SS~Sharks Of My Life~ THREAD 2 ~ INDEX updated ~ Completed ~ - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 15

There is so much cuddling in this update, I'm feeling jealous now 😆😆
Fabulous update and to be honest wanted more of this story but I do get you baby... must be so hard to end a story, especially this kind of stories in which you always put your 100% ❤️ I am proud of you and must say you are so so talented... 😳 Do make us happy with more and more of your work, always here to acknowledge it 🤗🤗
Just love how both of them are trying so hard to refrain themselves from things that will make heaven hate them 😆🤪 At the same time, I totally appreciate the intensity of both of them and the sensible approach which I think is very important for the build up of the story. ❤️ They have such an unexpected and unique aura... subtle touch of everything, not too much or too less. Well balanced
I love the punishment part and all the dialogues were just so apt and so on point for this situation... 😆😆 At this point, I am feeling so sad for the poor guy 😆 He should know women are totally opposite so don't do whatever they say in their Jhansi ki rani mode 🤣 Geet being so sassy in the car was such a treat... 😉 I love all these shades that make everything better... And of course I love the possessive Maan, you see... we are quite alike. 😆 I don't know if it makes us feel alive or kills us slowly 🤣 And all those cheeks kisses were just perfect in that situation... nothing forced or over the top, makes it so very real 😳😳 The idea of him bringing her to the amusement park was so adorable, she needed it and the fact that he was looking carefree after such a long time made her happier ❤️
Another cherry on diii tophhh is - of course - the night scene when he tries making her fall asleep 😆 And the basement thing just cracked me up as it reminds me of lyrics of a song called Gold... "I miss you in the basement" 🤣🤣 Geet's desires just top the list... 😳😆☺️
Adi as always rules and tries his best even in such moments full of intensity... Gosh, he is really a precious person and Maan needs him... 😆😆
And damn, I must say the whole convo about Radha's father and that part was pure gorgeousness ❤️ The mystery you set here is #goals... couldn't stop reading
Maaneet's care for each other is overwhelming and it says everything ❤️ Hmmm I have so many mixed feelings about Geet being pregnant 😕😳 but I'm sure, whatever the end is, you are gonna do full justice to it. You are the one who knows the best how to end such a beautiful journey ❤️😉 There is an ending in part 16 but this story is gonna be special forever and special stories have no ending in people's heart ❤️ must be like a new beginning I understand what you are going through right now 🥺🥺 😭 This is such a memorable and touching story 😭😭 even if I'm nowhere close to being a writer... but I do know your work stays forever ❤️Thank you for such a heartfelt update and dedication towards your work, so glad to see people like you who are really rare baby 🤗 I love you ❤️ And and and... can't say what I wanna say now 😆😆 Keep slayin'...

See? I kept this short only for you, love 😆😆 The struggle is real 😭😆 Wanted to write for part 16 too but then I think it's already a big dose for tonight 🤣 see you next time ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was one story that had me hooked right from the very start

On the last chapter I felt that Geet didn't want to be pregnant but learning her truth and the fact that she didn't believe she could get pregnant that news was just awesome I'm also very glad that I was wrong in my thoughts
Maan even he had thought that its too early for Geet to fall pregnant asking about an abortion was just breaking but the moment he learns that Geet was shocked at the pregnancy news cause in past she was pregnant and her baby died the doctor then had told her she could never be a mother this news totally broke Maan and he believing its because of him he killed their baby but again Geet tells its because of the Handa's but I'm sure Maan would still feel guilty because he had left and Geet had no choice so she went back to the Handa's only for them to torture her

oh I really felt horrible for Maan his pain his guilt but when Adi tells him that Geet has not eaten and he tells Adi to make sure she eats and the beautiful comes when he finds at 2:ooam giving her and himself the warmth of each other
I liked that with Geet thanking Maan for making it possible that she can experience the miracle of motherhood

Thank you Kitty for such a Fantastic , Suspenseful and always Mysterious story
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Geet say she lost her baby and dr say she can't be pregnant
Maan feeling guilty he not with her
Adi make maan understand geet need him
Geet say to maan her past
Geet say maan he complete her

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Posted: 8 years ago
superb end
geet is prgnt
waooo
handas r bloody animals
thankgod maan come to know every think
but why geet take mony 4 maan
and if geet take mony then where is all mony
r u give us epo
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yeh kiya hai
Confused KAR DIYA pora
Aur stopped wrong timing
I am not comenting
Ha nai toh
But it good maaneet soon will be a parent
But Inka relationship
Woh sharks
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesum update
geet could nt believe she was pregnant ... maan took it all wrong feeling guilty ...but geet explained dr n maan about her past...n maan was blaming himself for leaving geet in that condition
geet shared her some more past suffering about how she loose her baby in past ... making maan realize dat he was nt to be blamed for her baby in past
ending ..maan asked about geet's debt ..geet answered d reason being him ...adding one more burden of guilt on him
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice ending
Maan was heartbroken n guilty by knowing geet past Adi is really a true friend handa r disgusting people
Now they r waiting for their baby
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm and pw...
Sad it's last part...
Geet lost her baby when maan left her..those handa r leeches...how can they suck geet blood for money...
Poor geet,maan was blaming himself...geet took help of adi...
Finally maan was back and geet cleared things...
Wilb wait for an epi
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg !! Geet relly went through so much ...please ese open endi g mat jo jisko samjjne me mere dimag ki band baj jaaye..
Please please epilogie to banta he joss with maan past and geet maaneet ro.ance aur ye bhi reveal kar dena k geet ne loan le k maan ko kaose business tycoon banne me help ku ..

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Posted: 8 years ago
wtng for epilogue...brij got 10 crores omg bt handas dont deserve nything...so cruel thy r...radha should know abt her father...want to knw more abt maans sufferings of those 5 years...maan is so poweful man now...he loves geet immensely then y he would not start to know about geets sufferings...after so many physical n mental traumas its really miracle that geet is still alive sound n healthy

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