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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice story
Maaneet dance together
Maan n Brij both notice Geet's aloof behaviour
Even pinky feels that but can't point what happened
Pl PM me when you update

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PART 9

Next day,

In college,

Pinki and Geet in canteen

Geet: Pinki teri pet puja ho chuki ho to class chale.

Pinki: Are ruk na maine thik se khaya hi nahi. Abhi to aaye hai.

Geet: Pinki lecture miss ho jayega.

Pinki: Nahi hoga. Bas 5 minute

Maan and Brij also arrived there.

Brij: Gudiya mere liye wait bhi nahi kiya akele hi aa gayi

Geet: Akele thodi na Pinki sath hain. Phir aap bhi phone pe busy the to main disturb nahi karna chahti thi

Pinki: Good morning veer ji. Good morning Maan.

Maan: Good morning Pinki.

Pinki: Hamara lecture start hone wala hai. Chal geet.

Brij: Tum jao Pinki. Gudiya tum ruko.

Geet: Par veer ji

Brij: Kuchh nahi hoga ek lecture miss hoga. Tu waise bhi hoshiar hain. Main janta hun. Mujhe tumse baat karni hai. Ghar par tum bat karne se rahi

Geet understood what he want to ask

Geet: Baad me Veer ji

Brij: Pinki tum jao

Pinki: ok

Pinki left.

Maan: Baad main milte hain. Tum baat kar lo.

Brij:Maine tumhe bola jane ko. Gudiya ko koi problem nahi hai tumhare samne baat karne mein. Hai na Gudiya.

Geet just nodded

Maan: ok. I think Brij hame waha corner par baithna chahiye. Koi disturb nahi karega.

They sat.

Brij: Chalo batao tum kyun chup si ho gayi ho. Jyada baat nahi karti.

Geet to herself" Main kya bolu jhoot to bol nahi paungi. Sach keh diya to Maan aur Veer ji ki friendship alag sabse pehle to mujhe le kar veer ji dadi se argue karenge."

Geet accidently said " Nahi bataungi"

Maan and Brij shocked listening her words.

Brij: Kya nahi bataogi.

Geet: Nahi mera matlab hai ki maine socha ki nahi bataungi. Par aap nahi maanoge.

Brij: Gudiya bata de. Nahi to main maa papa ji se baat karunga. Phir to tujhe bolna padega.

Geet: Main bataungi. Par aap ko mujhse wada karna padega ki aap ghar par kisi ko ye baat pata nahi chalni chahiye.

Brij: Ye kya baat hui.

Geet: Aapko Aapki gudiya ki kasam.

Brij: Thik hai wada karta hun kisiko nahi bolunga.

Geet: Wo admission ke waqt dadi maa papa ko bol rahi thi ki meri padhai likhai pe itna kharcha kyun karna jab ki mujhe shadi karne ke baad ghar ke kaam hi karne hai.

Brij: Dadi ko kya ho gaya hai. Main aaj hi baat karta hun.

Geet: Veerji aapne wada kiya hai.

Brij holds her hands

Brij: But promise me. Tu dadi ke baato ko lekar pareshaan nahi hogi.

Geet: I promise veer ji. Pakka wada.

Brij: Rahi baat shaadi ki. Main janta hun baba ji ne mere gudiya ke liye koi prince hi bheja hoga. Par use main dhund kar launga.

Geet: Mujhe to bas veer ji ke sath rehna hain hamesha. Arre veer ji dekhiye aapki wajah se mera dusra lecture bhi miss ho jayega. Bye Veer ji.

She left somehow " Pehli baar maine kuchh chhupaya veer ji se ajib sa lag raha tha " she sighed in relief

She went to class fortunately lecture was yet to start.

Brij: Dekha mujhe hi bol diya ki mere wajah se dusre lecture miss honge.

Maan: Haa suna aur bhi boht kuchh suna.

Brij: Matlab.

Maan: Wahi prince aayega and all. Tujhe ab bhi aisa lagta hain. Tujhe uske liye prince dhundhna padega.

