FF: Masoom Mohabbat (Eng subs) Ch 21 posted 12/08/2018

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

I had bookmarked it, but got busy before I could start it, reading it now.
am not on blog or wordpress so commenting it here.

Part 1

that was an awesome start..the language with the mitti di khushboo, the unfolding of the characters through the simple, yet realistic conversations..the update left a pleasant feeling reading the contented Handa family.
It reminded me of another story to relate with their simple and happy life.
and the vibrant and energetic Geet, loved her reply "Kya hua agar main jal gayi kamse kam jal kar meethi toh rahungi na Amma"

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 7 years ago

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vrsharma

@vrsharma

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Congrats for the new story

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Part 2

loved the bonding of Geet, Meet and Roop..
Geet's character is lively like a flowing spring water..the words of wisdom she innocently puts through are so thoughtful and meaningful..that knack of touching the hearts with such simple words.

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Not sure, if anyone noticed but updated Chapter 7 already on 29th September!

Here is a link to catch up:

Chapter 7

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Here is a small teaser with a hint on the upcoming nokh- jokh of our Maan and Geet...

Chapter 8 teaser

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat
Not sure, if anyone noticed but updated Chapter 7 already on 29th September!
Here is a link to catch up:

Chapter 7

didn't know...thanks 4 link

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

chap 7 - fascinating update! well written! loved how u described the rituals! dadi is nice! Geet n Maan argue yet again n Meer intervenes! Haider wants 2 talk 2 Meer! Maan offers 2 arrange! love dadi! Haider teases Maan! update soon

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crazyfriends007

@crazyfriends007

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Chapter 7 was hilarious...
Loved sherni geet .. n dust maan
Aww cute maaneet moments

Teasing teaser
Please update soon

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Cartoon.Buff

@Cartoon.Buff

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Read the story in one go!

The simplicity of characters and the humble narration makes it all the more beautiful. I absolutely loved the backdrop that the story is set against. It is so fresh and interesting.

While I like all the characters, I am a little skeptical about Haider. I understand his point of view, but I sincerely hope he does not hurt Meer in the future.

Waiting to see how Maan and Geet manage to get the two of them together and before that how they themselves come together to hatch a plan.

Thanks for the story! Continue soon please.