty as after month it will be over! update soon! scary precap

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nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

It was nice part. Payal denied to accept Maan as her father but when geet made her understand, she got ready. Though she had to say lie to her. Maneet got married and now they are in km. Maan is getting attached with Payal somewhere. Her innocence is making him fall for her. Waiting for next dear