Brij: Are mera matlab shadi ke liye ladka. Aur mere kehne ka yahi matlab hai my friend. Haisiyat se ladka rajkumar nahi hoga to chalega . Par dil rajkumar jaisa hona chahiye. Jo samajhe ki Gudiya kitni special hain.

Maan listened his talks and in his mind" Special ki baat kar raha hain tu. Snowwhite ko to main kab ka meri princess maan chuka hun. Bas us din ka intezaar rahega. Jab Snowwhite ko samajha pau, Tumhe , uncle, aunty ko samajha saku ki main kitna pyar karta hun Snowwhite se"

Brij: Ek baat bolu. Sach sach bata kya tuze aaj tak koi bhi ladki pasand nahi aayi.

Maan: Is sawal ka jawab tune mujhe diya jo main dunga.

Brij: Maan tujhe bolti band karna achhe se aata hain.

Maan: Waise is bare me Geet ki baat kar sakte hain. See means just curious. Agar future me aisa hua ki Geet ne kisi ko pasand kar liya. To tum use support karoge.

Brij: Aisa hoga hi nahi. Aur hua bhi to main use jab tak parakh nahi leta tab tak haa nahi kahunga.

Maan: Ab tere baare me baat karte hain

Brij: Rehne de. Ho gayi jyada hi baate ki aaj. Lets go to class.

Maan: Are suno Brij.

Brij: Chal Maan late ho rahe hain. Tune suna na thodi der pehle gudiya ne mujhe blame kiya ki meri wajah se late ho jate hain.

Maan himself " Waise ye bhai behen avoid karne me expert hain."

Both went to class

In Geet's class,

Geet and Pinki listening to lecture. But Pinki was disturbing her. Geet showed eyes to her.

After long time lecture finished.

Geet: Tu itna disturb kyun kar rahi thi.

Then peon came.

Peon: Principal sir ne urgent meeting bulayi hai. Isliye baki lectures nahi honge.

All shouted

Peon: Bapre kitna chillate hai. Mera sar hi fat jayega.

Peon left then

Pinki: Achha hua. Agar hota na main pakka so jati.

Geet : Kam khaya kar neend bhi kam aayegi.

Pinki: Leave it. Mujhe kuch kehna hai tujhe

Geet: Bol.

Pinki: Tu kal party se jaldi chali gayi naa. Maan tumhari hi baate kar raha tha. Mujhe lagta hain Maan tuze pasand karta hai.

Geet: Pinki tera dimag kharab ho gaya hain. Main jaa rahi hun.

Geet took her bag and left.

Pinki: Itna naraj. Aisa kya bol diya maine.

Geet was in her own while walking out of class" pinki ka dimag pura hi kharab ho gaya hain. Maan isliye mere baare me puchhte hain kyun ki Brij veer ji unke dost hain. Aur bachpan se sath hain isiliye"

As Geet was lost in her own. She collided with Maan. Maan get hold on her. Geet scared of falling hold Maan' s arm tightly. Maan was lost in her. Saw her eyes closed due to fear

Pinki who was running behind Geet. Saw this.

Pinki cleared throat.

Geet opened eyes and Maan made her stand properly.

Maan: Tum theek ho na?

Geet: Haa.

Pinki: Tum yaha kaha aa gayi?

Maan: Haa.

Geet: Wo main main canteen ja rahi thi

Pinki: Tu rasta bhul gayi. Tera dhyan kaha hai. Is taraf final year ki classes hain

Geet: Pinki ghar chalte hai waise bhi class nahi hai na

Pinki: Chal . Bye Maan

Maan: Bye pinki, bye geet

Geet: Bye.

Maan: Ise kya ho gaya hai?

Pinki: Tujhe yaad hai naa monday ko assignment dena hai.

Geet: Haa. Aaj karungi complete.

Next day

At outhouse,

Geet was irritated, she saw Brij

Geet: Veer ji Veer ji.

Brij: kya hai gudiya

Geet: Veer ji ye assignment mujhe help kar do.

