KASHMAKASH / updating today/ 6th Jan 2018/ note page 34 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Part 2 @3

Amazing written
You wrote maan emotion so we'll
It's super
He was in guilt
Meet with each other first time
He told her false story about their marriage how calculativly he told her about their marriage super msk
Geet accepted him
But question is how dev came in picture when she love maan
Did he meet her as maan
Or something else story
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Ch 3

Emotional part. Maan narrated a story to Geet and she believed it but Maan is still in confusion and doubts about many things. Knowing Dev and now knowing Geet's values and beliefs, he is surprised at the events and is finding it hard to believe. He is ready to accept Geet as his wife but with the fear that he will lose everything when she gains her memry or Dev gets better. waiting for next. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Loved the update
Maan is worried about his family
Now he tells her a story about marriage
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Nice update dear nurse came and told Mann that Geet is feeling alone and scare not finding any one mann goes to Geet room and try to make her feel that he is there for her
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Nice update dear Mann told the story of there life with lies to make her believe on him or it will threat of her and baby life so he make of the story by what he got to know from daddimaa
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Hi Sonia
Congrats for new start..I started reading this with hope that u will complete it answer will not leave it hanging in mid ...
Nice concept...
The girl ma'am rejected once is now going to be his wife ...geet is pregnant and of course the child is if maan ..something must had happened when he was in himachal.dev must be aware of it but can't help as he is in coma...
Maan decided to marry geet but he is in kasmakash..
Thanks for link and update
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
@ part 2
NYC update dear
Loved it!!
Maan was feeling emotional and was in turmoil
He was regretting his decision of rejecting Geet for Sameera
Geet was scared to be left alone in her care unit
Geet is naive and innocent demeanor made him to think about dadima's words
Geet was scared abt Brij's reaction too
Maan was wondering how she got pregnant without wedlock if she holds such respect and high moral values
Maan assures Geet that he will stay besides her and was consoling her
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Part 2
Awesome update dear..
Maan was very tensed about his family sitting in hospital corridor..
Nurse came to maan & told him to go near geet because she needed family..
After a lot of hesitation went there..
He saw geet & felt bad for her..
They talked a little..
Loved the update very much..
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@ part 3
NYC update dear
Loved it!!
Maan was emotionally draining thyself with the turn of events
He knit up his own story to gain geet's confidence and trust abt them being married
His self crafted story convinced geet but alas she was in dilemma as she couldn't recall her past
Maan was drowning thyself in gulit for lying to geet though it was for geet's benefit and to stable her life in this society from pin pointing her
He is ready to accept Geet as his wife but not sure abt his future with her
He was in kashmakash and held thyself responsible for turn of events
Can't blame maan for the happenings for their life !! Life is uncertain and each page of life holds a mystery to unlock !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update

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