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Hi,
I'm a silent reader in your FF and commenting after a long time which is something I should have done long back.. Congrats on completing half centuary..š Waiting for your 100th update asap which is too much from my side I Know .. šš
You're such a flawless writer and your writing mesmerizes people.. Kudos on that...š You should write a book and we ll be wanting more.. šSuch an awesome writer you're.. The words keep flowing as if reading a poetry. š³
Everytime I complete a chapter I wonder if it is really over or I missed something and read again to ensure that this chapter is actually over.. And wait for the next update like everyone else.
I want to read this FF continously.. Infact I'm waiting Geet to realize, some romance between Maneet, prologue to happen asap... So that there ll more intense.. Maan being Maan will never leave his little tornado whatever be the circumstances and Geet being Geet will try to run away from monster.. And how they patch up , accept their love for each other, marry and lived happily ever after.. I know I'm being too much now.. š
But seriously I love the portrayal of your character of Maan and Geet.. How one is completely perfect and other completely clumpsy.. Opposites do attract.. There wasn't any hot romances between them but even the smallest touch of them make the reader blush just like little tornado .. āŗļøThat's the power of your writing.. š
I love Ana, Kabir and every single person in this FF.. Siblings bond is something which is missing for a longtime now.. Hope Siblings share something tooš But everyone justify their roles perfectly.. Every scene in your FF is co-related as the saying "Everything happens for reason".. šEvery scene is justified now or later.. I love that so much about it.. There is no loopholes or any such questions unanswered.. š
Now coming to this part,
I loved Sarah's entry.. She came at the right point.. But no one was jealous.. Buddhu maneet.. How easily Sarah understood him.. Wish Geet was so smart... š But our Monster like the Geet who is so dumb..š How much he admired her..His wordings about Geet.. I'm waiting for something like this from Geet.. So, it was only Sarah who loved him but he didn't.. She finally understood why she wasn't the one and What Geet had that she didn't.. š³
The dance then... Geet thought to dress upto Maan's standard and in one word he complimented her..
"so are you"
He never leaves a opportunity to impress us and we get awwed like Geet.. Awaah.. how much Geet was into him.. But still can't understand.. Uff... š„±How he touched her mole and made her hiss.. She forgot to breathe.. Poor her what can she do, when she is with such a handsome hunk ..āŗļø And the rain.. Wish they danced or he dragged her into rain or she wiped his hairs.. (I know these are too much for the start.. but still this heart you know doesn't listenš)... And now he caught cold.. Geet do something now atleast like wiping his body with wet towel,etc.. āŗļø
Loved the update totally like every other update and wondered why it ended so soon... š³
Waiting for next asusual... š¤
P.S : Never stop writing.. you're blessed with it.. šš³ I will try to comment whenever possible.. šš³
With lots of love,
Sandy.
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