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Chapter 27 : Dispelling
Reverie!



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She saw his smirk along with his statement so teased him, "Dekho na...The greeaaattt Maan Singh Khurana..Haayyee!!" She dramatically spread her arms followed by enlarging her eyes in her usual antiques trying to show the greatness she was speaking of, "Aap ko kaise fas liya? She winked at his smirking self.

But he got amused at her liveliness, "Oh!! Aisa kiya? Kiya pata maine tumko fasaya ho?"he winked back at her.

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"Oh toh matlab mujh mein kuch hoga na tabhi aap mujhe fasane layek samajhte hain?"she gulped the soup looking at him and again pointed her finger back at his direction.

He brushed her finger very softly and pulled her inside his frame as he was sitting on the edge of her bed and snaked his hands around her waist, "umm let me think, but iska kiya matlab hain.. hmm... Toh tum fas gai yeh maan rahi ho, right?" he smiled tapping her cute nose with his index finger.

"Ji nahi..."she pouted with an "o" shape tilting her head looking at him as she was resting on his chest, "Main smart hoon tabhi toh aap chahte thhey na mujhe fasana, mere kehne ka matlab ye hain! Samjhe, kitney buddhu ho aap, itna nahi samajhtey!"he saw her naughty smirk.

Maan jerked Geet's resting frame close, "Nahi tum buddhu ho tabhi toh faasi na?"he nuzzled in her hair while feeding her another spoonful, "Aur waise bhi tumhe faasane ki wajah toh kuch aur hain..."he gave a dangerous erotic stare at her petalic lips.

"Maan...!"she whacked his forearm playfully turning her head making a vivid eye contact.

She saw him leaning towards her while calling her name, "Geet...!"his gaze was soft.

Sensing his lips almost touching hers she put on a sharp voice, "Mr Khurana!!"her fake glare was reflected into her summoning as well!

But he was in a naughty mood, "Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana!"he summoned her very sweetly while gesturing her to gulp the last spoon of the soup.

"Chaddo...!Aap se toh behez karna hi bekar hain!"she couldn't hold her smile anymore so breaking her gaze she shifted her head back on resting onto his shoulder.

"Ummaahh..." he literally sucked hard into her cute dimples followed by cuddling her tightly from behind, "Meri mishti ne sara soup pee liya..!" he was rubbing her sternum lightly by his thumb pad into their cute cuddling position.

"Hawww...Cheater...!"her mouth opened forming her lips into a huge "o to which Maan leaned forward and took her in the world of a brief smooch. Afterwards, she saw him curving his lips in a satisfactory smile.

Maan's smile illuminated her whole world so her flushed lips also transformed into a beautiful dazzling smile. Then she rubbed her cheek with his cheek just like their childhood times, both still smiling and enjoying each other's happiness!

"Waise ye soup itna bhi bura toh nahi tha... haan thoda meetha laag raha tha.."he said indicating their kiss, "Meetha?" she said raising her eyebrows!

"Haan ji,, Meetha.. aab mere mishti ke paas jo kuch bhi jata hain woh meetha hi toh baan jata hain na!!"he always enjoys every bit of seconds he spends with her which always reflects inside his jovial voice!

Both lovebirds were enjoying the time with each other as Maan took Geet to his room and he was working on the projects while Geet was watching TV sitting on the bed.

He was serious about giving her bath but later got burned down with her dangerous glares and let the nurse do her job.

Later he dried her hair followed by combing her beautiful dark goldish brown hair meanwhile sniffing into the locks just like their childhood days! He is crazily addicted to her fragrance and she knows that too!

No, not only knows she simply loves this fact.

When she was very little she didn't understand that gesture of him but later upon at her teens she caught him red handed trying to adore and sniff her hair, when asked he confessed his love for her locks and her entire fragrance. At that time he described to her that she smells like newborn babies who are bathed into roses which he immensely loved!

Geet was smiling recalling all the craziness he had back then for her and now are still present in him! That made her heart filled with a profound joy and seeing her smile he just simply kissed her forehead, made her sit on his bed and both resumed their own activity as Maan was working and Geet watching TV.

It was almost noon and both of them had their lunch together downstairs with Savitri devi and then when they were back on their love nest Maan decided to watch a movie with his lovely wife.

Obviously, it was a romantic movie which Geet enjoyed immensely cuddling in Maan's protective arms while he watched her antiques attentively admiring her innocence and beauty! Time passed flying in a fast forwarding motion for them.

Night was falling with its own mysterious darkness but the Moon too peaked high as the shining savior!

As everybody else was busy in their respective works in the evening which is turning into night gradually- Annie studying for her test the next day, Sameera and Dev still not home and Savitri devi resting in her room Maan seeing the opportunity took Geet to the terrace for dinner.

