MG STORY BAWRA MAN PART 25,26,27- PAGE 34,35 25MAY2020 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Nice update dear
Liked it !!
Maan was confused to choose his attire for the evening. Brij made his work easier. Glad that Brij's prespective regarding Sakshi is changing and he adores Maan for his simplicity and down to earth demeanor. Maan was lost in Geet and was admiring her.
Thanks for the pm !
Update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Superb update dear plz give the next part soon
I want maan and geet meeting more frequently.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
thanks 4 da pm! terrific update! well written! loved Maan and Brij's bond! Sasha annoys Maan! Maan is waiting eagerly for Geet! he is happy seeing her! he admires Geet who is oblivious to his feelings! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Amazing pt
Maan confused in selecting his clothes fr party
Brij helped him to solve his confusion
In party all girls eye's on maan but he waiting fr his snow white
Sasha came to maan and he like always get irritate Brij came as savior and took Maan with him
Brij was in good mood he ad
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Posted: 7 years ago
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admire him as person geet also came in red gown
looking prettier maan eye's didn't leave hr side

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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 8

Maan: kuchh nahi.
Other side
Geet: Pinki mujhe yaha ajib sa lag raha hain.
Geet was looking around. She saw Maan is staring at her. To herself" Is tarah mujhe ghoor kyun rahe hai. Pata nahi kitna strange behave karte hain".
She turn toward pinki
Pinki: Kya hua ? Tu bhi Maan ko ghoor rahi hai. Main to hamesha hi kehti thi. Maan is so handsome. Sab ladkiya use hi ghoor rahi hai. Tu bhi nahi bach payi.
Geet: Bakwas mat kar Pinki.
Pinki: Waise ek baat bolu aaj tum bhi kahar dha rahi ho. Sab ladke tuze hi ghoor rahe hain.
Geet: Isliye kehti hoon jyada films mat dekha kar. Dimag kharab ho raha hai tera.
Pinki: Haa pehle to mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha tha ki mera dimag kharab ho gaya hai. Par ab main sure hun mera dimag bilkul thik hai.
Geet: Achha golu molu bata kaise?
Pinki: Wo kya hai na Veer ji ki Gudiya ji, ye jo handsome Maan hai na kisi ladki ke taraf dekhta tak nahi. Par jab se hum aaye hai na usku najar tere par hi tiki hain.
Geet: Tera dimag bilkul kharab hai ab main sure hun.
Just then Sakshi interrupted. Maan and Brij were with her.
Sakshi: Wow Geet tum Kitni beautiful lag rahi ho. Aaj samajh gayi ki tumhara bhai tumhe lekar itna protective kyun hai. Kahi koi uthakar le gaya to.
Brij: Sakshi ye kya keh rahi ho. Jo man karta hai wo bol deti ho. Gudiya kya soch rahi hogi. Meri masoom Gudiya
Maan: Tarif hi to kar rahi hain. Really Geet you are looking beautiful.
Brij: Tu bhi Maan.
Maan: Sorry Brij.
Brij: Dont say sorry. Bas yaad rakh tu meri side hain.
Maan: To Himself" Teri hi side rahunga. Geet ke pas jo rehna hain. Brij ki Gudiya. Koi itna jyada protective kaise ho sakta hai. Aur snowwhite wo bhi Veer ji Veerji. Pyar na jane kya kya karwane par majbur kar deta hai"
Brij: Maan...
Maan: Haa Teri hi side hun.
Brij: My best friend.
Sakshi: Ho gaya chalo ab dance start hone wala hai.
Chalo apne apne corner par khade raho.
Brij was warning Sakshi through eyes.
Sakshi went towards hosts and said something in ears.
Then come to Maan. Said to him
Sakshi: Main jaanti hun Maan tum Geet ke sath dance karna chahte ho. Box me itne sare naam hai. Main guarantee to nahi le sakti to dekho maine kya kar diya hain
Maan: Kuchh gadbad nahi ki na tumne
Sakshi: Khud hi sunlo
Then Host started.
Host: So in these boxes, one of boys and one of girls yaha sabhi years ke students ke naam hai . jinke naam aayenge unhe dance karna hain. Baki woh decide karenge unhe karna hai ya nahi back out kar sakte hai par jo do naam ham lenge unhe dance karna hi hoga. But with interesting twist. Wo do kon honge ye aap sab decide karenge.