Brij: Are nahi Gudiya . Mujhe urgently bula liya office jana hai

Geet:kya veer ji aaj sunday hai phir bhi office. Par fir kal mujhe submit karna hai. Maine try kiya ye kitna hard hai. Mujhse nahi ban rahi ye Drawing. Kitni chhoti chhoti lines upar se measurements.

Brij: Main Maan se keh deta hun woh help kar dega.

Geet: Nahi rehne dijiye.

Brij: Koi problem nahi hogi Maan ko pata hai mujhse bhi jyada achhe se padha dega. Tera assignment ho jayega to tujhe bhi achha lagega

Geet: Haa kar leti hun. Warna pinki bhi dimag khayegi. Upar se professor sir chillayenge.

Brij: Chalo main Maan ko bol deta hun.

While walking to KM

Geet in her mind " Koi baat nahi assignment hi karni hai aur pinki ka to dimag waise bhi kharab hai kuchh bhi bolti rehti hain"

In KM

Anjali: Aaj hamari Pari ko waqt mil hi gaya.

Dadi: waise aapka pair thik hai na? Maan ne bataya ankle sprain ke bare me.

Brij: Thik hai ab. Wo Geet ko assignments me help chahiye. Mujhe urgently office jana hai isliye socha maan ko bol dun. Woh help kar dega.

Anjali: Ye bhi bolne ki baat hai. Jaao hoga room mein.

In Maan's room,

Brij: Good morning.

Maan who was busy with laptop. Saw geet and Brij. Maan saw Geet. She wore White colour salwar suit and hairs open.

Brij: Maan kaha ho

Maan: Ye soch raha hun itni subah subah tum dono.

Brij: Wo Maan geet ki assignment me help kar do. Mujhe urgently office jana hai.

Brij's phone rang.

Brij: Bye Maan. Bye Gudiya.

Geet: Bye veer ji . Dhyan se jana.

Maan: Bye Brij.

Maan: Good morning Geet.

Geet: Good morning.

Maan: Bolo kya padhana hai.

Geet: Wo mujhe koi bhi assignments questions samajh nahi aa rahe. Measurements ki confusion ki wajah se kuch bhi draw nahi kar pa rahi. Babaji maine Sheets bhi nahi laayi. Main lekar aati hun

Maan holds her hand. Geet see he leaves her hand.

Maan: Mera matlab hai rehne do. Mere paas hai. Baad me de dena. Thik hai.

Geet: Thik hain.

Maan's phone rang.

Maan: Geet call hain. Main abhi aaya.

Geet: Haa.

Maan went outside.

Geet : Sach mein kitna bada room hain. Itni sari trophies. Veer ji is right Maan talented hain. Guitar veer ji ne bola tha Maan guitar bajate hain aur gana bhi gaate hai. Itna waqt ho gaya hai. Itni bhi baate karte hai kya phone par.

Geet went near window.

Geet: Yaha se pura garden dikh raha hai kitna achha hain. Traditional touch Khurana mansion. Bas ye curtains achhe nahi hai.

Maan come near her

Maan: Pardo me kya problem hain

Geet: Aap ne sab sun liya maine kya bola.

Maan: Garden traditional touch sab bate sahi to kahi. Par curtains mein kya problems hain.

Geet: Nahi kuchh nahi. Assignment kar lete hai pehle.

Maan: Bol do koi baat nahi. Mujhe aadhi baat chhodna achha nahi lagta.

Geet: Wo curtains ka colour dark hota to achha lagta. Jaise ki maroon.

Maan: Tumhari freshers wali dress ki tarah red colour and silver work.

Geet felt awkward

Maan: Chalo assignment karte hain.

Maan started teaching. Geet started as per his instruction. Again maan's eyes were on her and specially her pendant.

Maan to himself " Yeh Geet ka locket kyun strange lagta hain."

Geet: Ho gaya complete.

Maan: Itni jaldi. Chalo ab second

Maan explained other question. While Geet solving maan observed curtains.

Maan to himself " sach mein white colour se room dull lag raha hain kya. " Then he remember dadi told him " beta hamara aur aapke dada ji ka room ke rang ko lekar itna arguement hua tha. Finally decide kiya ki pardon ka rang main decide karungi aur wall ka wo"

Geet : Ho gaya.