Another reason was that Geet too complained raising her claims of wanting to enjoy the Moon and nature with him while having a dinner, and does he ever deny that pout? Never!

They had the best times with together enjoying under the curved dazzler who was the witness of their immense love so many times by now!



After the dinner Maan was tucking Geet inside her bed, checking everything to make sure if everything was alright and Geet was staring at his caring self intently deep immersed into her thoughts.

"Mishty...Tumhare bina pata nahi kaise nind aayegi mujhe!" she heard his handsome soft voice, also sensing his feathery peck on her lips and he saw her blush as an answer to his adorable remark. One weird thing she noted during the whole day within his extremely caring demeanor that he was avoiding looking at the incarnadine burn marks at her hands which were smeared under the aloe Vera gel ointment. She wanted to ask him the reason but in her heart, she knew how he couldn't bear looking at her scars ever!

Her mind recalled some incidents, when the little version of her returned home with bruises on her palms because the teacher punished her for talking inside the ongoing class and he couldn't even tolerate looking at her palm! Whereas the signs of the beatings were demolished very soon!

Another instance was after they acknowledged each other's love while Maan was eighteen and Geet was in an initial phase of her puberty.

It was a simple happening as she cut her index finger accidentally trying to peel off some fruit, he didn't glance at her cut before it healed properly. But afterward, she received countless kisses at that exact place so many times showing his weird love and care, which her teenage brain didn't understand back then!


"Maan...I love you..."she said showing extreme emotion through her voice meanwhile coming back from her thoughts staring passionately at him. Because the door was closed she couldn't stop herself from pulling him inside a hug on her laying frame continuing her talk, "Thank you so much for today! he was a little puzzled with her sudden remark.

"Ummm..."he moaned while kissing deep on her neck absorbing all her intoxicating aroma, "Thanks??? Kyun??"he put forth his query and kept adoring her body.

"Thanks for everything Jaan..."her voice was filled with all the unsaid profound love she shared within herself for him, "Thanks for giving me so many new memories, happy memories...Aur aapke kimti waqt ke liye bhi!"she tightened her hold on his shoulder.

He traced his fingers around her side curves while moving his lips cutely, "Raat ko sone se pehle jhagra karna hain tumhe???" his complaining whisper made her gasp a little, "Meri puri zindegi tumhari naam hain toh jiski saansein tumse hain woh insaan apne zindegi jeeyega kaise bina waqt bitaye?? Tumhe hi toh jee raha hoon main, mere sarey waqt pe haq hain tumhara samjhi, meri pagal Mishti?"he finished his endearing statement as his fingers were still brushing her twin sides making her aroused a little.

"Maaann..." Geet sensed her breathing is getting uneven, "Phir bhi...Aapke office mein bohot kaam..."she couldn't finish as his erotic gaze on her lips made her blush and she felt her mouth is dry with the increasing pace of her awakening desires.

But he continued his slow tortures unaware of her plight, as now his hands were rubbing her mounds in a habitual way while conversing normally where Geet heard his romantic voice, "Tumse jayda kuch bhi ahem nahi hain mere liye...kuch bhi nahi..."his fingers sensed her erected bud and he was amused at her flushed face as she was trying hard to hide her arousal. Now he groped her latent aroused state and how can he leave before pestering her a little?

"Kiya huwa???Chup kyun ho gai...hmmm!!"he teased her further breaking their eye contact by dipping his head on her throat!

"Maannn...Choro naa... shararat maat karo..dekho na kafi raat ho gai hain...Aap aab jao naaa..koi aa jayega..."she tried her best to conceal her inner desires which were screaming for his touches!

"Ye zalim jamana!! Hmmm...jana padega?? Theek hain...!"he saw the effect she had on him while the idea of teasing her was kind of making him much more desperate but he doesn't want any mess while she was still going through the healing process so he tried to resist his sensual urges!

"Aab tum so jao, hum subha miltey hain." Geet heard his voice and got pecked by him on her lips at the next moment, "I love you jaan..."he again brushed his lips against hers, "love you sooo much" pulled her lips inside his ragged ones this time. His resistance inside his own mind was fading away as she gave her own hot reciprocation by sucking his lower lip with her cute soft ones!

"Maan!" she pulled his lower lip back for few seconds and left immediately sensing both their rising heartbeat along with his hands which paced their fondling touches on her neck and curves,"Umm... Maan... aab koi shararat nahi..." she intervened , "abhi jaaaooo aaap!" and warned him with her stretching voice, saw him leaving her room with a reluctant body language with his childish pout.

She smiled seeing her endearing husband, he always makes her heart filled with so much positivity and joy that she forgets all her surrounding or even the fact that she has a burn!
"I love you so much Maan!"she murmured to herself and while thinking about him and dreaming about their future she slowly drowned inside the world of slumber!


