FF: Masoom Mohabbat (Eng subs) Ch 21 posted 12/08/2018

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Mishti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Part 11

Daijaan came to know that Geet's excitement and eagerness for the morning walk was to make things right between Meer and Haider...I loved the ending note, the wisdom of words from Daiijaan..the masoom mohobbat ki shayari referred..Is the future scary for Geet..hope she will stand the test of times..

loved the updates..:)

You are so consistent with your comments that you put me to shame with my updates! 😆

Yes, the first ishara is here of Masoom Mohabbat. Life is very unexpected and you don't realize how or where it will take you! Geet is in for an adventure. I don't want to make this story of pure struggle and sadness.. kyunki zindagi main sab kuch milta.. thodi mohabbat bhi aur gham bhi.

I hope you like the next phase.😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

Each chapter, each character is running deep with emotions.

Your narration is such, I can visualize it all, making it all the more real and potent.

I am so glad Meera was able to offer her perspective regarding their marriage and it got Haider into thinking. Geet is right here, I feel. Haider does seem a little confused and indecisive. I sincerely hope he does not hurt Meera in the future.

I liked that Maan told Haider off when he came to know how Haider passed on his burden to Meer and asked her to refuse the marriage. Shows his maturity and thought process.

Geet is, as you put it, a younger version of Daijaan. Childlike, innocent yet smart. So pure at heart. I like all the characters, but these two are my favorite for their versatility.

Maan is already running behind Geet. Looks like their equation is going to change by the end of the wedding.

Somehow, Daijaan's words to Mohinder at the end of Chapter 11 did not augur well.

Waiting for next. Continue soon please.

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Mishti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Cartoon.Buff
Each chapter, each character is running deep with emotions.

Your narration is such, I can visualize it all, making it all the more real and potent.

I am so glad Meera was able to offer her perspective regarding their marriage and it got Haider into thinking. Geet is right here, I feel. Haider does seem a little confused and indecisive. I sincerely hope he does not hurt Meera in the future.

I liked that Maan told Haider off when he came to know how Haider passed on his burden to Meer and asked her to refuse the marriage. Shows his maturity and thought process.

Geet is, as you put it, a younger version of Daijaan. Childlike, innocent yet smart. So pure at heart. I like all the characters, but these two are my favorite for their versatility.

Maan is already running behind Geet. Looks like their equation is going to change by the end of the wedding.

Somehow, Daijaan's words to Mohinder at the end of Chapter 11 did not augur well.

Waiting for next. Continue soon please.

Thank you for your description, honestly you narrated all the characters so well in just a few words.. not sure if I can be better lol

But thank you for commenting and for keeping tied to this story. I know I am slow but I am trying to get better.

I love that you also love the same people in the story the most. Daijaan is vital for Geet just as Dadima is for Maan.

Masoom Mohabbat ka safar bohot mastana hai lekin kagaz ki kashti hai toh sambhal kar guzar na hai..

I just posted chapter 12 posted, hope you like it 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Chap 12 - astounding update! beautifully written!

admire that Jassi is more like a friend to her daughters! she is a wonderful mom! liked that Daijaan made Haider and Meer confess! great seeing Haider's restlessness to see his bride! loved the ambiance! everyone is enjoying the function! glad that dadima is impressed Jassi but who wouldn't be? Indeed Geet is a reflection of her mom! wow dadi already matchmaking!!! 😃continue soon

P.S

Happy Birthday Mishti

Hope u had a terrific day!

wishing a great year ahead! 😃

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Mishti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Chap 12 - astounding update! beautifully written!

admire that Jassi is more like a friend to her daughters! she is a wonderful mom! liked that Daijaan made Haider and Meer confess! great seeing Haider's restlessness to see his bride! loved the ambiance! everyone is enjoying the function! glad that dadima is impressed Jassi but who wouldn't be? Indeed Geet is a reflection of her mom! wow dadi already matchmaking!!! 😃continue soon

P.S

Happy Birthday Mishti

Hope u had a terrific day!

wishing a great year ahead! 😃

Awwv thank you but its not my birthday 😆 my B-date is 10th January! where did you see my birthday on IF?

Yes its true Jassi is that ideal mother whom we all wish we have and want.. everyone's ma is their fav.. hehee Dadima's mind is churning and lets see where it takes them all.