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dqno1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#241

res

I am going to re-read it before posting some stupid comment 😃
I mean compared to your well thought out comments mine are pretty lame

Edited by dqno1 - 6 years ago

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Doracake

@Doracake

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Posted: 6 years ago

#242

Beautiful update

Maan and Geet together

Waiting for last part

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dqno1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#243

Haiye, the push and pull.

She pushes him away and glutton for punishment comes right back.

She does not want him doing stuff for her but she waits for him.

So many rejections and yet he keeps coming back with his broken heart to her trying to heal her even though he is not her type!

I think she was jealous of the girls he dates though she does not date herself; more like a one night stand girl.

It must be hard not to trust anyone. He is definitely building her trust though.

I love the head in the lap soothing sleep ❤️

Savitri was rather mean (though real). I mean who does that to someone who has been to the hospital.

Geet has spunk though 😆 get him an adhar card and I will sue him 😆

I am sure Savitri will keep her son far away now from her.

They are setting up patterns of dependencies on each other.

He fulfills the emptiness in her.

I want her to do that for him too, show that she cares.

I can't believe this is ending so fast.

Thanks for updating. 😃

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dqno1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#244

Geet ke liye ek song yaad aaya
lyrics by Sahir Ludhianvi not mine 😆

tum agar mujhako na chaaho to koi baat nahi
tum kisi aur ko chaahogi to mushkil hogi

ab agar mel nahi hai to judaai bhi nahi
baat todi bhi nahi tumne nibhaai bhi nahi
ye sahaaraa bhi bahut hai mere jine ke liye
tum agar meri nahi ho to paraai bhi nahi
mere dil ko na saraaho to koi baat nahi
gair ke dil ko saraahogi, to mushkil

Ye hai Maan ke dil ka haal

tum hasi ho, tumhe sab pyaar hi karate hoge
mai jo martaa hun to kyaa aur bhi marte hoge
sab ki aankho mein isi shauq kaa tufaan hogaa
sab ke seene me yahi dard ubharate hoge
mere gam me na karaaho to koi baat nahi
aur ke gam me karaahogi to mushkil hogi
tum agar mujhako na chaaho to koi baat nahi
tum kisi aur ko chaahogi to mushkil hogi

As I said, comments will be lame
guaranteed 😆

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: dqno1
res

I am going to re-read it before posting some stupid comment 😃
I mean compared to your well thought out comments mine are pretty lame

They are not lame at all so dare you say so.

I feel lucky to have you as my reader and your comments always bring a smile on my face. You make me want to write better.

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: dqno1
Geet ke liye ek song yaad aaya
lyrics by Sahir Ludhianvi not mine 😆

tum agar mujhako na chaaho to koi baat nahi
tum kisi aur ko chaahogi to mushkil hogi

ab agar mel nahi hai to judaai bhi nahi
baat todi bhi nahi tumne nibhaai bhi nahi
ye sahaaraa bhi bahut hai mere jine ke liye
tum agar meri nahi ho to paraai bhi nahi
mere dil ko na saraaho to koi baat nahi
gair ke dil ko saraahogi, to mushkil

Ye hai Maan ke dil ka haal

tum hasi ho, tumhe sab pyaar hi karate hoge
mai jo martaa hun to kyaa aur bhi marte hoge
sab ki aankho mein isi shauq kaa tufaan hogaa
sab ke seene me yahi dard ubharate hoge
mere gam me na karaaho to koi baat nahi
aur ke gam me karaahogi to mushkil hogi
tum agar mujhako na chaaho to koi baat nahi
tum kisi aur ko chaahogi to mushkil hogi

As I said, comments will be lame
guaranteed 😆

This song is so apt Avi. I loved it

Raj Kapoor is also there. I'm going to use the song in the next chapter. 😆

Thank you.

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dqno1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

This song is so apt Avi. I loved it

Raj Kapoor is also there. I'm going to use the song in the next chapter.😆

Thank you.

ooh can't wait 😃

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#248

Thanks for updating will try and read

and comment by Monday

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 6 years ago

#249

Part 13

splendid update! greatly written!

Savitri was rude! loved Geet's replyi!! great Maan intervened! liked Maan's concern for Geet!

Geet confronts Maan about their attraction! he wants to date her and she refuses!

feeling for Maan! but this does not stop him from going to see her! they need each other!

Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

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Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#250

Part 13

SD had been a little mean in saying all that, is it better to keep quite if not supportive and positive, but there are people like her, and she got Maan/Geet as a new subject to talk about, good that Geet retorted and gave it back.

SD talk made Geet back out from the path of reaching out to Maan and she was back to her rude, impassive responses to Maan.

but still for both, their actions were almost opposite of what they were speaking. She wanted him to be there, despite uttering the hurtful remark him being not of her type, while Maan all hurt by her words still continued to care for her. Persistent in perusal as usual, I loved the way he proposed to try and let the attraction blossom into something beautiful. He understands the meaning better, she could be still on the path of understanding it for herself.