FF: Masoom Mohabbat (Eng subs) Ch 21 posted 12/08/2018 - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Thank you for all your responses and comments and most of all your patience with me.
I know I have a handful of readers here but I am thankful to all those who are giving my writing a try❤️🤗...


Chapter 9 is now posted! Please enjoy... teaser coming on the weekend and yes... pakka promise.. one chapter per week is promised from here on! I gotta get a move on!! So much needs to happen!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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impressive update! well written! glad dadi handled the situation! liked Jassi's thinking! Geet tensed seeing Meer so distressed! she says Haider does not want to marry her! Haider tells Maan wt happened while Meer tells Geet! Maan upset at Haider! he is justified! how cld Haider tell Meer 2 say no! loved Meers's response! Feeling 4 Meer! Maan tells Geet Haider wants 2 marry Meer! Geet ecstatic! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
READ ALL PARTS ONCE AGAIN
SUPERB UPDATE

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nakh5683

Cute update maan was roaming around wuh geet duppatta when geet send her sister to get her chunni litreally confiscated her sweet but maan in naughty mood refused to give chunni back so get came to take it her self maan wouldn't let go he was coming close to geet which was shocking her trying to create distance geet stamp his foot calling him dhust danav annoying maan


Thanks Nakh... I am glad you are liking this new flare of the story :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: aparna3011

read all parts today in one go

superb story
looking forward


Thanks Aparna! Really hope you are liking rest of the chapters so far😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: taahir004

Beautiful Update

Maan roaming around with Geet's duppatta and her sister Roop so determined
to get it back from him but he too only wants the returned it to the owner
Maan was totally mesmerized with Geet , her talks and her laughter but the minute she calls dhust danav he gets angry at her
waiting now to see what will happen next


Thanks Taahir 😃 for your comments... I am glad you are reading my story :)
By any chance are you a guy?! If you are then really happy to have you here reading GHSP stories like the rest of us crazy ppl who can't let go despite the years
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: vrsharma

Congrats for the new story


Thank you hope you are reading the rest of it :)😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

Chapter 7 was hilarious...
Loved sherni geet .. n dust maan
Aww cute maaneet moments

Teasing teaser
Please update soon


I am glad you Geet and Maan.. yes they fit tht sherni and Dusht stereotype but keep on reading to see new flares to their personality :)😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cartoon.Buff

Read the story in one go!


The simplicity of characters and the humble narration makes it all the more beautiful. I absolutely loved the backdrop that the story is set against. It is so fresh and interesting.

While I like all the characters, I am a little skeptical about Haider. I understand his point of view, but I sincerely hope he does not hurt Meer in the future.

Waiting to see how Maan and Geet manage to get the two of them together and before that how they themselves come together to hatch a plan.

Thanks for the story! Continue soon please.



I am so happy to read your comment because it gives me an affirmation that my writing is giving the right portrayal of the characters :)

Masoom Mohabbat hai ..abhi bohot lamba fasana hai 😳

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