"Good morning J a a n!" his sweet voice filled her eardrums while she opened her eyes to find out his handsome face before her eyes.

"Good morning baby!" she smiled back at him and received a kiss from him on her forehead.

He saw her face was beaming with happiness just seeing him, which made his reckless heart calm and he scooped her up into his arms and was forwarding towards her washroom.

"Yeh...Ye..Aap kiya kaar rahe ho?" Geet's eyes got wide opened, "Maan...Niche utaro naa...Subhe subhe shuru ho gayi aapki shararat!"

"Wifey...waise main shararat karna nahi chah raha tha par agar tum chahti ho toh kar sakta hoon...!" he put her down with a naughty gaze, she found herself in front of the wash basin mirror.

He snaked his hands behind her pulling her into a hug and nuzzled inside her nape, "Aaj aapko hum taiyar karenge...Aapne hato se" he said depicting his good mood.

She got nostalgic remembering their childhood when he used to treat her like some cotton frail doll. She was very little at those times of his care so she doesn't remember all clearly but one morning she recalled Rano was out for some reason and she was crying unable to find Rano after waking up from her sleep and saw Maan coming with a brush at his hand. He was tall so she had to stand on a stool in front of the mirror to reach the basin. Still, he was surpassing the little Geet by at least one foot.

"Rou maat na baby...Aa jayengi Rano maa... Woh baas bahar gai hain, Main hoon na aapke paas? Aap meri sabse pyari doll ho na?? Aaj main taiyar karunga Apni doll ko!!!!" she stopped her crying and stared at him with her big confusing hazels.

"Aaa karo...Muh kholo" he instructed her indicating at the brush and initiated brushing her teeth carefully.



"Kiya huwa mishti? Kiya soch rahi ho???Ho gaya brush...Aab tumhari dressing change karni hain...Today too, I so much want to give you a bath...par khair..."he kissed her cheek deeply and she returned back into the present.

"Aap ke liye main abhi bhi wahi choti si doll hoon na?" she asked gazing at him with immense love and respect.

"Umm...kiya huwa meri mishti ko? Achanak ye kyun puch rahi ho Jaan?"he pulled her close groping the intensity of her voice, "Of course you are my doll, my precious doll!" lovingly answered her rubbing his nose at her cheek.

"Hmm aise hi...Tabhi...Mere hand ka backside jala hain Maan, hateli bilkul theek hain, upar se aab toh kafi heal bhi ho gai hain...so main acche se aapna kaam kar sakti thi na?" She was back in her bubbly chattering self, "Phir bhi mere jo pagal patidev hain unko toh bas bahana chahiye...Aab jaldi se bahar jaiye aur nurse ko vejiye..." she said in her usual style making Maan frown.

"Waise Maan kahi aapne nurse ko bhaga toh nahi diya na apni badi badi aankhein dikha ke?" he saw her serene smile thrown towards him and he left her immediately still frowning faking his anger, "Tumhare liye koi dewaana bane phir raha hain aur tum aise hi majak udati rehti ho, hain na? Sach kehtey hain sab sacche pyaar ki toh aab koi kadar hi nahi hain" she smiled more hearing his cute dramatic angry voice.

"Ho gaya? Hey Babaji kitna nautanki hain inmein! Chalo aab chup chap jao aur Nurse ko bhejo..."she pointed her finger to his nose and put on a straight face reciprocating into his drama.

"Huh..." she heard his frustrated sigh and closed the washroom door once he went out.


Maan saw the nurse coming out from Geet's room while he was busy on his laptop inside the study-room. He went to check up on his wife to see if everything is alright.

Here downstairs Savitri devi asked the nurse to have her meal seeing her getting finished with Geet's dressing.

"Ye breakfast bhi Geet ke kamre mein leke jana hain...Ya woh khud neechey aayegi..." Annie and Sameera heard Savitri who was looking for servants to summon upon but everyone seem to be busy in work.

"Main bulake aati hoon dadi ma." Annie offered while standing up and soon got interrupted by Sameera, "Annie tum thehro, tumne toh breakfast shuru bhi kar diya hain...Tumhara toh aaj test bhi hain na, jaldi nikal na hain tumhe, Tum nashta karlo main jati hoon Geet ko bulane..." saying so Sameera took the tray containing Geet's breakfast and approached towards her room upstairs.



Sameera reached to Maan's room and his room was still empty, they are going to the office together today but she hasn't seen one single glance of his till now!

Thinking about him she crossed the study and reached her destination.

The door of Geet's room was closed so Sameera hesitated a bit whether to knock or not because it was early morning and the silence made her assume that Geet must be still sleeping.

She was about to leave but then she heard some distorted sound coming from inside hence she knocked a little but no one answered.

