KASHMAKASH / updating today/ 6th Jan 2018/ note page 34 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2 lovely update maan was lost in his thoughts thinking abt his life when nurse inform him that geet gained concious he knew he has to do what his Dadi was saying as he saw geet all oriented confused and yet so innocent he realized her pain geet though knew abt her memory loss still somewhere aware of maans rejection she was shocked to see maan also deathly scared of brij maan smiled at her innocent question calming and consoling her as she was trying to remember parts of her life that she has forgotten
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! Chap 2 - wonderful update! superbly written! Maan's thoughts well portrayed! Geet is so innocent! She is scared! Maan tries 2 make her feel comfortable! she explains she is scared of Brij as he will b upset as she is nt at home! Maan wonders hw she gt pregnnat if she has such high morals! Maan assures Geet!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm, Chap 3 -marvelous update! well written! Maan's dilemma n Geet's confusion well portrayed! Maan consoles Geet! she is full of questions! she lost her memory n needs some answers! Maan manipulates the truth a bit! Geet skeptical n questions further! Maan answers as best as he can! he promises nt to leave her! Its hard 4 him to lie to her bt he is helpless! Is Maan the father? update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3 cute update maan was contemplating how to lie to geet he wasn't good at making stories bit for her health sake he has to he told her how he wasn't ready to be married but Dadi was hell bent on making geet her bahi so on pretext of making him engaged to geet she decided to get him married he kind of blamed brij maan was enjoying geets cute gussa how brij is controlling he told how secretly they got married and eventually fell in love geet was happy and blindly trusted maan who was feeling guilty bnut he was having hard time believing that geet who madly loved him could become pregnant with his brother baby he did felt guilty for ruing her life
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great part. So maan was worried for his family. He was regretting for his wrong choice. Suddenly a nurse informed him about geet being got her conscious back. She was feeling alone and scared so she asked him to meet her once. Maan was reluctant as somewhere he is the reason of her devastated condition. But anyhow he entered in the room and was in awe seeing the beauty sitting in the room. Maan was confused how to calm her. But finally he consoled her and made her calm by making a fake story. He was saying whatever coming in his mind and finally he made geet believe that they are married. Geet was happy hearing this as it was her dream to be maan's wife. After knowing about their marriage, geet hugged maan. Maan also hugged her back to sooth her and also make her believe on his story.
I am agree with maan about one thing. When geet was in love with maan then how she fell for dev within a month and got pregnant. Waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb update
maan told her fake story about their marriage n geet get convince
maan is really regrating his past action which push geet in this condition
but now he determind to make geet's life happy
geet is very happy knowing she married to maan as it was her dream
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wellcom back
superb pts
pt2
maan is felling guilty
that his one wrong move destroy innocent life
geet come to conscious
but poor girl is so sceard
pt 3
if geet is in love with maan so much
then how she is become pragnt with dav child
why I fell some think wrong happen with geet
and brij is responsible of every think
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 2 superb
maan is ready help geet
geet lost her two years memory but not maan
maan is trying comfort and stand by her give her support
and pour her fear infront of him how her bril veerj will treat her if he came know she is with male
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update...
geet blindly trust on maan...
maan feeling guilty that he told geet fake story...she lost her memory...
maan is helpless...he is going through hard time...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 3 superb
maan told how they met and how dadi got them married after alot of dram by brij and poor geet think its all true and maan is feeling horrible thinking he once again cheating her by telling lies about them

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