All clapped for it.
Other Host: First we will ask two question. Conditions aisi hai ki ek question main final year students means seniors se puchhunga. Aur uska jawab Girls ko dena hain. Dusra question main first year students se puchhunga. Jiska jawab boys denge . Are you ready?
All shouted as yes.
Host: So first question for final year Girls. Who is handsome hunk in your class?
All girls shouted loudly " Maan Maan Maan"
Host : Ok ok. So we got first answer. Ab second question for first year boys. Obviously every girl is beautiful. But boys according to you
Who is looking like an angel from heaven?
All boys shouted for Geet.
Geet felt awkward.
Host: Keep quite all. Now this is surprise. Mr. Maan and Miss Geet , first couple.
Then all other started to take name cheat. At last two cheats were remaining.
Host: I think koi do log hai jinhone cheats nahi uthayi. So I will announce these names. These names are Brij and Sakshi. Please join dance floor.
Dance started.
Maan and Geet were standing in front of each other. Geet was looking nervous.
Maan: Kya hua Geet?
Geet: Kuchh nahi.
Maan: Are you sure?
Geet: Haa.
Maan: Lets start dance.
Geet was avoiding to look towards him.
Maan was aware that Geet is not comfortable. But he didnt want to miss this chance. Geet was looking every where except him. He hold her hand And other hand around her waist. Geet's other hand was on his shoulder. These action made Geet to look toward maan.
Other side
Brij: Ye tumhara hi idea tha na. Mera aur tumhara naam its not coincidence.
Sakshi: So smart boy. Ab complaint karne ka koi fayda nahi. Cause hum to waise bhi sath hi dance kar rahe hain.
Brij: Tum nahi sudhrogi.
Sakshi: Sahi kaha. Nahi sudhrungi.
Brij to himself" I know sakshi tum mujhe pasand karti ho. Par main tumhe koi umeed nahi de sakta"
Sakshi: Kaha kho gaye Brij.
Brij: gudiya ko dekh raha hun.
It was slow music . Like a doll Geet was dancing with Maan. Maan was staring to her continous. Geet was feeling uncomfortable.
Maan: Geet tum mujh se baat kyun nahi karti. Mujhe avoid kyun karti ho.
Geet: Nahi aisa kuchh nahi hain.
Maan didnt ask more. He was happy cause he is dancing with his snowwhite.
Geet remembered something" During College admission time. Geet overheard conversation of Devki, Mohinder and Rano
"Devki: Kya jaroorat hai itne kharche karne ki. Kyun itna padhna likhana shadi karke ghar ke hi kaam karne hai.
Mohinder: Maa aap bhi na.
Devki: Khair jo karna hai karo. Apni laadli se keh do ki jara sambhal ke rahe. Ab chhoti nahi rahi wo. Khas kar Brij jab Maan ke sath ho to usse bhi dur rahe. Waise bhi bohot ehsaan hai unke.
Rano: Aap ye kya bol rahi hai Maa ji meri laado aisi nahi hai.
Devki: Dekh rano maine bola na wo badi ho gayi hai. Tum log use bada nahi samjhte wo baat alag hai. Samajha do. "
Maan: Kaha kho gayi.
Geet lost balance with sudden voice of Maan. But Maan got hold , tightly holding her waist. Geet felt uncomfortable. Geet removed his hand. Tried to walk away but she felt pain in ankle.
Geet moaned in pain.
Maan: Kya hua Geet? Maan bent look her foot . I think ankle sprain hain. Maan helped her to walk. And made geet sit
Maan tried to give massage to her ankle. But Geet removed his hand.
Maan : Tumhe better feel hoga.
Geet: Nahi theek hai.
Brij saw Geet was missing. So he went to find her. Saw her with Maan.
Brij: Kya hua?
Maan: Ankle sprain.
Brij: Main Geet ko ghar le jaa raha hun. Sorry Maan.
Maan: main bhi chalta hun.
Brij: Its ok. Waise bhi thodi der me party khatam ho rahi hai. So enjoy. Sakshi aur Pinki hai. Are haa please pinki ko ghar drop kar dena.
Maan: Thik hain.
Geet left with Brij. Maan was feeling little sad as it ended like this.
Sakshi: Kya hua Maan? Brij aur Geet kaha hai?
Pinki too came .
Pinki: Di aapne Geet ko dekha kya?
Maan: Geet ko dance karte waqt ankle sprain ho gaya.