Sameera thought Geet is injured so what if she needs some help, may be she is in the bathroom as the nurse was also not in radius so she twisted the doorknob and opened it while entering witnessing a vacant room.

As Sameera was walking reluctantly towards the washroom inside Geet's room and was about to call for Geet, Sameera heard her vivid voice trailing out from the washroom talking to someone, "Aap na sach mein sudhrenge nahi hain na?Har waqt lafanga giri !!!" Sameera's eyes gazed upon the view which literally shook the ground under her feet. She was calling Geet's name but no sound wave could be formed by her shocked vocal cord!

Maan is holding Geet inside his embrace very close and he was peeking or rather acting to peek inside her cleavage throwing a smirk while Geet was smiling as well.

The next moment Sameera's vision was filled with Geet who is slapping over Maan's hand which was trying to pull down her kamiz's liner around her chest! Then Maan just pecked her lips saying, "sharif ... .. . kaha rehne diya . . . . ." his voice sounded extremely-huskily sexy which also indicated their proximity deeply.

As he was completing his sentence, "hain tumne..." he leaned down and pretended to bite the center portion of one of her breast over the clothes, "Mujhe..!"finally finished his sentence while his hands were holding Geet's rear globes possessively, which also didn't get unnoticed by Sameera's astounded eyes!

And here Geet again tried to scold Maan but ended up giggling more, "Maannn...pleaseee...!!!" Maan just dipped his face more inside her soft curve which seemed like he is inhaling into her fragrance while that burned Sameera's whole existence to the ashes, breaking her reverie!


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Precap : "Yeh Geet pata nahi phone kyun nahi utha rahi hain..." Sameera heard Maan's frustrated murmuring clearly which pricked her heart. Looks like being wounded everyday is what her destiny holds from now on!


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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow me first😃 loved the update...full of Maaneet😊 thanks 4 da pm! stupendous update! wonderfully written! Maan is one in a million! liked how he got Geet to eat the soup! he is so loving n caring but only 4 his Mishty!! he even combs her hair! Geet reminisces their childhood. Maan used 2 to the same! Maan was smitten with Geet since then! Maan spent time with Geet! terrific moments! Maan loves her immensely and cannot see her pain! she knows this! this is shown so many times! Geet overwhelm n thanks Maan! loved his confession as well! Maan never leaves an opportunity to get naughty! shameless Maan! wonderful morning romance! Maan treats her like a precious doll! Geet awed! Past well incorporated! Loved Maaneet's banter! Sam goes 2 give Geet's breakfast n witnesses Maaneet close intimate moments! Sam shocked! Finally she got to see this! she is shattered! what will happen now???? update asap
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res dedo behen waiting
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Awesome one
Finally sameera got to know the truth
Maaneet are so cute

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Originally posted by: solaceMG

Awesome update as always. Flawless writing. Crisp scenes. Really liking the way this story is unfolding. So sameera ki jealousy din din badhti jaa rahi hain woh insaan buri nahi hain, balki kafi acchi lagti hain. Par woh maaneet k bich aa chuki hai isliye chahte huwe bhi cant like her.
Maan ne akhir bata diya dadi ko, bohot accha kiya. Dadi bohot acchi hain, show ki yaad dila diya.
Maaneet ke romance haye
Maan feeding geet so cutely and she is pouting. Maan really loves her so much and she is so so so adorable. At the beginning of the story how much geet loves him that was being told nd now we are seeing the deep love of Maan.
Pata nahi aisa laag raha hain something evil is going to happen. Sam ki papa mujhe bilkul acche sound nahi ki..aab jaldi jaldi precap dedo aur ho sakey toh predestined update karo please. Waiting
Thanks a lot for updating and sharing you fantastic writing with us Love you.


Thank you so very much for your superb awesome comment. It makes me so much happy to know that you like my writing so much!
Sam- haye sab ko usse problem hain lol
I just updated lol i am waiting for your res eagerly lol

I am so glad that you found Geet adorable that means my mission is accomplished cause i wanted to show Geet adorable in this story and specially why Maan loves her so much!
evil plot- muhuhaha, can't say ! Idea accha dete ho tumlog waise mujhe lol
Its my pleasure to share my maaneet craze with you lovely people.
Again thank you so much for so much support and love!😳❤️



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Originally posted by: dazzlingnikki

Awesome one

Finally sameera got to know the truth
Maaneet are so cute


too bad, spoilers not allowed, waise cheating kaarke last wala hissa padh liya kiya tumne? 😉
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Nice update... Hope. Now this witch sameera leave them alone otherwise she is definitely up for a rude possessive arrogant maaneet infront of her... She should not play dirty now bt what should be expected from a fool like her... Waiting eagerly for nxt...

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