Maan felt amazed" She was doing so fast"

Maan: ab next .

Maan explained her.

Geet started to solve question. She was so engrossed. Her hairs were disturbing her. But she was too busy didnt bothered to move it only felt irritated. Maan saw it. He came

Geet: Aap ye

Maan : Tum concentrate karo. Measurements wrong ho gaye to phir mehnat bekar ho jayegi.

Maan made braid of her hairs. Coincidently he saw Dadi and Anjali outside .

Dadi was about to say some thing maan made gesture not to talk. He came outside.

Anjali: Aap kab se ladkiyon ke bal banane lage.

Maan: Mom kuch bhi mat boliye. Geet assignment solve kar rahi hai. Focus lost ho gaya na puri mehnat bekar ho jayegi. Uske baal baar baar aankh me ja rahe the. Isliye maine bandh diye.

Dadi: Kya Maan aapne to hamara dil dukha diya. Kitna khush ho gaye the hum dono aise dekhkar. Jo socha uska ulta hain.

Maan: Drama mat kariye.

Geet: Ho gaya. Maan kaha gaye.

Maan came inside.

Maan: Geet main thodi der me aata hun. Friend ka phone tha mujhe jana hoga. Tum tab tak baki try karo.

Geet started to try other questions. Geet was feeling tired till now geet who was doing study slept while waiting for Maan

Maan came back " Main jyada hi late ho gaya hun. Geet intezaar kar rahi hogi"

Anjali: Beta lunch kar lo.

Maan: Baad me Mom.

As Maan went to room saw Geet slept.

Maan: Ye snowwhite bhi na koi aise floor par sota hai kya. Study karne ke liye chair par baithne ko bola mere jate hi floor pe.

Maan carried Geet in his arms placed her on bed. Brij saw this.

Brij was little bit angry. He was about to shout. Maan made him quite

Maan: Bahar baat karte hain

Brij: Maan. Ye tum kya kar rahe the.

Maan: Geet so rahi thi floor pe.

Brij: See Maan. Tum mere best friend ho. Mujhe achha nahi lagta koi Geet ko touch bhi kare.

Maan: Wo floor par so rahi thi usko thand lag jati to main

Brij: Iska matlab ye nahi ki tum use apne baho me utha lo.

Maan: Brij tumhe mujhpar vishwas nahi hai

It was about half an hour Brij came from office

In outhouse

Devki: Brij tumhari ladli kaha hain

Brij: Dadi woh Geet Maan ke sath padhai kar rahi hain. Maine hi bola tha.

Devki to herself " Geet ke khilaf kuchh bolungi to ise to samajhna nahi hai"

Dadi: Brij puttar is tar Geet ko itni der kisi aur ke ghar.

Brij: Dadi wo Maan ke ghar pe hai.

Dadi: Haa beta. Hum jante hai Maan kitna sanskari hai. Uske ghar wale bhi. Unke ghar aur bhi naukar hai. Agar wo itni itni der tak unhe sath dekhenge kya bolenge. Unhe thodi na vishwas hoga ki Geet padhne gayi hai. Tarah tarah ke log tarah tarah se sochte hain. Bata tujhe achha lagega ye sab.

Brij was really simple he trusted her words. Went to KM.

Maan: Bol Brij.

Brij: Haa hai vishwas hain. Phir bhi Maan tumse request hain. Tum jitna ho sake utna Geet se dur raha karo. Main baat karne se mana kar raha hun. Kyunki main chahta hun hum hamesha best friends rahe. Aisa koi problem nahi chahta jis wajah se hamari dosti me problems ho.

Maan: Itni badi baat bol di Brij. Wada hain tumse tum irritate ho jaoge aisa kuch nahi karunga. I think Geet ko utha do boht der ho gayi hai.

Brij : Maan tujhe maine hurt to nahi kiya na. Bas main clear karna chahta tha.

Maan gave him hug.

Maan: Soch bhi mat . Aisi baate hamare dosti ke bich nahi aayegi.

