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ja1970

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Nice update. Maan clears Geets misunderstanding that she was repaying loans taken by Maan. Looks like someone who knows her very well was troubling her.

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#92

superb one
loving maans side of story..finally the misunderstanding is cleared abt the loan..poor geet was suffering soo much for nothing coz maan didnt took any loan..
dev n vicky sounds confusing to me for now
loved the update

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angeldream14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Geet is still scared that who ever did so much to torture her will come back to get her

but Geet was weak not Mrs. khurana

status change had build a fortress ard her

never judge someone by their appearance sweeter looks can be d cause of ur destruction n meanest can be cause of ur salvation

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Superb update
Maan clear misunderstanding about loan n I am confused about dev

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update, well written! Maan clears that he didnt take the loan! Maan's twin bro come there! Geet meets Dev n Yash! she fears Dev! Maan worried abt Geet! update soon

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Opps sorry got busy with guest
Ok geet nai kabhi loan liya hi nahi

Wha5ttt5ttt
Thud
Aaa
Omg shark told her it's maan loan she is his guaranter without seeing any proves or paper she was giving them money they are such a ________
Maan brothers came to meet him
They are genuine person or vilan
Who was playing with their lives
Is Radha behind it
Coz she related with sharks
Ek din mein shock Diya digest karna mushkil Hai

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zida

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

nic pt
maan clear geet misundersding
maan have two brother
is DAV is positv cr

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xAishuuux

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Elite

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#99

If I'm not commenting for this story tonight then I swear I'll disappear... 🤔

Edited by Aishuuu. - 8 years ago

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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Part 1

WOW... *heart eyes* Lovely flashbacks. 😳😳😳 I love Maan's personality here! 😳 He is right about being angry after facing such situations... one cannot have that much patience... 😆 He must be so tired of all those girls who try to approach him because of his fame, money or looks and who think they can get the job with ONS and then destroy him. Love the fact about Maan's attitude... he is smart and knows his stuff, his needs are his needs and his business is his business - he is never mixing them. 😉 Usually, some business men are into this kind of things especially because their lives lack something called love or because the office preasure tends to get worse. Until they find it they are gonna kill their time jumping from one bed to another. But I find Maan so different... 😳 He is not taking their "requests" seriously and actually hates them. 😆 As I feel every story is incomplete without Adi, I'm glad we have him here too in the flashbacks and all... 😆 thanks for including him 🤗 his thoughts are gonna be my haven when I read about Maan and his wrong doings and things that make me go mad <3
As expected, Maan's world changes once again when he notices Geet is there. She must be such a different girl naa... different is what makes men crazy 😉 :P They love too much or hate too much... 😆 This whole part was all about his different shades (OMG, as soon as I typed "shades" the "I don't wanna live forever" song came up on my TV playlist, I can't focus 😆 the lyrics😭🥺 Okay... it's done so I can continue writing 😆)... the feelings about the marriage are so strong here, I must say ❤️ I love the whole idea of Maan taking care of Geet and I can totally understand his possessive side... I feel like patting him on the shoulder and tell him that everything is gonna be alright in the end. 😆 the thing about money is also very true... :) I think you managed to convey it with so much power that even the ones who don't usually agree to it will have to ☺️
Okay... keeping this short as I get it baby, okay? 😆😆 relax... 😳 This part covering Maan's guilt is so powerful and touching and you're so right, one would totally get to know Maan better after reading this part ❤️ The mixed feelings are so catchy, interesting and intense and him repenting is the only way to choose right now 💔 You did full justice to this part, oh My!! I feel like reading it again and again... I love how she is the only light in his life the pain and fear of losing her makes his unable to reveal his dark past ❤️ this must be the main reason. This would mean taking away the only light he has... Men's attitude is usually linked to their past or childhood and this reflects in their behaviour with the woman they love... :) would love to write more but not! :))
Wow 😲 Their conversation seems to help a lot in revealing precious information about the past... can't wait to find it out... IF YOU LET ME 😉😳 I need to keep my tissue paper next to me while reading updates baby... I shoud have taken it for this one too, I'm a fool...
Now give me my beloved PW for the second part... 🥺😆

Edited by Aishuuu. - 8 years ago

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