FF: Masoom Mohabbat (Eng subs) Ch 21 posted 12/08/2018

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Mishti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: love2_soma
phans gaya maan...

lovely update...

loved it ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Thanks Soma for your comments here and on the blog.. it puts a smile on my face to see you enjoying this read 😃 Hope you have been liking the rest of it 😳

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Mishti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: custodian75
Lovely story.
The local dialect adds a rustic touch to the story.

The characters are so well defined.
Waiting for more

Thank you for appreciating the language and its authenticity.. My story is very simple and adding an urban touch to it when its not needed wouldn't have shown anything new.

They are still young and there is a lot which will happen that will redefine them more than once😳

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Mishti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Cartoon.Buff
And I thought Maan is going to be sly in his approach!

Although he succeeded in making Meer and Haider meet, I am sure he has invited trouble for both himself and Geet.

I guess now Dadimaa, who already was suspicious of Maan and his behavior around Geet, is reaffirmed that something is definitely up with both of them. Is this how Maan-Geet are going to come together? Dadima asking for Geet's hand from her parents?

Waiting to see the repercussions of Maan's plan. Continue soon please.

Maan is too naive in his own way to know of any slyness in his approach yet...

Yes the suspicion has set in but yeh toh bohot chota sa jhatka tha! abhi toh bohot aagey jaana hai! there will be more that will rock this boat much more😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: -Gemini-
Wonderful update 👏
Maaneet ka part mast tha
Maan making plans so that haider n meer meet... Geet ko dekh kar kya gaana gaya Maan ne😎
Dadi n jassi ji ko badi jatka laga hoga Maaneet ko itne paas dekh kar😃
Eagerly waiting for the next update

I know right!! Agar koi outragoeus flirt tha 90s ki films main tho woh sirf ek SRK hai! DDLJ's SRK and Kajol have a lot of influence on this young Maan and Geet...

Hope you liked the next update! sorry for the delays.. but promise now one update a week for sure!😳

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Mishti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Part 8

😆

it was hilarious, Meer se bhi jyada Haider nervous ho gaya, aur pura paani pi gaya..
and on the other side, Dadima and everyone having a jhor ka jhatka but dheerese, seeing Maan pulling Geet into a hug 😲
I am excited for the everyone's reaction now 😆

Hey Flame!

Thank you for your arduous comments on all chapters.. it gives me an insight on what you think of each progress an whether its going in the right direction that a reader may like or not like!

reaction toh zayada nahi tha..kyunki abhi bohot sare jhatke baaqi hai!😆

I really hope to see you for the rest of these chapters as well.

In terms of commenting on the blog.. I have no problem where you comment its at your convenience.. but just you commenting here...makes me really happy that you are coming back to the story.😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: .Wissam.
beautiful story

Thanks you for reading and commenting 😃Wissam! Hope you are following the recent updates...

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Mishti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: swapna.p
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..

Thanks Swapna! Really happy that you liked the update!!hope you like the upcoming ones too😃

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Mishti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
impressive update! well written! glad dadi handled the situation! liked Jassi's thinking! Geet tensed seeing Meer so distressed! she says Haider does not want to marry her! Haider tells Maan wt happened while Meer tells Geet! Maan upset at Haider! he is justified! how cld Haider tell Meer 2 say no! loved Meers's response! Feeling 4 Meer! Maan tells Geet Haider wants 2 marry Meer! Geet ecstatic! update soon

Hey Khwaish!

The one and only reader on IF, who goes back to all IF writers asking for updates and commenting on each one! 👏❤️thanks so much.. I as a newbie writer on IF really really appreciate your comments, although they are a summary of the chapters and I would love to see more of what you thought and loved more!

Hope you like the upcoming chapters, just as much !😃