SS~Sharks Of My Life~ THREAD 2 ~ INDEX updated ~ Completed ~ - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 13 :
He is all lovely dovely now .. and i love maggie too 😆
they didnt sign divorce papers 😲 , le 5 years 👏 good job ...
I am running to read next maha chapter so didnt write much hehee
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PART 14 (MAHA: when u said maha, u actually meant it :P )
Oh !! it is sad , good thing i brought tissues few days back 😭
Bullet in skull humphh its scary as hell and reminds me of something 🥺 ///
hahah , grounded for a week ..good job maan :P
all i am doing is " inhale deeply and exhale like a banshee 😆
woahh from he is so delisious to dont show me your face :P ... this chapter is full episode of emotions ...
And finally she faces her family, they dotn deserve the check though hehee :P
Divorce once again .. they are such a crazy couple :P , tip for all parting couples : please sit and sign the paper after negotiating :P ... dont depend on other's signs ...
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pART 15 :
Child or not , i love amusement parks hehee :P
han its good to read them carefree :P i would like to ride the scary rides with "someone " 😆
He got radha's father killed :o ...
Now now, has someone told her she cant be pregnant :P
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Posted: 8 years ago
LAST 😭

Umm no comments 😒

congrats on completing your story , you did well .. excellent job .. this got to your best story ... an emotional roller coaster ... loved reading it .. i am expecting an epilogue 😛
thank you for writing and double thanks for giving PWs even when i have missd so many updates 😉 ( on a side note i hate PW protected updates haha )


( I will read other stories soon, and do send PWs .. though i am not so punctual in hitting likes and posting reviews )

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Posted: 8 years ago
I just realized that i took so many posts of your thread, not that i mind it but still 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

Part 7 :

"serves you right : says maan " 😡 Me: take your ass outta here, she already has lots of problems 🤪
" Marry me ", yeah man thats only good thing u said in 7 chapters 😆
" i will marry you " it is supposed to be happy confession but he coerced her into this :P
marrying again ? 😉

😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

Chapter 9 :


Goshh this seriously is not tolerable, so much debt and an abusive husband above that :P ... ( i am reviewing the parts with all i feel 😆 And when i curse its for characters, not your writing 😉 okay? okay... good!!! )
Yeah!! when she wakes up she will kick your stupid butt so you, my boy , have your time when she is asleep :P
He accepts her as his wife oh so lovingly in front of doctor :P but he never stops his banter in frotn of her

she married you but she cant have anything personal stupid man...

Maan hai hi jhalla 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12


Part 11 :
she asks for divorce , way to go girl ( not that i appreciate it but one should not tolerate an unpleasent marriage just for the sake of it) ..


Oh at home she isnt safe from her husband and outside other similar gender doesnt let her stay in peace :P





PS : i read intro on side , u small writer 😆 You have lot many stories in your bucket to call yourself a big writer girl 😉... aur muje b dil karta ha bas likhti jaun :P ...

likho and links send karo 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

pART 15 :

Child or not , i love amusement parks hehee :P
han its good to read them carefree :P i would like to ride the scary rides with "someone " 😆
He got radha's father killed :o ...
Now now, has someone told her she cant be pregnant :P

me too ditto, i dont want to go with group but that someone i hope my PC will be carefree and fun loving otherwise i am 🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

I just realized that i took so many posts of your thread, not that i mind it but still 😆

me too 😆😆 and you will get pms 😆😆

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