Mortal Promises - Maaneet FF MG Maan Geet!#T1*|[T6 opened]

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Emotional part.

Maan pleadrd for forgiveness. Geet in anger had asked him to forget everything.

Both are hurt.

Eager to read the next part.

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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Oh shit
In jealousy wat did geet do??
Hopefully all ll be better
Poor maan
Geet is so insensitive !!!
Can't she see the luv !!!!
Me sad !!!
Pls unite them again
WIting for next

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#93

aww that's so sad
both are crying
geet not able to trust maan
and said wrong thing
now maan totally broke down

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Abhi ye kya hogaya.
Geet apne jelousy aur insecurities me kya keh gayi 😲
Maan also broke down 😭
He is hurting himself and i can't see him in pain 😔
Geet ka bhi bura haal hai
God! Give some peace of mind to both of them and solve their misundestanding...

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Would be waiting for next chapter and thanks for the pm dear 😃

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fmaaneet

@fmaaneet

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Beautiful update
Please continue soon
Waiting for next

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Abhi ye kya hogaya.
Geet apne jelousy aur insecurities me kya keh gayi 😲
Maan also broke down 😭
He is hurting himself and i can't see him in pain 😔
Geet ka bhi bura haal hai
God! Give some peace of mind to both of them and solve their misundestanding...

haan yaar, actually agar insaan 5 saal inferiority complex mein rahe wo andar se insecure ho jata hain. Aww we all love maan to the core, and i felt so bad writing this whole chapter. But msk is strong he will get together things soon. 😊
Initially this much of detailed mu was not my choice but later upon just to give the readers the idea of the dynamics of their relation I had to elaborate this mu. Since I have already said it's going to be very much lovey dovey and erotic 😳 later upon so before showing the intense sexual chemistry between them i just had to show their mindset. In that way the imagination will come much greater. Also in this whole mu process will fall in love with each other once again. 😉

Thanks for your comment, i can't reply always since my post limits. 😊

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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REEKHA

@REEKHA

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Nice update

Very is jealous. some misunderstanding

Waiting fornet update

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Their problem is one's don't know how to express
Other don't know how to make things easier between them
One is hurt
Other ones is guilty
No proper communication
Anger is their only emotion
What can they do
If they won't stop assuming wrong mean of
Other words then maybe chance