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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 26




Whole day geet was cribbing not even talked to kavya and dadi . Not able to understand why he just can't once inform her . Isn't she hold importance in his life? Isn't she is part of his life now?

Someone said right love comes with expectation with her growing love toward him her expectation also increasing . His every action now effecting her a way more deeply than previously . She isn't even realizing that what poisition he is taking in his life .


Aditya come in evening and handover geet a parcel informing her that maan sir sign the deal and need to lesve early in the morning so she keep everything ready.


She look upward and say with tears in her eyes

G- dekha babaji ab inke pass baat karne k bhi time nhi hoga .

Defeted and knowing she can't even able to open her mouth in front of him . She while cribbing pack his bags .

In all this she forgot him & his ways he always do something that surprise everyone to no extent.


Whole day passed like that and till late night when maan wasn't back till 11 it turns to worst . She was on verge of breaking down . The thought of being away from him making her to get frustated and on top of it not able to do anything making her emotional .

After how long she found a warmth of belongingness and now being it away from him even if it is for few days breaking her within.


Maan back late in night only to find her sleeping on dining table . She must have slept while waiting for him . he shook his head and went toward her to wake her up.

M- geet
He say while shaking her shoulder

M- geet
G- hmm

She got up with a jerk

M- go and sleep in room . U are tired

That it now he has even problem with her waiting for him?

Her eyes going teary and maan ckearly notice it

M- kya hua ?

G- AAPKO ISSE KYA FARAK PADTA HAIN? She shouted with tears made her ways from her eyes

Maan look at her confused what happen to her suddenly?

G- ab aapko isse bhi problem hain ki main aapka wait karu? U said na u are giving us a chance . THEN WHY I CAN'T WAIT FOR U ! She said while eiping her tears but of no use as new tears made their way out .

M- GEET

She come toward him and say

G- KYA GEET H KYA GEET ! AAPKO NA BUS APNI PADI HAIN KABHI SOCHA THAT I'M ALSO PART OF UR LIFE . AAPNE EK BAR BHI JARURI NHI SAMJHA KI MUJHE BHI HAQ H Y JANNE K KI H ARE LEAVING FOR 20 DAYS .



Lowering her eyes she bent to his level and ask

G- kya hum y janne k bhi haqdar nhi h?


If it was any other person then surely he hasn't left him for taking with him in this manner but looking at her face and by her talks he has understood she hasn't checked that parcel .

M- i send an envelope with adi u checked it or not?


Geet look at him ENVOLOPE BHI MUJHSE ZYADA ZARURI H? SHE thought


She get up nodded in no and about to move when felt him holding her hand .


M- so u don't wanna meet ur sister kavya?

She look at him confused

M- HAMARI SUBAH KI FLIGHT H . I SEND ADI WITH UR PASSPORT & TICKETS . I THOUGHT THAT U WANNA MEET KAVYA !

She look at him with open mouth

M- pack ur bag geet WE NEED TO LEAVE EARLY .

Saying so he left with a smile on his face

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Edited by Rpian - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Geet has been unneccessarily stressing and making herself sad
she didn't even go check on Daadi or speak with her
Adi brought an envelope and neither did she check that too
only when Maan came and told her that he thought he would like to see her sister was Geet surprised
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was good...I knew it...maan is gonna take her with him to London...after all tabhi to there will be some further twist in this story...aur unka romance bhi patrinpe ayegaa..love it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update 👏
Geet upset that Maan is leaving n didn't inform her
Maan had also booked her tickets too, to meet kavya😎
Eagerly waiting for some Maaneet moments in London
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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice update
geet is hurt knowing maan is going away for 20 days n dint share this with her
when she put her emotion in front of maan in her anger but maan's answer shock her sweetly

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome!! maan taking geet with him so she can meet her sister. nice. cant wait to read next one. Happy for maneet.
Edited by Nav2010 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Geet burst out her emotions
Haha maan gave a surprise to her .. hehe
Thanku for the update dii
Edited by dazzlingnikki - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks 4 updating! splendid update! well written! Geet upset why Maan didn't tell her abt his trip! Maan comes home late! Geet confronts Maan! but Adi brought her tickets as well! Maan taking her 2 see her sister! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
haha
whole day she's sad that she don't have any importance in his life but wen maan came and
asked hr about envelop and told hr wat was in envelop but geet is geet he didn't feel bad the way she was talking to him he knows hr now
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Geet was cribbing and was in rants vowing to Maan's demeanor. She was gloomy and failed concentrate on happenings taking place around her and failed to do her routine too. Geet yelled out her thoughts in frustration to Maan. Maan on other hand surprised her with his action. He had booked her ticket too, to see kavya . His gesture was sweet surprise for Geet .
Thanks for updating !

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