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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 8

Adi the love guru, why is that hard to imagine. So Pinky and Adi dating as you can see wasn't the biggest revelation, lol I kinds expected. Had they not been dating, I would have been shocked lol. Pigeon, carriers, fax; oh boy I give up. I simply can't lol but I like this couple in a weird way even if they are discussing the love life of pigeons or the dirty life of pigeons lol

I had hoped they would set Geet and Maan up but I know they didn't, I mean why not?

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 9

That date though, was awkward and expected. Maan doesn't have that flamboyancy or enigma that attracts. How do I say this, he has looks but lacks in personality. A dry or no character in his problem, and I suppose it doesn't attract many though he wears a heart of gold, im sure the woman that decides to be with him for life will be treated like a queen. I say the woman because if its up to Maan he'd have never left his ex loves lol. Ok I don't blame him one bit though lol, the culmination was in the title itself lol so why the horror lol. Ah well you lose some and in Maan's case you lose some more lol. Geets also there, what a sore point for him. He defo likes her. Poor guy

OK I don't mean to sound mean or anything but Geet sounds creepy like id run away from her, why is she watching and synchronising her breaths with a sleeping Maan lol. Anyway looks like she made the first move for her lack of sleep or meds lol and Maan proved to be the bets distraction, she aims to study his bedroom lol

This is creep to another level lol

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 10

Adi is such a freak man, why is he so friggin hurt for? I mean yes he did his work and even sought out a career is love guru-ing lol but damn never seen a guy so bitchy lol. Poor Maan he should have expected it, from Adi to sir, the clue was there to see by all lol

Also let me ask you another question? Why does Adi carry with him so many numbers of girls and why on EARTH is he rating them HOT nor Not, I stand by Maan, always have and always will lol. Ok not always but here, in this tale I defo do.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 11

Shoot Adi man, for him Maan wasting away time when he could have easily been home with Geet beside him, literally lol but that man, he's actually getting on my nerves, so damn WHAT if his student found a love life of his own, SO WHAT if he stayed up late nights and watched movies and made notes, I don't give a crap, all I care for is the love story between Maan and Geet, simple but sweet lol

Pinky and Adi share a good relationship though, but I do wish Adi to meet Geet even for a second, he so deserves to be subjected to her mean comments lol. Geet has serious issues, broken family? Maybe! But she needs Maan, he is a nice distraction from all the voices in her head. Maan's situation with the dog again and Savitri the neighbour, oh boy I liked that spin. Haha the dog being her son, why does that never get old or humourless lol

Aww bless Maan, im glad he went to check on Geet. Yep defo in love lol. But that screen saver, just how does she feel. She needs people in her life, people like Maan and Im glad they have one and another now.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 12

The hospital scene really made me smile, this tale has made me laugh, frown, and do a lot things but smiling like proper aww smile was at the hospital. She wants him to stay yet cant break that mould she's built, it possibly cant be that hard to break that faade, I imagine a bit like cracking the walls of China lol. Yep not great at sarcasm

Inside joke Mrs Puri, they found a common round even if its to bitch about lol. It took me some reading and then I had my Eureka moment, Maan made the puppies after food right? Bell puri I've heard of on the TV lol, so I bet the mother of her son hated the reference and the teasing. Maan has some galls considering how nice and gentle he is, though I doubt there was any malice but he did intend to tease lol

She days don't be back yet expects him and waits, that shows her faults. Shes the way she is to protect herself, aww why is this Maan so so so sweet, he came back with tulips. Women, to geet and others, just fall at his feet lol. OK I hate that insinuation even if it was me who made it, women don't fall to his feet but into his arms, ahhh that's better right?

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Part 13

I wanted to prolong it but not possible, which generally means I wait while you write, I hope ur hurrying up as we speak lol. Bad bloof between Savitri and Geet, I get Geet more though. Nosy neighbour and with a dog as a son, I loved that, prove he's a human and I'd have him arrested for molestation part, oh damn way to way even Savitri was chocked for a sec admitting that the son she enforces others to acknowledge as her son is really her dog lol

The look forced Geet to distance herself once again but Maan, Maan, Maan, what can I say or do with this guy, I sure love him though. He's back and with food lol, and though she doesn't want to admit she likes it. I like a man with good foundations, I'm glad he didn't let whatever it was that was between them die with one night, whether Geet likes it or not, now shes found herself gold or diamond lol. Shes too blunt and hes too big of a softy, letting her sounds affect him. Aint her actions speaking enough, I mean in away their already living together never mind dating lol

They sound like a couple to me, fight and make up lol

Waiting for 14 now, I hope it isn't a long long long wait

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Posted: 6 years ago
waiting

i hate doing that to people 😆
of course you have a life but pls update when u can
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Posted: 6 years ago
Please do try and update

truly sorry to bother you but

I need to read one complete story

before leaving IF
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Posted: 6 years ago
Such a lovely story. So different from what I have read till now. Never could imagine Maan and Geet like that. It's funny at times and then emotional at times. Poor guy, gets his heart broken every time. And Adi and pinky as the superiors is a refreshing change. All the characters are so different than what we have always imagined it too cool. Waiting to read more. Please update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nohar hope you well just busy

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