SS~Sharks Of My Life~ THREAD 2 ~ INDEX updated ~ Completed ~ - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update
again a sad past
but happy that they are again together now she is pregnant
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Can we expect an epilogue ? 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic Chapters

Maan and Geet do love each other deeply and she made a plan to get Maan in front of her while Adi helped telling Maan its Divorce papers only for Geet to show him its blank papers
between both there is so much pain and I think its also the fact that people played with them as they were very young their relationship or marriage was strainous and this made a gap to allow mishaps to happen to them
Geet pregnant but is she in shock while Maan scared
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Part 6 :
Goshh !! one nasty family she has ...How can a father hate his daughter, how can a parent loathe his own blood, its sad but true these people do exist...
She transferred her savings to excuse on the name of brother 😡, she literally buried her dreams
And Maan too leaves no stone unturned to insult her
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Part 7 :
"serves you right : says maan " 😡 Me: take your ass outta here, she already has lots of problems 🤪
" Marry me ", yeah man thats only good thing u said in 7 chapters 😆
" i will marry you " it is supposed to be happy confession but he coerced her into this :P
marrying again ? 😉
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Part 8 :

its sad that they once loved and cared for each other and now she despise his presence :P
thats the problem with most of the people, in making their own career they tend to forget the ones waiting for their one call, one smile ( me getting senti pheww ) haha ... i just read tuesdays with morrie , ussi ka asar ha 🤣

Maan : you are maid here ... yeah right, but why your ass is burning with jealousy then :P ... she can confess her love to anyone :P
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Chapter 9 :

Goshh this seriously is not tolerable, so much debt and an abusive husband above that :P ... ( i am reviewing the parts with all i feel 😆 And when i curse its for characters, not your writing 😉 okay? okay... good!!! )
Yeah!! when she wakes up she will kick your stupid butt so you, my boy , have your time when she is asleep :P
He accepts her as his wife oh so lovingly in front of doctor :P but he never stops his banter in frotn of her

she married you but she cant have anything personal stupid man...
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Part 10 :
She is in hard phase of her life 😳 i feel for her 😒 , you really expressed their emotions so well 👏
He raped her 👎🏼 this is not justified however situation you are in 😡 .. and then he expects her to understand him , go to hell man 🤬 you dont deserve her sight too ... ( i am rude, sorry but no sorry :P )
thats the problem , most of the people think sorry is enough :P its not , it can't heal anything...


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Part 11 :
she asks for divorce , way to go girl ( not that i appreciate it but one should not tolerate an unpleasent marriage just for the sake of it) ..


Oh at home she isnt safe from her husband and outside other similar gender doesnt let her stay in peace :P





PS : i read intro on side , u small writer 😆 You have lot many stories in your bucket to call yourself a big writer girl 😉... aur muje b dil karta ha bas likhti jaun :P ...
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Part 12:
And at the end she has feelings for this man :( , the ruthless beast of a man has her heart ...
she wants to punish him but doesn't want him to leave her. she couldnt see him in trouble .
Oh he calls her angel 😈 this munda is coming back slowly ...
Now she demands divorce for every line he throws at her ... 👏

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