FF: Masoom Mohabbat (Eng subs) Ch 21 posted 12/08/2018 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Cartoon.Buff

Glad Meer and Haider got married without further problems; although, a part of me is still worried for Meer. I somehow cannot trust Haider fully yet. Hope he does not hurt her in the future with his immaturity.

Dadima's wise and observant eyes did not fail to appraise Geet and realize that despite her young age and innocence, she is a very responsible and sensible girl. And looks like she is not the only one who got captivated by Geet and her charms. Her grandson reflects her thoughts. Somehow, I guess, Geet is going to meet resistance from Maan's parents, definitely his mother if not his father.

I like how you have shaped all the characters. While Daijaan, Geet and Maan are my most favorite, I am also starting to like Dadimaa. And Jassi deserves a special mention here. They way she shouldered the responsibilities of Meer's wedding is laudable. It is one thing to consider someone as their own and another to actually mean it through their actions.

I think the story is headed towards a leap. Waiting for more. Continue soon please.

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Hey Buddy!

I am already in love with this FF and have read all chappies back to back. It has characters were reading especially the leading lady. Geet is a very naughty and full of life character with understanding of life as well as relations
While Maan is typical naughty city lad but has a personality and poise while taking decisions

In this chappy I liked the conversation of Geet and Maan while Geet is feeling all emotional due to Meer's departure and Maan trying to tease her and thus divert her.

Please let me know when you update next...

Part 12

Geet did not keep it a secret and shared it with her mother..but god that both the families had been of understanding nature that with out making it a further mess, they talked and resolved to take forward the wedding soon..In between, Dadi Maa noticed Jassi and Geet for being the central pillar not only for the wedding preparations but their nature of binding everyone together.
looks like that is what she is missing in her home, there is mention of Maan's mother as well, where she could see the contrast between her and Jassi.
and that triggers the idea of having Geet as her grand-daughter in law.

Part 13

loved the exchange of words between Maaneet..her simplicity, innocence stands outs and so the way she imagines and talks about the things in such genuine way..she talks her heart and there is no adulteration.
their talks and few exchange of meetings they had, is another reason they will remember this wedding for..hope they will meet soon.

Part 14

and soon the opportunity comes..not very soon but yes after three years, and Geet is as before, her masoomiyat did not fade away with time..loved the excitement and nervousness she felt with the news of joining Delhi University on her own merit..A proud moment for her parents, the two families are sweet and affectionate, they find happiness with all simple things and also share it with each other..liked Roop's part as well that she felt happy as well as sad that her sister will be going away..

Is Maan going to be there in the University..excited for Maaneet meeting..:)

Thank you for your comments.