Darkest Desire updated Final Part on page 13 / 4-4-2017

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BikewithGirl

@MG_Love

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Hello 😃
This geet is dangerous ...she's behaving so rudely with maan..she doesn't even who's baby she's carrying 😲 one night stand
Maan is superb yaar...Mai agar maan ke jagah hoti naa geet ki ache se leti...she's pregnant n upar se drinking too :( poor baby..
Continue soon

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loveguruDD

@loveguruDD

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Interesting update

Maan is adopted by geets dad and he died

Geet is pregnant n she doesnt know the father

Geet married maan due to a will

She doesnt even want the baby

Geet is now attracted to maan

But all their life she used to ignore him

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happydays30

@happydays30

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Good start
This Geet is tooo rude n spoiled brat
Wat will she do now
Waiting to read

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leena63

@leena63

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Amazing start
Geet is pregnent,she hated maan beyond the limits
Maan is adopted by Mr handa & is orphan so geet alwaysgh treats maan like a dirt & also called him charity case offen
Geet's baby father is unknown to her,she spend nights with any man
Maan marrid to geet for the sake of Mr handa's will

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pop77

@pop77

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Congrats for new story..
Geet think Maan as trash or charity..She not know whom she carry baby..She is insult him every where,,I hope she listen to him sack of her baby..Maybe Meera bring Geet closer to Maan..or her desire...
Waiting for next part..

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Congrats for new story

Superb start

geet is so rude to maan

maaneet got married

geet is pregnant but she doesnt know who the father is

i think its maan

geet feels something when she sees meera and maan together

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Really awesome buddy ⭐️

Loved it

Geet is a rich spoiled brat and is now mrrd reluctantly to Maan who seems to worry bout him

Shes hating being mrrd to him and is always insulting him

Is she feeling J seeing him smiling with another girl

cont soon

Thanks fr d pm 😃

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anu_lv_mg

@anu_lv_mg

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

You r jux rockstar of r #Maneetzworld it was so killer start please keep updating new parts of this ff . It is so dark desire type of ff the one I love the one I njoy the most

Loveeeu so much for such a nice ff "

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piyabulsara

@piyabulsara

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Great update
Geet n maan marriage because of father
She is always rude n taunt him
She is pregnant

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Kshitija

@krndr

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Hi Richa brilliant start to the OS

Perfectly written

I miss reading your superb stories now a days but cant help it life has become too busy

Logged in after longtime and came across this beautifully promising piece of work from you as always

Hopefully I will get time to read it all

Loved the concept of a decent Maan and a spoilt rich bratty Geet

That word Charity Case reminds me of Tia from Remix one of the first StarOne show

Maan is such a nice person even after continuously being insulted by Geet he is concerned for Geet and her unborn baby which is not his

I think Maan somewhere loved Geet since long but she always hated him

Geet who cant stand Maan has fallen for her desires seeing Maan's well sculpted body and is jealous of seeing him talking calmly with Meera and smiling too

Wonder what Geet will do now

Hoping to read further