Mortal Promises!#T2!UPDATED CH35@pg141*Now[Note at page 148]28 oct

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happydays30

@happydays30

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Nice update
naughty maan n cutd geet
now waiting for sameera reaction after what she witnessed today

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Woahhh ...words nahin aaraha mujhe ... 👏 omggg ithna bada update vo bhi full of maaneet 😳 dreamyyy ... Yeh tho kamaal hain aaj ... Ab mein kya kaho samajh nahin aaraha ... Totally loved this update ...😃 maan is such a cutieee ☺️

He wants to give bath to his geet 😳 but geet ne mana karliya 😆 shaadi tak wait karlo maan nahin tho promotion hojayega sabka ... Abhi bhi reason nahin khola ki kyun maan ne geet ko fasaya 😛😉 haha geet ne maan ko budhu bola 😆 omgg cant stop loving this maan ... 😳 yeh maan. Tho shayar ban gaya ... Ab tho licence bhi mil gayi maan ko isiliye geet ke aas paas rehne ka ek bhi mouka nahin chod raha hain 😳 and movie bhi dekh raha hain dono vo bhi romantic vali .. Hayeee rabba mein marjawa indono ki pyaar dekhar ... Lagtha hain meri nazar lag jayegi dono ko ...🤗 maan kithna caring hain ... 😳 maan ko geet ka dukh dekhi nahin jaathi ... Loved their flashbacks ... Include more matha ji 😛 love to see their childhood love as well as romance ...ab mujhe bhi dekhna hain ki yeh maan kithna lafanga giri kiya hoga bachpan mein ... Haha ... 😆

Maan saying geet that she can take all his time is soo good yaar ... I loved all your conversations omg ... You are great ... Soo soo great ... Ithna acha lines kahi bhi nahin pada meine ... Tumhare writing tho as usual fantastic hain and how can you pen these lines 😳 It was very deep 😳

Awesome yaar ... Dono ki mrmg ki shuruvaat bhi ek dooje ko dekhar hi hua ... 😳 maan took geet to wasroom and geet drifted into past ... 😛 iss flashback mein dono ki age kya hain 😛 yeh maan tho kahi par bhi nahin rukhtha ... I am sure that he would have seen his parents romance in such am early age thats y he became soo naughty lol (just kidding ) 😆 yeh dono ki pyaar ko hamari nazar na lage ...

Fantastic work mam ... Last mein sam ka heart break hua 🥺 acha hua ki iss sam ko abhi patha chal gaya nahin tho bahuth der hojathi aur announcement mein patha chala tho dil tukda tukda hojayega ... 😭 anyways feeling sad for her yaar as a girl ... She loved someone and the feeling is very hard to digest ... But iss ladki ki tarah sapno mein bhi nahin hona chahiye ... She just assume things ... poor girl ... I pity her ... Ab jaldiii next update bhi dedho ... Cant wait yeh chudail kya karegi ab ...

Omgg love you loads for this awesome update 😳 lots of hugs chocolates and kisses for you 😛❤️

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Iptida

😃😳

edited comment on page 15😃

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i rok

@i rok

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

great update...
maan and geets cute moments..
sameera finding out about maan and geet lets see how she takes this...
i hope she doesnt create rift between the two..
i hope she finds out that they married...
that the love which she saw is between husband and wife...

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Lovely update

Waiting for next update. . .

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dazzlingnikki

@dazzlingnikki

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Iptida

too bad, spoilers not allowed, waise cheating kaarke last wala hissa padh liya kiya tumne? 😉

Haha maine tho nahi pada !! Aap jo likh rahe hain yeh story 😉😛

Well sam kuch gadbad naa kare .. i hope so ..

Eagerly wiating for next

Cliff hanger par chod diya apne

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
wow me first😃 loved the update...full of Maaneet😊 thanks 4 da pm! stupendous update! wonderfully written! Maan is one in a million! liked how he got Geet to eat the soup! he is so loving n caring but only 4 his Mishty!! he even combs her hair! Geet reminisces their childhood. Maan used 2 to the same! Maan was smitten with Geet since then! Maan spent time with Geet! terrific moments! Maan loves her immensely and cannot see her pain! she knows this! this is shown so many times! Geet overwhelm n thanks Maan! loved his confession as well! Maan never leaves an opportunity to get naughty! shameless Maan! wonderful morning romance! Maan treats her like a precious doll! Geet awed! Past well incorporated! Loved Maaneet's banter! Sam goes 2 give Geet's breakfast n witnesses Maaneet close intimate moments! Sam shocked! Finally she got to see this! she is shattered! what will happen now???? update asap

finally hehe got your res!

Congratulations dear...

coming back to the update,

Maaneet- My max updates are always full of Maaneet 😉, I try to exclude everything else unless it's important for the flow or track

Maan- Indeed our msk is one in a million, yes he is very much loving toward her as he treats her like a baby. And all those years he couldn't love her so his love has just amplified.

combing hair & his care- If I talk from the show's perspective then I can definitely see Maan combing geet's hair if the situation is like that. In the show it's been shown numerous times that even though Maan is a tough guy but he has harnessed her with jewelry so many times so I can totally imagine him doing everything for his mishty.

besharam maan- lol woh toh hain hi lafanga, pata nahi bechara kaab geet ki band baja de 😉

Thanks a lot for your awesome comment! ❤️🤗

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: dazzlingnikki

Haha maine tho nahi pada !! Aap jo likh rahe hain yeh story 😉😛
Well sam kuch gadbad naa kare .. i hope so ..
Eagerly wiating for next
Cliff hanger par chod diya apne

Hey dear thanks, but i didn't get your first line sweety...😕

Sam hehehe gadbad kaha tak kar pati hain dekhte hain

I know, update already bohot bada ho chuka tha na so rokna pada... Thanks a million for your lovely comments dearie! ❤️