FF: Masoom Mohabbat (Eng subs) Ch 21 posted 12/08/2018 - Page 4

Lovely update welcome back I almost forget about ur story so meer engagement going on and will get married in a week it's going too fast jassi also wanted her geet to get married but mohindar knows his daughter capabilities and want her to study more as for him she is too small but he loves his wife equally and doesn't stop himself from showing it jassi seeing geets talent was amazed but geet is so clumsy boy maan has a lot work ahead but I am sure her beauty will surely blow him away can't wait for next update

Nice story... Cont soon waiting for maan entry eagerly... Geet antique are cute...

Originally posted by: ChandlerBing

I have always loved a setting that is so close to real life. Your story is so beautifully crafted, so different from your previous work yet so exceptionally original and beautiful that all I could do is wonder why don't we have published authors like this, so that we can have these stories published in books, so that we can hug them close, for their sheer beauty.

Mishti, you're right it's been a couple of months and since it had been a single chapter so far, I thought the chances of me remembering the story line is slim. I was so wrong. I remember it so well, and it is all because no matter how many stories I read, this stood apart, original and native. So first of all thank you for that.

Now coming about Meera's match, I was a little concerned for her. It reminded of the scene in Dangal where a girl was getting married and Geeta and Babita were told by that friend that when given a chance to pursue something to be independent, they should do it instead of having similar fate.

I now look back at this scenario. The bride to be is nervous too alright, but she isn't resigned. She is hoping to have a better tomorrow. This shows the other side of our culture. And for some reason I want this to work for Meer. And the guy is cute too anyway, so I fervently hope Meer finds a great guy in him and would never resent or regret her decision.

Geet is wise beyond her age. What I like most about her character is despite being a tomboy more or less, she is not impulsive and a rebel for no reason. I'm glad she isn't stereotypical. I'm really glad that there is depth to her Character. Can't wait for the story to unravel. Thanks for this Mishty.

Thank you for such indepth appreciation of my small level of writing. I am filled with more vigor to write better for a reader like you. It's a simple story of life where it starts for many across the world. Whether it's the west or east. Meer's life turning point is a spinning handle for Geet's. I have recently noticed that in mainstream entertainment it mostly show the difficulties of balancing life and ambitions...which are real but so is the love and the desires behind those decisions too... Meer's life will be a learning lesson for Geet. Geet represents majority of those 15/16yrs old girls who if speared in the right direction can have thoughts and ambitions better than many older than them...

I am thankful to you for coming back and reading this story❤️. Despite it just being one chapter long for so long! However, that's about to change as things are moving forward not only in Geet's life but also mine lol!!

Making progress writing this story. I am still unsure of many turning points that are to come but I guess that's something I am learning on how to overcome that as a writer...

Keep me posted of your stories... they are a dream to read and an inspiration to write more!!

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Originally posted by: nakh5683

Lovely update welcome back I almost forget about ur story so meer engagement going on and will get married in a week it's going too fast jassi also wanted her geet to get married but mohindar knows his daughter capabilities and want her to study more as for him she is too small but he loves his wife equally and doesn't stop himself from showing it jassi seeing geets talent was amazed but geet is so clumsy boy maan has a lot work ahead but I am sure her beauty will surely blow him away can't wait for next update

Thank you for coming back and reading the story. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!!😃

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Originally posted by: priyankadwivedi

Nice story... Cont soon waiting for maan entry eagerly... Geet antique are cute...

Thank you Priyanka, Hope you enjoy Maan's entry and tomorrow will be their first Mahi Moment.😳

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

lovely update! well written! thanks 4 da pm! Meer getting engaged! Preps taking place! Mohinder doesn't want Geet to get married so soon! he praises Geet! Geet is so bubbly! update soon

Thank you for stopping by and glad you enjoyed the update... hope you get to read the next one and enjoy it just as much😃😳

Chapter 6 Preview has also been posted on the blog.Here is the link below:

Part 4 lovely update so all preparations done haidar and his family arrived mohindar happy to see haidar all grown up and turn out to be a handsome guy asma intro dadi as haidar dad friend mom with whom he does business with all were waiting for maan who is quite a flirt and really a colorful character whoever meets instantly falls in love with him let's see what happens when he sees geet for the first time

Part ,5 lovely update haidsr was running here and there he had diarrhea coz he didn't want to get married so soon but his dad was hell bent on getting him married maan laugh at his friend state but there was someone else who joined him in laughter as they heard their conversation it was geet and meer and finally maaneet meet so beautiful maan stood mesmerized by geet beauty he refused to move or look anywhere else he even had geet duppatta as she lost and masn caught it he was in trance and couldn't stop thinking about geet

bookmarked!

sorry Mishty love, just have been swamped working round the clock before my vacation 😃
I will savor it as soon as I am off...