Like a fairytale NOTE PG 11

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cutical

@cutical

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

hi dear im interested n eagerly waiting for ur this story plz dont be disappointed ima big fan of ur stories its a thriller n suspense n cool uodate soon

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Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Prologue is Beautiful

the woman knows she beautiful she is aware too that many are jealous of her beauty

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Congratulations on new story

yeah its a fairtale !!!

The Prologue indicates the woman maybe she is the Queen but she seems very self obsorb in herself perhaps her beauty is everything that she possess and as she knows many admire her while others are jealous of her beauty

the manner in which her sleep was described almost felt as if someone was with her

I have no problem with any character in whichever way you use them

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Subha se lekar sham tak

Sham se lekar raat tak

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Ye doubt mujhe bhi tha k that person wasn't geet

But mere liye wo hi lead hai😆

Tho maan and geet are friends acha hai.. dono k introduction ka time tho bach gaya😛

But ye yash ka kya mystery hai?

Kya hame snow white ka revision karna hoga😔

She dumped him coz he didn't pull chair for her🤣

But by the end of the update one question stays

YASH?

Waiting for the next!

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Chapter 1

Wow this chapter started off so surprisingly unexpected as I was still thinking along the lines of the prologue but wow this is something fascinating

Maan and Geet childhood friends both orphans and they both are very close too

Geet she seems bold enough to venture and enjoy her dating game while Maan well as he puts it a nerd but something he said about his features made me think he'll be some interesting character given the chance his image and persona may come front lines

Geet is now interested in Yash and she finds him gorgeous so maybe he will be her next boyfriend

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

wonderful update! superbly wrotten! Maan n Geet r orphans n best friends! Geet is bold while Maan is a nerd! Geet broke up with Vikram n nw after Yash! update soon

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

wah eget changing boy friends here

kbhi vikram

kbhi yash

and start is very good with orphanage best friend

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Nice part...
Our geet is bindas here changing bf...
Vikram...
Yash...
She wants a fairytale end...
Yash kah kya scene hai...
Why maan feels they both r same...Wth slight changes...
Ho ho prologue kah person reveal hi nahi hua...
Waiting

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167
Nice part...
Our geet is bindas here changing bf...
Vikram...
Yash...
She wants a fairytale end...
Yash kah kya scene hai...
Why maan feels they both r same...Wth slight changes...
Ho ho prologue kah person reveal hi nahi hua...
Waiting

Prologue person represents evil queen...so u have to wait ...😉