Brij took Geet with her. While leaving Geet thanked him.

Geet: Thank you So much help ke liye

Maan smiled.

They left.

Dadi: Beta Brij aur Geet chale gaye aap lunch kar lo.

Maan: Dadi mera man nahi hai.

Dadi: Kya hua beta.

Maan changed topic

Maan: Dadi main aata hun. Pehle mujhe ek baat bataiye ye parde achhe nahi hai kya. Achha rang nahi hai. Dull lag raha kya.

Dadi: Haa beta dull to hain. Tumhe pardo ke rang ki kya suzi?

Maan: Wo Geet bol rahi thi.

Dadi: Baat to sahi hai.

Maan: Thik hai Dadi aap mom ko bol do mere room me maroon colour ke parde laga do. Ab chalo lunch ke liye.

Dadi: Kitna ajib hai ye.

While lunch time.

Amar: To kaisi chal rahi hai aapki padhai beta

Maan: Good dad.

Anjali: Tera chehra kyun latka hai

Maan: Kuchh nahi mom study tension hain.

Dadi: Beta anjali Maan ke room ke parde badlne hai. Hai na Maan?

Maan: Haa. Maroon colour. Ho gaya mera khana .

He went to his room

Anjali: Kya hua ise pata nahi

Dadi: Rehne do beta . Boht sari tension hoti hai bacho ko . Isliye aise behave kar raha hoga.

Anjali: Chandu se kehar parde badal deti hun shayad mood achha ho jaye.

After sometime.

Chandu came to his room

Chandu: Wo madam ne bola ki parde change karne hai.

Maan: Jaldi karo.

Chandu to himself" dadi sahi bol rahi thi inka mood achha nahi hai"

He changed curtains and left.

Maan saw he left and closed door

Maan: Sach me ye achhe lag rahe hai

Maan to himself" Aaj jis tarah Brij ne behave kiya na agar use bhanak bhi lag gai na main Geet ke baare me kya sochta hun. Badi problem ho jayegi. Par mere ye samajh nahi is tarah ki baate Brij ke dimag me achanak kaise aa gayi.

Precap: After three months. New entry

PART 10 PG14

Edited by priyal12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks for the pm! superb update! well written! Geet is nervous and scared around Maan! Maan loves her so much! Maan helps Geet study! he is imprssed as Geet is smart! Maan decides 2 change the curtains hearing Geet complain! Brij angry as Maan carried Geet and made her sleep on the bed! glad Maan and Brij spoke! update soon

Oh no new entry???
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Brij confronts Geet about her odd demeanor. Geet lies to brij and asks him not to worry much. Maan was lost in his own thoughts. Pinky hints Geet about Maan's likeliness towards her but Geet shrugs off Pinky's words. Devki manipulates brij with her words. Maan was tensed and wanted to change the color of his rooms curtains according to geet's taste and preferences.
Thanks for the pm!
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome Chapter

Maan's feelings for his Snow White has not changed once
Geet needs help with her assignments and Brij has to go to office so takes Geet to
Maan and there Maan is really happy in helping Geet
wow he even braided her hair and when she fell asleep on the floor he takes her in his arms
and that's when Brij also arrives but he did not like it at all
he explains Maan though they are close friends but he cannot touch Geet
Maan must have felt disappointed and hurt too
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Feel sorry for maan. One side geet doesn't have any clue towards maan's feeling day r her and other side brij asked maan to stay away from geet.
Awesome part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Good one
Daadi instigated Brij
He saw Maan lifting Geet n placing on his bed
Though Maan decided but he felt bad the way Brij spokes to him n ids upset
Curtains are changed according to Geet's choice

Continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Brij try to asks Geet y she come quite suddenly but she lied to him pinky told Geet Maan liked hr but Geet ko usse ki baat samjh nahi ayi
Brij words hurt Maan but brij daadi manipulated hr words
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
so maan who is thinking there will be no problem in yheir alliance git shock seeing brij getting angry on him to pick geet in arms
and geet is too naive to understand his feelings
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Waiting on next chapter !

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