Like a fairytale NOTE PG 11

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

superb concept and chap 1 superb

really maan nerd and geet is dumping every guy who did not fit into in f her airytail story and maan and geet r friends and orphan too, intersting

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Nice who is mystery man i think its rajkumer maan is a complete nerd geet change r bf bc he is borng nt her prince charming maaneet r childhood friends nice update soon

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Surprising that maaneet r best friends. Geet dumped vikram for silly reasons. Funny. Who is this yash. Waiting for the mystery

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Maan and Geet are orphans and are very close friends

Geet seems much more bolder likes guys interested in dating

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Very disappointed with the likes...inform me if u don't like the story...I will cancel it...

Leads love story haven't started yet as I am just trying to introduce the important characters one by one to make u aware of each of them...

Ch 2 and ch 3 updated...

Comment separately...

Those who will comment , will be sent pm from next time...

Answer the questions:

Which character is playing Snow White , Prince Charming , Evil Queen , Magic Mirror, Grumpy , Doc?

I have not thought about introducing rest of the dwarves...But hopefully another important dwarf Bashful and Huntsman will be introduced...😉

Next update on Sunday...

Edited by sanghita0000 - 8 years ago

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Yaar Geeu kuch gadbad hai😛

Lag hi nahi raha I'm reading one of ur work😆

So coming to the update

Maan bakra bangaya...😆sam ki entry hogai

Kya dhasu entry mara hai na

And maan ko kiss bhi karliya🤣

I thought Geet would be there to save him but wo tho apna agla bf bananeme busy thi😉

Geet ka itna thanda reaction expect nahi kiya tha becharene and maine bhi

Okay so Vikram banda wants to take revenge

And ye yash geet ka prince charming banega!!😲

Absolutely not happening👎🏼

But Ye Yesh ka mystery still continues..

This version of snow white is quite different

And is hard to guess agee kya honevala hai

Waiting for the next!😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

And as per ur QA session

Mai fail hogai phir se😔

Mera GK bohot kharab hai😭

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Part 2
Maan asked naina to join them in game but she denied...Sam willingly came to dev and joined she selected dare...
Which dev said she had to kiss maan...Maan was scared but sam kissed him ..Geet was shocked seeing maan kissing someone...
Maan was always irked in yash presence...

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Part 3
Was yash trying to impress geet...
Vikram cornered geet ripping her fav8 book making geet angry as she dumped him...
Yash shoved vikram away seeing the crowd they too left without much fight and drama...
Sam too crazy about fairytale...Yash asked geet out to show people crazy of fairytale...