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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#961

Very touchy topic.
. Are you talking about incessant love... Very touchy beside I don't yink any one can offend bcoz in my pocket as a reader I m not thinking them as brother and sister even they are related too... So don't worry

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#962

Lovely story.
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Till now you were building the suspense very well I really liked the way you portrayed the insecurities of Sameera and dev a very new and different kind of story...

Liked the way maan care about geet and their inclination towards each other...

After this I don't think I will be able to read

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#963

I was having the hint that they were not the sibling not the cousins glad I stick to this ff

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#964

Superb updates.

Sorry for late reading.

Thanks for pm.

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#965

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar
Very touchy topic.
. Are you talking about incessant love... Very touchy beside I don't yink any one can offend bcoz in my pocket as a reader I m not thinking them as brother and sister even they are related too... So don't worry

Thank u buddy 😃😃

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#966

Originally posted by: kabslocks
Superb updates.
Sorry for late reading.
Thanks for pm.

Its okay buddy

thanks 😃😃

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#967

Originally posted by: jyoti06
Reopened on request

Thank you😃😃

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

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Posted: 7 years ago

#968

Parts 1-5

Maan and Geet are brother and sister she has been separated from her family when she was little

but was Geet's mom and Maan's dad married , something feels so off

Geet has been abused by her foster brother and he also made videos on her

she is intelligent but has no friends maybe she is withdrawn because of all the abuse

when Maan finds her he is calm treats her well but the day he started pampering her taking her for

a makeover Geet feel strange with his stares and I can't understand why a brother would stare his sister even at times his talk or a statement makes me believe he is hising something

Yash too as he believes Maan is happy after years but then why would Yash always talk about boyfriend or Geet going away is he trying to make Maan jealous this is something I'm not understanding maybe Maan is not hising anything Geet is really his sister

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#969

Parts 6-7

Maan and Geet are getting along so well and now he is just like an older brother

maybe it was just me reading too much into nothing

Dev he really likes Geet and because of him Geet is also doing sports now thats great

Maan and Geet celebrating as family and went out for dinner

nice to see that they even spoke about Sameera and Dev too

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#970

Parts 8-11

Sameera because she wants to spend time with Maan decides to abduct Dev so that Geet and Maan join them well at least both Dev and Geet enjoyed themselves though Dev's words did hurt Geet but both sorted that out and came closer too

why is it that both Yash and Sameera words about Geet to Maan means something different

as if they are not siblings

Maan had to spend the night in Sameera's hotel while Geet baked a cake for him and waited for him too