Pinki: Meri wajah se hi hua
Sakshi: aisa kyun?
Pinki: Uska mann nahi tha party me aane ka phir bhi
Sakshi: Leave it ab Games start hone wale hai. Chalo.
Maan: mujhe nahi khelna koi game
Pinki saw his expression.
Pinki: Mere sath dance karo ek baar Maan please. Abhi bhi dance floor par dance chal rahe hai
Maan: Nahi Pinki please mera mann nahi hai.
Sakshi said in low voice in his ear " Mere khayal se Pinki ke sath dance kar lo. Wo dekho kon aa raha hain."
Just then Sasha arrived
Sasha: Will you dance with me Maan?
Pinki felt sad. In her mind" Maan ke sath dance karne ka chance mila tha. dal diya rang me bhang"
Maan: Actually Me and Pinki going to dance. Lets go Pinki.
Maan and Pinki started dancing.
Maan: Pinki ek baat puchhni hai?
Pinki: Haa
Maan: Geet aise hi rehti hai kya? Chup chup jyada baat nahi karti?
Pinki: School tak to sab thik tha. Pata nahi jab se college join kiya. Jyada baate bhi nahi karti. Aaj to wo party me bhi nahi aana chahti thi.
Maan: Aisa lagta hai jaise kisi ne use kuchh keh diya ho. Pehle to Brij ke peeche veer ji veer ji karti thakti nahi thi.
Pinki: Stop Stop. Main kab se dekh rahi hun Geet ke baare me hi baat chal rahi hai.
Maan: Aisa kuchh nahi hai. Wo to Bachpan se sath hai isliye.
Pinki: Maine to kuchh kaha hi nahi. Maine kaha bola koi baat hai.
Maan: Tumhe late nahi ho raha main drop kar deta hun.
Pinki: Haa kafi der ho gayi hain.
Maan drop pinki to home. Then came back.
In KM ,
Maan went to garden first. He saw Brij was there.
Maan: Main janta tha tu yahi hoga.
Brij: Kaisi rahi party mere jane ke bad.
Maan: Boring. Tu hota to sakshi ke aur tere zagde se entertainment milta.
Brij: Maan tu bhi.
Maan: Wo sab chhod Geet ko kaisa lag raha hai?
Brij: So gayi. Jabse college jana start kiya hai, na koi jid na kuchh chup chap rehti hai jyada bate bhi nahi karti. Meri Gudiya jaise shant si ho rahi hai. Jaise kuchh chhupa rahi ho.
Maan: Mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai
Brij: Haina tumhe bhi aisa lagta hai. Mujhe Gudiya se puchhna hi hoga kya hua.
Maan: puchh lena. Filhal Der ho gayi hai. So jao. Kal fir college bhi jana hai. Good night.
Brij: Good night.
In KM,
Maan: Dadi aap ab tak jage ho.
Dadi: Haa. Jab tak aapko dekh na lu achha nahi lagta.
Maan: Ab dekh liya na so jaiye. Good night dadi.
Dadi: Good night beta.
Precap: New entry

part 9 pg 11


Edited by priyal12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks for the pm! nice update, well written! Geet looks beautiful! Maan compliments Geet and Brij protective! Geet feels uncomfortable dancing with Maan! she hurts her ankle! liked Maan's concern 4 Geet! nice that Maan danced with Pinky! admire Maan and Brij's friendship! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Maan happy that at least he get chance to dance with Geet but he confused seeing hr change behavior after Geet went with brij pinky asked Maan to dance with hr he just going to deny but sakhshi alert him about sasha and he get escape from sasha
Brij also worried about Geet behavior Maan told him to talk to hr
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Lovely Chapter

Maan finally gets a chance to be close to Geet , dancing with her though he felt her been uncomfortable but he was helpless too as he really wanted to be near her talk with her
Pinki , Brij and Maan have noticed since Geet started college she is always quiet
but Geet had heard her grandmother talking about her
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Pinky's words about Maan made Geet feel uncomfortable. Maan was lost in Geet and was admiring his snow-white whilst Brij was protective towards her. Geet was feeling uneasy to dance with Maan and wasn't much enthusiastic and eager to dance with him or with the ambiance. Liked Maan's concern for Geet and his friendship with Brij.
Nice precap!!
Hope it's a positive entry.
Thanks for the pm!
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