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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#941

Chapter 68

Every ritual was so fantastic but the Haldi was the best especially when Geet herself

ask to put on Maan he also puts haldi on her that was just special

Geet again notices that Maan is tensed during the marriage ceremony

and again she worries with some doubts but Maan is that type of a person that

does not want her to worry for anything

the entire wedding ceremony was just so beautiful

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Chapter 69

All the wedding rituals have been completed and the most difficult part

now comes , its true Maan loves Geet but his love is for his Mittu the child

the mischievous and innocent doll now having married the same its very difficult to

turn that love into a marital love where physical love also comes in

Maan was always someone that thought with his mind yes when it came to Mittu he

thought with heart but now again his mind has stronger power and its truly not easy to overcome

that and start reacting intimate with that one person that you hold heavenly pure love

and though Geet maight have knowledge of husband and wife relations taking that step

would also be very new to her

I just don't blame Maan for feeling like this at the moment

the idea of been a husband has to sink into him Geet been his wife has to be accepted by him in mind and heart

though he has accepted her as his wife the intense part of it would be difficult

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#943

Chapter 70

Maan was so scared to enter his room that when he did

hearing Geet wants to remove her dress he choked

but then the fear of a husband wife relation made him think in that manner

because even he knows his wife is so innocent and can never say things with double meaning

she is an open book for him

the morning was much different for Maan as he sees Geet sleeping on him now she totally belongs to him only , she is his wife and he has received the greatest gift been her husband

so yes maybe for a short while his desires sprung to live but then again his mind overpowered him

and this very fact is normal because its true he has always only looked at her as a child so it will take time for him to digest husband wife relations between them and that certainly does not mean he would love her less no not all , Maan was not even interested in kissing Ria and she was almost his age

so this hesitation that he has is fine

oh Mohit finds every chance to tease Geet but that again is great

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#944

Chapter 71

Its this liveliness and mischievousness of Geet that I love so much

she does get it right to always make Sasha such a fool

and Maan he knew well that Geet will play Sasha it seems when it comes to

Geet even in the office his persona changes into a tease

Saumya was shocked with Geet but Geet explains her and she understand and realizes

that soon Maan will shed his hesitations because of Geet's bubbliness

Geet totally shocked that John kisses Saumya on the lips again Geet's innocence come to front

which I totally admire

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#945

Chapter 72

Saumya advising Geet , and Geet tells her she knows that Maan loves her

it just that he has never kissed her on the lips always on her forehead

now for Geet I feel its not that she is been forward or crossing the line

she and Maan have always loved each other for her it seems easy because

she had all her romantic dreams while Maan never had that , he has to experience

everyday as it comes and yes he is slowly getting attracted to his wife the problem is

her childhood images comes before him and that makes him step away

for me even if Maan and Geet has to wait for a few months that would be fine

its Geet's curiosity that makes her want to touch on Maan's lips otherwise she too

would never think about it

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Chapter 73

Oh I just cannot get enough of this mischievous Geet

how she actually manages to do it every time making Sasha and her friends a fools

but this time she had to make both her father and her Angel bad

well maybe its good as for now Sasha will know that Geet is married and will not try and make her bad in front of Maan

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#947

The Wedding Banner was just so Beautiful

again I enjoyed reading all the chapters on this thread

and I actually don't feel bad about Maan having these hesitations

because he loves Geet no doubt about that its just that it is difficult

to split that serene love into two parts where he still holds that deep pure love for her

and has to also add physical closeness to it

Thank you once again for allowing me to read this thread again

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ns.1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#948

Awesome update 71. Lovely family moments and mohit getting scared of maan's fake anger I loved most geet's drama with sasha. It was simply hilarious yes geet is right that sasha is such a fool that she forgets everything while satisfying her false ego. Maan enjoyed a lot his mittu's melodrama. Somya wanted to know about geet's feelings but was interrupted by John. Geet gets shocked seeing John kissing Somya in front of her and now she will have so many questions running in her mind eagerly waiting to read the next part. Thanks for the password dear

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ns.1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#949

Fabulous update 72. Very well written. Geet and saumya's conversation was very interesting. I liked the way saumya made geet understand how men feel and asked her to give sometime to maan and he willl open up soon. Geet is so funny, I couldn't sstop laughing wwhen she said that she feels that she has some magnet on her forehead which was so hilarious and funnyI just loved geet's heart and mind talk and then her bold act which was caught by maan making her embarrassed loved it completely hope maan soon understands that his mittu is no more a child and has grown up into a mature young woman though very innocent, naive and naughty but she is his wife now and deserves all the rights of a wife.

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ns.1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#950

Awesome update 73. The first half was so emotional and romantic and the second half was so hilarious and entertaining geet got emotional when all the relatives were leaving and so was dadi. Loved romantic maaneet moment in their room a lotbut the icing on the cake was, geet making maan and her father the villain of her life and her perfect melodrama before the office staff specially sasha and convincing them perfectly with her false story I just enjoyed reading it and couldn't stop laughing till the end very well written

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